潮阳四中英语科第一学月作文专讲.ppt

高三英语第一学月测试 写作专讲,作文是英语学习中的重点，也是难点。要想写出流畅的作文，必须多欣赏优秀范文，熟悉文章体裁，了解文章框架，形成写作套路，积累精美语言。只有记诵一定量的优秀范文，才能保证写作的流畅输出！同学们要注重错句改正及优秀句子的积累，注重优秀范文的背诵和写作，大家一定要积极参与其中，不断提高自身对英语的感悟能力和使用能力！要写出好的作文，平时必须多看范文，多分析范文。积累有用的词汇、词组和句型。每次作文评改后发回来，要及时改正所犯的错误，以后不要再犯同样的错误。好的作文必须经过千锤百炼，多练习多归纳多进步！,基础写作 【参考范文1】 Richard Avis, a British, was born on December 1st, 1974. In order to understand the meaning of successful life in different cultures, Richard, from 2011, began to seek time twins around the world. With the help of the local media, he has already found 32 time twins from 13 countries, of whom there are 17 males and 15 females. Their positions include government officials, athletes, drivers, teachers, artists and so on. Richard intends to find 40 time twins before his 40th birthday and he is going to write a book based on this experience.,【参考范文2】 Richard Avis, a British who was born on December 1st, 1974, has started to look for time twins in the world since 2011 in order to know about different meanings of successful life in different culture. He uses the local media to help himself. So far, he has found 32 people, including 17 men and 15 women from 13 countries. They are government officials, athletes, drivers, teachers and artists. He plans to find 40 time twins before his fortieth birthday and then he intends to write a book according to this experience.,“读写任务”的写作过程： 1）把握阅读材料的结构、思路、观点与意图； 2）概括阅读材料的观点（论证过程） 3）在“写作内容”的引导下写作。,在写概括的时候，不能添加自己的见解，但是要用自己的语言概括。要做到开门见山，语言简洁. 如果给的阅读材料是一个故事，应该用最简练的语言来说明故事讲述了什么，不能拖泥带水，而且要看原文是否有讲述该故事给你的启示或其中的一个道理。 如果是说明性或描述性短文,你就必须用概括的文字来说明某种现象。 如果是议论文的阅读短文,则要尽可能客观简要地转述阅读材料的观点。,第一段开头语： 1) According to the passage, we know 2) This article is mainly about 3) The writer states that 4）The passage tells us that,第二段:过渡词引出主题句-自己的观点-理由 开头用语： I do agree with the author In some way, I agree with , but This opinion sounds right but is hardly practical. It is definitely not like that. As a matter of fact, From my personal angle alone In my opinion, From my personal point of view As far as Im concerned,最后一段 : 总结句开头用语： In conclusion, In short, To make a long story short, In general, In a word, In brief, On the whole, All in all,读写任务 【参考范文1】 Oseola McCarty, an ordinary worker with a thrifty lifestyle, donated a great deal of money to a university,which aroused public attention and earned her widespread social recognition. In return, she received a sense of satisfaction and fulfillment. Virtuous and warm- hearted, the lady concerned has donated a considerable amount of saving to help college students struggling with financial difficulties, thereby motivating people at any other comer of the world to participate in this affectionate activity.,From where I stand, not only will the ladys generosity paint a very brilliant blue print for the future of those students in want of money, but also it will rekindle their faith in life by convincing them that their life goal is elevating and worth trying. Given the choice, I would make donations to those who still live under the button line of the modern living condition. Convincing argument as follows can be made to support my stance. For one thing, generous and selfless dedication may take I dispensable assistance to them, especially for the time when they are confronted with pain and sorrow, twists and turns. For another, just as an Indian old saying goes, roses in her hand, flavor in mine. That is to say. Great satisfaction would step slowly and gracefully in to the mercy- producers souls as well. To bring ad many angel- like smiles as possible to our society, we should practice more beneficial performance by leading a thrifty life.,【参考范文2】 Oseola McCarty was a laundrywoman for more than 75 years. She earned a few dollars each time. But she donated $150,000 which was her life savings to help the students who needed financial help.,I think her behavior is worth praising and very unselfish. Everyone should help others in need. But how much to donate should be based on our actual situation. The $150,000 is very helpful to the students who have financial problems. They can buy many things they need as other students. And they may be more grateful and kinder. Therefore, its more likely for them to help others in the future. If I am going to give donations, I will choose students too. They are in the most important period in their life. They need to get a long education. They have to buy a lot of books, pencil-cases, pens, erasers and s