高考英语复习循序写作层级二词靓句高赢高分——“营造亮点有一套（安排9个学案）教案（含解析）.docx

层级二 词靓句高赢高分“营造亮点”有一套(安排9个学案)阅卷时，一篇高考作文往往在1分钟内就被判定生死，大众化的词汇、平庸的表达已使长时间工作的阅卷老师产生了视觉疲劳。在词汇方面：如果一篇作文中突然出现几个与众不同、让人眼前一亮的词汇，阅卷老师的给分也绝不会吝啬；在句式方面：如果考生多运用一些并列句和复合句等高级句式，并注意句式的灵活多变，使文章读起来抑扬顿挫，让考生深厚的语言功底得以体现，阅卷老师一定会毫不犹豫地将你的作文定位于五档线。学案(一)不落俗套的亮点词汇写作最基本的要求是考查考生遣词造句的能力，遣词的原则是表达准确、地道自然、生动形象。如果考生在掌握了最基本词汇的基础上，能够将一些常用词汇进行升华，就将成为高考作文获得高分的亮点之一。一、使用亮点词汇的4种方法1“语”众不同，避免人云亦云写作时，恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。After the film, each class is supposed to have a discussion and all the students are welcome to talk and express their views about the film.After the film, each class is supposed to have a discussion and all the students are welcome to make comments and express their views about the film.(2018全国卷书面表达)I am very glad to know you are interested in Tang poems.I am more than delighted to know you are interested in Tang poems.(2017全国卷书面表达)2更新换代，避免重复写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语，要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法。The team will hold many activities, some of which will appeal to you, including many matches.The team will hold a range of activities, some of which will appeal to you, including many matches.(2017全国卷书面表达)Weve built a new experiment building beside the old one and weve also built a library where the old playground used to be.Weve built a new experiment building beside the old one and weve also set up a library where the old playground used to be.3单词与短语巧妙互用一般情况下短语优先，应多使用短语、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。但有时单词比短语更生动，可以“一词传神”。Ive decided to teach you Tang poetry in Room 101 Building 1 at 8：00 am on Wednesday, which will last two hours.Ive made up my mind to teach you Tang poetry in Room 101 Building 1 at 8：00 am on Wednesday, which will last two hours.(2017全国卷书面表达)We should try to improve ourselves through learning and prepare for the future.We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.(2015福建高考书面表达)We can look at this problem in many ways.We can view this problem in many ways.(view比look at更有“内涵”)4用高年级学到的词汇代替低年级学到的词汇为了表现自己的语言功底，吸引阅卷老师的眼球，应避免反复使用初中或小学阶段学过的词汇，尽量用高中阶段学到的词汇来代替。Second, I am trying my best to acquire the essential knowledge and skills concerning my position.Second, I am sparing no efforts to acquire the essential knowledge and skills concerning my position.(2017天津高考书面表达)I should say sorry for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.I should owe you an apology for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.(2016全国卷书面表达)二、使用亮点词汇的2点注意1注意增加亮词的“出镜率”，变消极词汇为积极词汇阅读中能认识但写作中不会用的词汇属于消极词汇，写作中能运用自如的词汇为积极词汇，也就是平常所说的“第一反应词”。积极词汇量的多少直接决定着英语作文表达水平的高低。现在很多考生的困难是，头脑中的很多词汇介于积极词汇与消极词汇之间；另外，很多背到的消极词汇如果较长时间不接触就会变成陌生词汇。因此在备考过程中，我们要做的事情就是迅速扩大消极词汇量并且保持接触的频度，力争使其变成积极词汇。很多考生作文驻足不前的一个重要原因是反复用初中学过的简单词汇，背了大量的亮词妙语而不用。这是一种懒惰的表现。建议大家在想到一个表达时，务必要想一想还有没有更好的表达方式，这就是我们平时常讲的“头脑风暴法”。例如想表达“美丽的”这个含义，大家首先想到的是“beautiful”，那么在下笔时，要想一想还有没有更出彩的表达，如“attractive”或“charming”等。再如表达“困难的”时，大家常用“difficult”，那是不是用“tough”或“challenging”更与众不同呢？2注意亮点词汇使用的场合写作时，在用词上不可随心所欲，决不能为追求“高级”而使用复杂但毫无把握的词语，也不能满篇堆积所谓的“高级”词汇，否则给人过分炫耀之嫌，得不偿失。一般来说，一篇文章能用好三五个高级词汇就可以了。另外，为能更好地“完成规定的写作任务”，减少错误，特提醒同学们在使用“高级词汇”时，一定要注意遵循“准确、恰当”的原则，并且要注意使用的场合，难词和生僻词汇并不一定就是高级词汇，例如：一大早我们买了些圣诞礼物。Early in the morning we purchased some Christmas presents.(purchased太过于书面化，改为bought更地道)三、高分必备的24个亮点词汇名词普通词汇高级词汇普通词汇高级词汇chanceopportunitychoicealternativeideaopinionpeopleindividualsresultconsequenceeffectinfluence动词havepossessreplacesubstitutebearput up withunderstandmake sense ofdeveloppromoteconsidertake into account形容词enoughadequaterichabundantproperappropriateimportantvital/significantinterestingabsorbing/appealingdifficultchallenging副词finallyeventuallyhardlybarelyimmediatelyin a flashnowadayscurrently连词sothereforeandas well as Thats why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.Thats why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better alternative.(2017北京高考书面表达)这就是为什么我认为长江之行将是一个更好的选择。In the coming three years, our school life will be difficult.In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging.在随后的三年里，我们的学校生活将会非常具有挑战性。 更多高级写作词汇请参考“附录三：写作常用的4组高级写作词汇”综合演练提能.请用高级词汇替换下列句子中的加黑部分1(2017全国卷书面表达)So, please spend some time taking a brief look at the history of the Tang Dynasty, which will help you prepare for your class.Therefore;_make_preparations_for2(2017全国卷书面表达)The craftsmen will show visitors how to cut paper into different shapes on the spot.various/a_range_of3(2016北京高考书面表达)Our class thought of the idea to make better use of used materials.came_up_with4(2016四川高考书面表达)The reasons are the following.as_follows5(2015湖南高考书面表达)At the same time, I decided to study harder rather than waste precious time on those useless things.made_up_my_mind6Developing very quickly, the Internet causes the breakdown of facetoface communication.gives_rise_to 7Developing a good habit is also very important.of_great_importance8Would you please help me to turn down the radio？do_me_a_favor9The teacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses.challenging10Well try our best to develop the traditional friendship between mote.请用高级词汇提升下面的考生作文(2019厦门一中热身训练)假如你是中学生李明，家住泉州。你的英国笔友Jason来信谈到了他的故乡London，并希望了解你家乡泉州的情况。请你用英文写一封回信。回信必须包括以下内容：1自然情况：地理位置优越、气候风景宜人等；2发展成就：经济发展迅速、城市高楼林立等；3存在问题：交通拥堵现象、空气污染问题等；4对泉州发展的看法：内容由考生自己拟定。注意：1.请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息；2可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；3词数100左右；书信格式已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：高层建筑 highrise buildingDear Jason， Yours，Li Ming考生作文Dear Jason，Im very happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city London.Now Id like to tell you something about my hometown Quanzhou.Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to live in.Its economy has been developing fast during the past ten years.New bridges and roads have been built, highrise buildings standing in many parts of the city.More and more schools and hospitals are useful for the native people.It is developing into a modern and beautiful city.But there are still some problems, such as heavy traffic in rush hours and serious air pollution, which have a bad effect on peoples daily life.I think Quanzhou should develop healthily and scientifically, so that we could have a better hometown in future.Yours，Li Ming升格作文Dear Jason，Im more_than happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city London.Now Id like to tell you something about my hometown Quanzhou.Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to live in.Its economy has been developing rapidly during the past ten years.New bridges and roads have been set_up,_highrise buildings standing in many parts of the city.An_increasing_number_of schools and hospitals are available for the native people.It is developing into a modern and attractive/charming city.However,_there are still some problems, such as heavy traffic in rush hours and severe air pollution, which have a bad influence/impact on peoples daily life.In_my_opinion/As_far_as_ I_am_concerned,_ Quanzhou should develop healthily and scientifically, so that we could have a better hometown in future.Yours，Li Ming学案(二)整齐和谐的并列句并列句是用连词把两个或两个以上的简单句连接起来，在这一句型中需要注意连接并列主语时，有些句型采取“就近原则”。类型连词并列关系(递进关系)and, both .and ., not only .but (also) ., neither .nor .转折关系but, yet, whereas选择关系or, otherwise, or else, either .or ., not .but .因果关系for, so, therefore, thus对比关系whileAfter breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze (吃草)(20186月浙江高考写作)早餐后，我去帮助蒂娜阿姨喂鸡，而我爸爸和保罗叔叔一起去把羊赶出去吃草。The team will hold a range of activities, and some worldfamous players will be invited to give lessons.(2017全国卷书面表达)球队将举行一系列活动，一些世界著名的球员会被邀请来上课。即时演练用适当的并列连词填空1(2015陕西高考书面表达)First, my English is very good and Im openminded and warmhearted, so Im getting along well with everyone.2Some choose to avoid them while others decide to deal with them.3It must have rained last night, for it is wet all over.1both .and .既又On the Internet, people can seek information about their favorite stars and buy tickets at a discount as well, which is both timesaving and economical.在互联网上，人们可以搜索他们最喜欢的明星的信息，也可以打折买票，既省时又省钱。2either .or .或者或者；不是就是If youre interested in it, you may either send an email to 123456 or sign up in person.(2017全国卷书面表达)如果你感兴趣，您可以发送电子邮件至123456或亲自报名。3neither .nor .既不也不In autumn, its neither too hot nor too cold.秋天，天气既不太热也不太冷。4not only .but (also) .不仅而且Not only will all kinds of papercutting works be on display, but also the craftsmen will show visitors how to cut paper into different shapes on the spot.(2017全国卷书面表达)不仅各种剪纸作品将展出，工匠们还会在现场向参观者展示如何将纸张裁成不同的形状。5not .but .不是，而是It is not how much we do but how much love we put into what we do that benefits our work most.对我们的工作最有益的，不是我们做了多少，而是我们把多少爱投入进去。6.while/whereas 而，却It is beneficial to some people, while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not.(2016江苏高考书面表达)这有利于一些人，然而却使他人陷入是否投票的困境。7祈使句/名词词组and/or/otherwise陈述句(1)祈使句and陈述句(祈使句相当于一个条件状语从句，and后面的句子相当于一个表示结果的主句)Keep it in mind and gradually we can gain this good learning habit and benefit from it.记住它，逐渐地我们就能养成这个好的学习习惯并从中获益。(2)名词词组and陈述句(名词词组相当于一个条件状语从句，其中常含有more, another等词)Another try, and youll achieve success.再试一次，你就会取得成功。(3)祈使句or/otherwise陈述句Hurry up, or/otherwise you will be late.快点，否则你会迟到的。(4)名词词组or/otherwise陈述句More healthy food, or youll break down sooner or later.多吃健康食品，不然你的身体迟早会垮掉。8.when .这时(1)sb.was doing sth.when .某人正在做某事，这时We were having a meeting when someone broke in.我们正在开会，这时有人闯了进来。(2)sb.was about to do sth.when .某人正要做某事，这时We were about to set off when it began to rain.我们正打算动身，突然下起了雨。(3)sb.had just done sth.when .某人刚做完某事，这时I had just finished sweeping the floor when the telephone rang.我刚刚拖完地，这时电话铃响了。(4)sb.was on the point of doing sth.when .某人正要做某事这时He was on the point of giving up when his father told him the good news.他正要放弃，这时他的父亲告诉他这个好消息。即时演练用并列句补全句子1他刚要走就有人敲门。He was on the point of leaving when_someone_knocked_at_the_door.2你不但要和他们分享你的学习经验，而且一定要向他们敞开心扉。 Not_only_should_you_share_your_study_experience_with them, but_(also) you must keep your heart open to them.3是你所说的话而不是你所做的事使你的同学感到生气。It_is_not_what_you_had_done_but_what_you_had_said that annoyed your classmates.综合演练提能.用适当的并列连词填空1(2017全国卷书面表达)Not_only will all kinds of papercutting works created by famous artists of this field be on show that day, but_(also) a lot of useful and interesting activities will be held as well.2Seize the chance, or/or_else/otherwise youll regret some day.3Give me a chance and I will give you a wonderful surprise.4The young man wanted to help the dog, but as he approached, the dog started to bark.5About 9：00 last night, I was busy preparing for my tomorrows test when suddenly loud noises came into my room.6Some people believe smoking is harmful to health while others consider it is helpful reducing working pressure.用并列句补全句子1(2017全国卷书面表达)因此，如果你努力学习的话，展览不仅可以帮助你更好地了解中国民间艺术，而且可以帮助你获得一些剪纸技巧。Therefore, the exhibition can_not_only_help_you_have_a_better_understanding_of_Chinese folk art, but_can_also_help_you_acquire some papercutting skills if you try hard to learn.2(2015四川高考)事实上，我不喜欢去，但是我害怕失去他们的友谊。In fact, I dont like to go anymore, but_Im_afraid_Ill_lose_their_friendship.3因此，从现在起，让我们不要在一些不重要的事情上浪费时间，而要经常与我们的父母进行推心置腹的谈话。So, from now on, lets not_waste_our_time_on_unimportant_things_but have a hearttoheart chat with our parents once in a while.4你必须让开路，否则卡车无法通过。You have to move out of the way or_the_truck_cannot_get_past_you.请按以下内容要点写一封电子邮件，尽可能多地使用并列句假如你是李华。某国际学生杂志邀请你在“国际交换生项目”专栏中分享你作为国际交换生的经历。请给该栏目编辑写封邮件，内容包括：1遭遇的困难；2问题的解决；3你的感想。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。Dear editor, Last year, I went to England for a student exchange programme. Yours，Li Hua参考范文：Dear editor，Last year, I went to England for a student exchange programme.Before I went, I was quite proud of my English, but everyone in England spoke so fast that I couldnt make out what they were saying.Being in a completely different culture was scaring and I even wanted to go straight back home.But things soon got better and better.The homestay family was not only very kind，but also the boy that I was staying with was keen on football, which made my stay more enjoyable and stressfree.Besides, I developed an interest in English cooking and I ate pasta and international food just as I do at home!Being an exchange student not only offers me a chance to improve my English but also makes me learn more about the foreign culture and people.The best part of all is knowing that I could cope, even in such a difficult situation.Yours，Li Hua学案(三)富有文采的状语从句状语从句主要包括时间、地点、条件、原因、让步、比较、方式、目的和结果九类从句。状语从句连词时间when, whenever, as, while, (ever) since, before, after, till, until, as soon as, hardly .when ., no sooner .than ., scarcely .when ., each time, every time, the first time, the last time, the moment, the minute, the second, the day, immediately地点where, wherever条件if, unless, providing/provided (that), supposing/suppose (that), given (that), as long as, so long as, on condition (that), in case, only if原因because, as, since, now that, seeing that, considering that, in that让步though, although, even if, even though, as, while, whatever, whoever, whenever, wherever, however, no matter疑问词， whether .or (not) .比较as, than, the same as, not so .as ., as .as .方式as if, as though, as目的in order that, so that, in case, for fear (that), lest结果so that, so .that ., such .that .Since you have long been interested in Chinese culture, I think Beijing Language and Culture University is an ideal place for you.(2018北京高考书面表达)因为你一直对中国文化感兴趣，我认为北京语言文化大学对你来说是一个理想的地方。即时演练用状语从句补全句子1(2018天津高考书面表达)如果你能成为我们组的一员，那就更好了，这样我们就可以一起工作并展示你的才华了。It cant be better if we can have you as our member, so_that_we_can_work_together_and_ show_your_talent.2(2017天津高考书面表达)虽然这些天我都在读书，但为了提高自己，我还是参加了好几个学生俱乐部。Though/Although_(I_am)_buried_in_books_these_days,_I have still joined several student clubs in order to improve myself.3(2017全国卷书面表达)由于天气越来越热，在室内学习是个好主意。As_the_weather_is_getting_hotter_and_hotter,_it is a good idea to study indoors.4(2016全国卷书面表达)我记得上次你参观我们学校时给我展示了那个主题的一些照片。I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the_last_time_you_visited_ our_school.5(2015北京高考满分作文)这是如此激动人心的活动，以至于我们都玩得非常愉快。It was such_an_exciting_activity_that we all enjoyed ourselves very much.在英语写作中，状语从句是经常使用的从句之一，因此必须学会并熟练运用这些相关句型。1as soon as/the moment/the instant/immediately/directly/instantly 一就The moment I came into the classroom, I saw the sentence on the blackboard.我一走进教室，就看到了黑板上的这个句子。2each/every time 每次，每当Every time I pass the school, I think of my first English teacher. 每当我经过那所学校，我就想起我的第一个英语老师。3the first time 第一次I thought Susan nice and friendly the first time I met her.我第一次见到苏珊就觉得她善良友好。4before在之前，还没来得及就It was a long time before I realized how silly I was at that time.很长时间之后我才意识到我当时是多么傻。5ever since 自从Ever since my friend Xiaohua entered high school two years ago, his mother has been pushing him hard in his studies.自从我的朋友小华两年前进入中学，他的妈妈一直在学习上给他施加很大的压力。6by the time 到为止，不迟于He will have learned English for ten years by the time he graduates from the university next year.到明年大学毕业为止，他已经学了10年英语了。7as/so long as 只要As/So long as youre interested in it, please send an email to 123456. (2017全国卷书面表达)如果有兴趣，请发送电子邮件到123456。8providing/provided/suppose/supposing(that) . 如果，假如Suppose he doesnt agree to help us, who should we turn to for help?假如他不同意帮助我们，我们该向谁求助？9on condition that . 在条件下；如果Well let you use the room on condition that you keep it clean and tidy. 只要你能保持干净整洁，我们可以让你使用这个房间。10not that .but that . 不是因为，而是因为I didnt accept the job, not that I am unwilling to do it, but that I am unable to.我没接受这份工作，不是因为我不愿意做，而是因为我不能做。11even if/even though 即使；尽管We still have a long way to go even if/though our project has been carried out smoothly so far.尽管我们的计划到目前为止执行得很顺利，我们仍然有很长的一段路要走。12though/although/while 虽然；尽管Though/Although busy with the lessons, I have managed to find time to hang out with my friends.(2017天津高考书面表达)虽然忙着上课，但我还是设法挤出时间和朋友们出去玩。13no matter wh ./whever无论However/No matter how far away we are, we feel close to each other.无论我们距离有多远，我们都感觉近在咫尺。14whether .or (not) . 是还是；不管，不论I have decided to take the job offer, whether it is good or bad.不管好坏，我已经决定接受这份工作邀请。15so that 以便，目的是；因此So I have been taking exercise and reading books as well as online materials about Tianjin so that I can be both physically and mentally qualified for this job.(2017天津高考书面表达)所以我一直在锻炼，阅读书籍以及关于天津的网上资料，这样我的身体和精神都能胜任这项工作。16in order that 为了In order that he can have a chance to receive university education, he