2019年高中英语Unit2TheOlympicGamesSectionⅤWriting—兴趣爱好类说明文教案（含解析）.docx

Section Writing 兴趣爱好类说明文本单元的写作话题是“描写最喜欢的运动”，在体裁上属于说明文。描写自己或他人的兴趣或爱好的一项运动时，应主要使用说明的方法，也可以穿插一些记叙和议论。写这类作文，要注意说明的语言和顺序。一、注意事项1结构：在结构上，宜采用三段式，即总分总的结构。先说明自己最喜欢的运动，然后说明最喜欢的理由，即该项运动带来的好处，最后作一个简单的总结。2时态：通常用一般现在时，具体情况具体分析，采用恰当的时态。3语言：运用生动形象、简洁明了的语言。二、基本结构1开头对某项运动的总体认识。2主体描述该项运动的运动规则，中间可适当加些议论。3结尾该项运动的好处。三、增分佳句(一)开头部分1Of all the sports, I like basketball best. 在所有的运动中，我最喜欢篮球。2Volleyball is my favorite sport. 排球是我最喜欢的运动项目。3If you ask me which sport I like best, I have to say the swimming.如果你问我最喜欢哪项运动，我必须说是游泳。4The first time I saw pingpong, I fell in love with it. 我第一次看到乒乓球运动，我就喜欢上了它。(二)主体部分1I like playing basketball because it is like our lives full of competition. 我喜欢打篮球，因为打篮球就像我们的生活一样充满了竞争。2The reason why I like jogging is that it is a moderate exercise. 我喜欢慢跑是因为它是一项温和的运动。3At the age of 10, I showed great interest in basketball. 十岁时，我就对篮球有了极大的兴趣。4Whenever I have time, I will go to the playground to practice running.我一有空就去操场上练习跑步。5Im planning to take part in a pingpong club, where I can learn a lot from others. 我打算参加一个乒乓球俱乐部，在那里我可以向别人学习许多东西。(三)结尾部分1I hope in the future I can compete in the Olympic Games as a swimmer.我希望在将来我能作为一名游泳运动员参加奥运会。2I really want to be a basketball player in the national basketball team when I grow up.当我长大后我非常想进入国家篮球队。3I become more and more stronger and healthier by playing football.通过踢足球我变得越来越强壮和健康。题目要求请根据以下要点，以“The sport I like best”为题用英语写一篇短文。1乒乓球不仅是一种运动而且还是一项艺术；2有人认为打乒乓球不用花力气，我却不这么认为；3打乒乓球时，我们需要判断球的方向，并用力把它打回去；4打乒乓球时，你还会发现球快速运动，运动员的动作也很美；5虽然我打乒乓球打得不是很好，但是我对这项运动很感兴趣，它能使我们强身健体。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。The sport I like bestOf all the sports, I like table tennis best. 第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为说明文；2确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第一人称；3确定时态：本文的主要时态应用一般现在时。二、构思开头：对乒乓球的总体认识。主体：乒乓球的运动规则。结尾：打乒乓球的好处。第二步：核心词汇想周全1not_only_.but_also_.不但而且2strength 力气；力量3judge 判断4direction 方向5hit_it_back 把它打回去6build_up_our_bodies 使我们强身健体第三步：由词扩句雏形现1我认为乒乓球不仅是一种运动而且还是一项艺术，因为它是需要力气和技巧的。I think it is a sport and an art, because it needs strength_and_skill.2有人认为打乒乓球不用花力气，我却不这么认为。Some people think that playing_table_tennis_needs_little_strength,_but I dont think so.3打乒乓球时，我们需要判断球的方向，并用力把它打回去。When we play table tennis, we should judge_the_direction_of the ball, and hit_it_back with great strength. 4一场比赛过后，如果你尽力的话你会感到很累。After one game you will_be_very_tired if you have tried your best.5打乒乓球时，你还会发现球快速运动，运动员的动作也很美。In the game, you can often find the ball moving quickly, and the players movements_are_very_beautiful.6虽然我打乒乓球打得不是很好，但是我对这项运动很感兴趣，我认为它能使我们强身健体。I cant play table tennis very well; I still show_great_interest_in_it. I think it_can_build_up_our_bodies.第四步：句式升级造亮点1用not only . but also改写句1，同时要包含一个定语从句 I_think_it_is_not_only_a_sport_but_also_an_art,_because_it_is_a_game_that_needs strength_and_skill. 2用状语从句的省略改写句3When_playing_table_tennis,_we_should_judge_the_direction_of_the_ball,_and_hit_it_back_with_great_strength.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇The sport I like bestOf all the sports, I like table tennis best. I_think_it_is_not_only_a_sport_but_also_an_art, because_it_is_a_game_that_needs_strength_and_skill.Some_people_think_that_playing_table_tennis_needs_little_strength,_but_I_dont_think_so._When_playing_table_tennis,_we_should_judge_the_direction_of_the_ball,_and_hit_it_back_with_great_strength_so_that_we_can_win_the_game._So_after_one_game_you_will_be_very_tired_if_you_have_tried_your_best._However,_as_a_sport,_I_think_it_is_more_like_an_art._In_the_game,_you_can_often_find_the_ball_moving_quickly,_and_the_players_movements_are_ve