高一用短文改错专讲.ppt

How to do Proof-reading 短文改错,他们为何丢分？,1. 动词的时态和语态错误 高考链接 (2012陕西高考)My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. (2008全国）Growing up is not easy. Sometimes all that is need is someone to rely on.,一. 动词形,2. 主谓不一致的错误 高考链接 1. I stayed there for one and a half hours and made sure that the girl were all right. 2. Good night and remember, you, my dear diary,is my only souvenire(纪念品) from my past life and my only friend.,3. 非谓语动词错误 高考链接 (2012新课标全国卷)Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I could make my toys to last. (2011新课标全国卷)I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hangzhou.,Solution 1. 通读全文，明确文中时态主旋律。 2. 结合语境，灵活运用时态形式。 3. 仔细审查，主谓一致。 4. 认真推敲，把握非谓语。 5. 格外审视，主动与被动。,Practice 1. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last. 2. There were a football game on TV last Saturday evening. 3. I came across a crew（工作人员） make a new film with one of my favorite actors. 4. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles（把手）.,指名词单复数形式及可数名词与不可数名词的用法错误。 1. It felt strange to travel without any luggages. 2. In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports was steady, around three per weeks. 3. Its a shame to break your words. You should mean what you say（你要说话算话）.,二. 名词数,Solution 1. 理清可数与不可数名词之间的区别与联系。 2. 记住固定词组中名词的特殊用法。 3。 根据语境辨别名词单复数。 常见的绝对不可数名词。,work/ works; experience/experiences; success/ a success,advice; news; information; weather; equipment; fun; furniture; progress,Practice 1. Dont lose hearts, you will be successful in time. 2. I need some more informations. 3. There are two girls from my course, and I plan to make friend with them.,1. 形容词和副词的误用 When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back. I got to the finish line first. I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself. 3. He has a comfortable room, a patiently nurse, and a great deal of time to read. 2. 级的混用和误用。 The doctor says he is recovering fast than expected.,三.还要注意形和副,Solution 1. 明确形容词和副词的功能。 形容词修饰名词或跟在系动词之后。 副词修饰形容词、动词或整个句子。 2. 理清短文中形容词和副词比较等级的关系。,Practice 1.And we will be happiness every day. 2.I will have a harmony family. 3.We will aware of the happiness. 4. His father looks much more happier than before. 5.He asked angry if we had finished the task. 6. Fortunate, everyone was able to escape from the burning building.,这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有现在分词、过去分词、动名词和不定式错误。 高考链接 I could not to run very fast and fell behind. Li Meng came see me every day. So I helped them going to the nearest hospital. My classmate, Joseph, is at present in hospital with a breaking leg.,四. 非谓语，细辨别,Solution 1. 纵观全文或全句， 明确句中动词所做的句子成分。 2. 系统掌握非谓语动词的句法功能。 3. 前后联系，整体把握。 Note 1. 谓语动词与非谓语动词的混用。 2.非谓语动词之间的混用。 3. 在并列结构中谓语与非谓语的误用。,Practice 1. I will have a family consists of my husband, my baby and me after ten years. 2. I think play sports and take exercise are important. 3. I will also learn to cooking. 4. Im looking forward to see what I will look like in ten years. 5. We fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. 6. I am writing to invite you to visit China and spending the summer vacation with me.,1. 人称代词、物主代词、反身代词的使用。 2. 代词指代的人或事物前后不一致的错误。 3. it作形式主语、形式宾语或指代时有缺漏。 高考链接 With the help of Katia, a roommate of me He found difficult to learn math well. After thinking for a while, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teachers office.,五.代词格， 细领悟,Solution 1. 顺藤摸瓜，理清文中代词的指代关系，注意联系上下文。 2. 系统掌握it的各种用法。 3. 准确把握不定代词在文中的正确使用。 Practice I was always learning to express me in simple English. 3. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. 4. And after many attempts, she passed her driving test and told her husband that.To celebrate, he was going to drive him over to France for a holiday.,1. 主要考查固定短语、固定介词的搭配。 2. 不及物动词带宾语时必须带介词。 3. 时间状语前有指示代词this, that 或one, next, last等修饰词时不用介词。 高考链接 There was one on particular Id really wanted. The chair is comfortable to sit. He paid a visit to his grandmother on that afternoon.,六.介词短语须关注，习惯用法要牢记。,1. 冠词a, an 和the 的用法错误。 2. 连词but, and, or, so 和although的逻辑性用法错误。 高考链接 He was right here in the front of me. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor. Practice I will teach my students in classroom. I will have grown up as a middle school students. I will become a English teacher. I came into the living room and saw one of them just go into the kitchen door but turn on the light.,七.冠词、连词常光顾,再啰嗦几句 四不改原则 1. 单词拼写不改。 2. 大小写不改。 3. 词序不改。 4. 标点符号不改。 解题步骤 1. 从语篇入手，理解文章大意。 2. 在理解大意的基础上，审查句子结构。 3. 从语法结构入手，审查句子结构。 4. 通读全文。,1. 短文改错以句为单位设置错误。每