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基础写作指导 议论文观点对立,以下是你班就“高三学生是否需要吃补品来保持健康”进行讨论的主要内容。,写作内容： 1.讨论的时间、地点及主题 2.讨论的基本情况 要求：只能用5个句子表达全部内容,一、写作特点： 1、对立观点式议论文 2、时态 3、人称：常用第三人称 they，但给 自己的观点时，一般用第一人称 I 。,二、对立观点式 （一）开头：点出社会现象或讨论问题。 （二）正文：对立观点 1、有人认为X 是好事，赞成X， 为什么？ 2、有人认为X 是坏事，反对X， 为什么？ (三)*、结尾：我的看法。,the structure of the article,topic sentence,for the opinion,against the opinion,ending sentence,diamond,介绍讨论的主题(开头句)：,我们举行了一场讨论，讨论内容是 We had a discussion about whether it is necessary to start learning English from childhood 我们已经作了一个调查，调查内容是学生如何选择高考志愿 Weve had a survey on how to choose their courses, majors and universities. 我写信是要告诉你我们的一场讨论，讨论内容是 We have held a discussion about whether it is good or not for a top student to share a desk with a slower student.,过渡句,Opinions are divided on this issue. Opinions are mainly divided into two groups. Different people, however, have different opinions on this matter. Different people, however, think quite differently on this matter.,在这个问题上大家意见有分歧。,主要有两种不同意见。,然而，在这件事上不同的人有不同的看法。,(二) 正文：对立观点 正面观点 1. Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X. 2. Some state that it is true that 3.They point out the fact that 4.They also argue that 5.There is no denying the fact that 6.Sixty percent of the students are for the idea. (60% of the students),进一步介绍正方观点,Whats more, we can as well as Besides, its , which ,介绍反方观点,However, of the students think On the other hand, of the students think However, others have different opinions. But of the students think Others argue that In their opinion,进一步介绍反方观点,Whats worse Whats more In addition, Besides, Plus, First, Second, Third, ,(三)*、结尾：你的观点 1 There is some truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages. 2 Personally, I consider the disadvantages before the advantages. It is high time that we thought twice before going studying abroad.,本人观点：As far as I am concerned, . (In my opinion, .; Its my opinion that) For one reason,. For another reason In a word,.,1.信息点重组-5句话 2.翻译5句话,With the College Entrance Exam coming, there is a heated debate about whether Senior 3 Students should take a lot of tonics to keep fit. There are different opinions about it. Some students think it unnecessary to take tonics, because tonics will make them put on more weight, which does harm to their health. Moreover, the parents will bring more stress to the Senior 3 students if they show too,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,much concern by offering the tonics and the price of tonics is rather high. However, some students hold the opinion that it is easy for the Senior 3 students to feel tired because of their work load, so it is good to take some tonics. They are too busy to have sports, so tonics can help refresh them. Personally, I consider doing sports is better than taking tonics.,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,作文模板1,_ had a discussion about whether_. Opinions are divided on this issue. _of the students think _ should _. _. Whats more, _. On the other hand, _ of the students think _ shouldnt _. Whats worse, _. In short, _ have not arrived at any agreement yet.,本人观点：As far as I am concerned . /(In my opinion, .; Its my opinion that), For one reason,. For another reason In a word,.,模板2 We had a heated discussion about/on . Students views/ideas/opinions on it vary/differ from person to person. Some students say / think / believe that However, others hold the view that As far as I am concerned, I am in favor of the first/second view./ I would like to .The reasons are as follows. First, Secondly, In conclusion / In a word ,模板3 There is a widespread concern over the issue that （作文题目）But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _ 观点一_. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place,原因一.Furthermore, in the second place, 原因二. So it goes without saying that观点一.,People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that观点二. In their point of view, for one thing，原因一. For another thing,原因二. Therefore, there is no doubt that观点二_. As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that观点一或二. It is not only because _, but also because _. ,词汇,句型 , 语法多样化,1.覆盖了所有的要点 2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑,要点全,连接词,如何算是一篇好文章？,1.(因为)_ his help, I finished the work at last.,Thanks to,As a result of,Owing to,Due to,因为,Because of,/with,2.More roads will have to be built with more cars, _（所以）well have less field to grow rice.,therefore,So,as a result/consequence,thus,结果,3.The rent is reasonable, _, the location is perfect. 房租很合理，另外，位置也很好。,whats more,moreover/furthermore,in addition,besides,另外(递进）,4. The young man didnt enjoy his old job. _(相反 ) he finds the new job very interesting.,On the contrary,However,转折,But/yet/while,5. _(总之), we should make good use of computer.,In general,In a word/all in all,总结,In short/brief,Generally speaking,6._(我认为) , students had better not buy a cellphone.we should spend time and money on other more important things.,As far as Im concerned,In my opinion/its my opinion that,个人观点,I think/believe,（二）、三班的同学进行了一场有关英语学习的讨论。讨论的题目是：学习英语要不要从儿童时期开始？请你根据下表中提示写一篇短文，介绍讨论的情况。,注意： 1、文章的起始句已给出； 2、只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。 3、参考词汇： 基础foundation 汉语拼音Chinese pinyin,The students of Class 3 had a discussion about whether it is necessary to start learning English from childhood. Some of them think that English learning should start from childhood as little boys and girls have a very good memory and they can learn a lot of English words by heart. This will help them lay a solid foundation,_,_,_,for their future English learning. But some hold the opinions that if they study Chinese pinyin and English at the same time, it will be very easy for them to mix them up. This will do a lot of harm not only to their Chinese learning but also to their future English learning. In short, the students have not arrived at any agreement yet.,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,五、实战演练 (一) 假设你是宋柯，最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论北京动物园是否应迁出市区。以下是你所在班级讨论的情况。请你给该报写一封信，反映讨论结果。,【写作内容】 1 包含图表中的所有内容； 2 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使 行文连贯。 【写作要求】 1、必须使用5个句子表达全部的内容； 2、信的开头和结尾已给出。 【参考词汇】 郊区 suburb; 支持 be in favour of 生活条件 living conditions 反对 be against,【评分标准】 句子结构的准确性和复杂度；信息内容的完整性和连贯性。 Dear Editor, Recently, our class have had a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city. _Yours truely, Song Ke,审题： 文体： 议论文 人称： 第三人称 时态： 一般现在时 信息组织：,1 赞成迁出。 Some of my class are in favor of the idea. 2 游客多，交通堵塞。 Large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in the traffic jams. 3 郊区环境好。 Animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs., Some of my class are in favor of the move, because they say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in the traffic jams. They also say that once moved, animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs.,_,4 反对迁出。 Other students are against the idea. 5 建于1906年，中外闻名。 Beijing Zoo, built in 1906, is well-known at home and abroad. 6 搬迁易造成动物死亡。 Moving may cause the death of the animals., However, other students are against the ideas, saying that Beijing Zoo, built in 1906, has a history of 100 years, and is well- known at home and abroad. Whats more, moving may cause the death of the animals so that it should remain where it is.,_,_,_,_,_, Some of my class are in favor of the move, because they say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in the traffic jams. They also say that once moved, animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs. However, other students are against the ideas, saying that Beijing Zoo,built in 1906, has a history of 100 years, and is well-known at home and abroad. Whats more, moving may cause the death of the animals so that it should remain where it is. To move or not, I think this is a big decision which has to be done by people in Beijing.,（二）随着广告业的发展，广告已与我们的生活息息相关。但是广告是利还是弊？在2007年4月8日，我们班分为两组，进行了讨论。请根据下面两组讨论的结果，用英语写一篇短文。 Group A 虚假广告太多，坑害消费者； 占用报刊太多的版面，浪费纸张； 占用电视、广播太多的时间； 应该取缔。,Group B 广告能指导消费，使消费者了解商品； 广告也能给人以艺术享受； 你的观点： 广告太多会使人心烦； 应当适当发展，提高质量。 【写作内容】 合理取舍提示信息； 文章要通顺、连贯。,【写作要求】 必须使用5个句子表达全部的内容； 短文的开头和结尾已给出。 【参考词汇】 更糟糕的是 whats worse； 能指导消费 direct our choices of goods 【评分标准】 句子结构的准确性和复杂度；信息内容的完整性和连贯性。,April l8th, 2007 Fine Today we had a discussion about advertisements in two groups. With the development of the economy ,advertisements have been closely connected with peoples life. But is it good or bad?,审题： 文体： 议论文 人称： 第三人称 时态： 一般现在时 信息组织：,1 虚假广告太多; Advertisements dont tell real things 2 坑害消费者； They make the customers buy things that they dont want. 3 占用报刊太多的版面，Advertisements cover much space. 4 浪费纸张； They waste a lot of paper.,5 占用电视、广播太多的时间； Advertisements take up too much time on TV and radio. 6 应该取缔。 Some people think advertisements should be stopped., Some people think advertisements should be stopped because they dont tell real things and make the customers buy things that they dont want. Whats worse, advertisements cover much space, which wastes a lot of paper, and take up too much time on TV and radio.,7 广告能指导消费; Advertisements can direct our choices of goods. 8 使消费者了解商品; They can tell the latest information about various goods and help people to make a better choice. 9 广告也能给人以艺术享受； We can enjoy the some well-done advertisements., Some other people think that advertisements can direct