模作文(平时最喜欢去的地方).ppt

1、描述（description） 地理位置（location） 环境（environment） 硬件（hardware） 景象（scene） 2、阐述理由（reasons） What attracts you to go there? What can you gain by going there?,Good Topics: Library Museum Cinema Park Supermarket Book-store Coffee bar Countryside Beach ,Broken Topics: Home School New York ,Topic & Structure:,Beginning:,1. 由社会需求引入话题： With the fast pace of life, people are more and more concerned about their own interval well-being, thus they flood into books. So it is with me. I received a library card for Shanghai Library as a gift on my 12th birthday party, and from then on it has become a shelter for my spirit. 2. 巧设情景，自然引入： Believe it or not, if you want to find me after class, go straight to the school library crossing the teaching buildings. Never will you overreach me there, where I can gain comfort, peace and refreshment. （by 高三7 徐楠）,3. 运用比喻，生动直观： That place is like a thick forestthe moment you step into it, a journey of learning and adventuring begins. That place is like an energy stationmy life battery will be fully charged to face various challenges. （by 高三7 高妍沁） 4. 适当描写，切入正题： Piled with various books from literature to military, full of young people who thirst for knowledge, equipped with computers and air-conditioners, the library is where I like to stay most! （by 高三7 姚霁霏）,Description & Reasons:,As Im here, I feel it like my home. Almost various books are agreeable to my taste. The library is a quite place, which provides me with freedom from annoying noises. Without putting on a fake mask, smiling from the bottom of my heart, I am making a trip in a world of knowledge with my beloved silent friends, books. The books in the library grant me the wings to fly in the sky and enjoy the fresh air. I can learn what I cant gain from class. If I just concentrate on the knowledge my teachers give me, my comprehensive level will be limited. A wide range of scientific phenomena and literatures are concealed in books, waiting for me.,Description & Reasons:,5. I can travel around the whole world even the entire universe with the thrilling excitement of human culture, civilization and space exploration touching my heart. I can talk to the most respectable wave-riders including great empires, poets and scientists in the long course of human history. 6. Library provides me with a relaxing environment to study and to think, quiet and comfortable. So does it allow me to be exposed to a large variety of study materials which will contribute a lot to my study efficiency. 7. It will never be too hot or too cold in the library whatever weather it is outside, since the air-conditioners are always available.,Ending:,1. 先抑后扬，由他人观点反衬自己观点： Someone may cast doubt on my opinion of spending more time in library since they think its time enjoy the life for teenagers. But the conclusion I can draw is that library will let my thought free and its my favorite harbor to have a rest. 2. 发出号召和呼吁，适当抒情： Since a library is so helpful and attractive, why not go to the library with me to study and read? You are sure to attain a lot there! （by 高三7 姚霁霏） What a noble place library is! Walk into it and collect the treasure of knowledge in this splendid palace. （by 高三7 高妍沁）,Sample 1 Library:,My favorite place to go on weekends or in holidays is the small but delicate library in my town. It is located in the center of the town but hide itself in the magnificent buildings like a quiet and shy girl. A square table with six wooden chairs await readers to sit down and step into the palace of knowledge. The four long rows of book-selves are like hidden riches for me to uncover. One of the practical benefits of staying in the library is that it is air-conditioned in summer, which makes its readers easily absorbed in books while forgetting the surroundings and even themselves. Besides, acquiring profound knowledge and various thoughts from the books refreshes my outlook on life. In addition, the staff offering help there usually greet me with casual words, creating a harmonious and peaceful environment. With a huge supply of knowledge, my little library is the spiritual garden in my life. （by 高三7 钟兆怡）,Sample 2 Supermarket:,When it comes to the place I like to go most, the first word occurs to me is SUPERMARKET. I go shopping in the supermarket near my home every week so frequently that I am familiar with every detail of it, even the position of each product. It has five storeys, each of which supplies one category of goods. For example, clothes, bags and shoes are displayed on the first floor while you can step onto second floor for electric appliances. In addition, the style of decoration in the supermarket is relaxing and comforting with the walls painted in warm colors, which is sure to create a free and pleasing shopping environment. The key reason why I like the supermarket is that Im crazy about eating. Shopping in the supermarket gives me the opportunity to taste whatever is delicious. As long as I notice new sort of food on shelf, I must take it home and have a try despite the consequence of being fat. Supermarket is not only a place with daily necessities, but also a good shelter to relax myself from hard work. So follow me. Dont hesitate! （by 高三7 奚刘俐）,Sample 3 Park:,Everyone has a paradise in his heart a place he is most fond of. There is no exception with me. Relaxing myself in a little beautiful park near my home is my daily routine. Walking along the path in the park, I am always fascinated by the rosy bloom of the wild flowers, the shining ripples in the flowing brook and the new buds on branches. Around me are the old dancing, singing and chatting happily, smoothing the wrinkles in my heart. One thing is for sure there are ups and downs in everyones life. Every time fears and doubts strike me and my mind is flooded with conflicts, I will choose to take a walk in the park without hesitation. The charming scenery and harmonious environment there sow the seeds of hope into my heart. Being surrounded in such a wonderland, I have the faith in being a dreamer, and firmly believe the world always makes way for the dreamer! （by 高三7 丁诗怡）,Sample 4 Grandpas office:,I live with my grandparents in a small house. It is such a tiny place that I have no room of my own. In order to provide me with a good study atmosphere, grandpa let me to study in his office after I return from school, which is my favorite place to go to every day. The office is not big but quiet. The first shoots of a potted plant are appearing with the coming of spring. There are only two sofa and one desk in the office, but to me all these are enough for thinking, reflecting and studying. With the yellow lamplight beaming every formula and word on my book, I can be completely absorbed in my work. Nothing will bother me. In the daytime, grandpa is busy with his work there, never forgetting to clean the office before he leaves. At night, when I enter the office, several desserts and fruits left on the desk by grandpa always come into my view first. The green plants, soft light, delicious snacks as well as grandpas deep love accompany me to face every challenge in every clear and moonless night. Grandpas office is a place to show his care for me, and to put my heart in. （by 高三2 沈家佳）,Sample 5 Countryside:,The golden sunshine filters through the thin fog, releasing its warmth and vigor to the ground. In return for this, trees wave their branches slightly with the wind while birds are singi