你校正在进行英语读书周活动该活动要求学生摘录名言.ppt

,你校正在进行“英语读书周”活动。该活动要求学生摘录名言佳句（quote）并相互交流。以下是某同学摘录的句子：“Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you.”。请按下列要求用英语写一篇100-120个词的短文： 1.针对摘录句中的观点谈谈你的看法； 2.举例说明理由。 注意：短文的开头已给出（不计词数）。 In the English Reading Week, one of my classmates recommended a quote to us, which goes like this:“ Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you.“ _,题目内容要点分析,I am quitely agree with the view. Confidence attaches great significance to our future because life is mostly based on ourselves . Actually, the life likes test. Therefore, I believe by harding work, I will achieve my dream. The quote is short, but it leave a deep impress to me and make me think a lot. In my opinion, environment, parents, friends and so on do have a great influence to us. We always dream to be successful. We must will need teachershelp,friends encouragement, parentslove.,2012年浙江省高考英语主观题部分评卷信息反馈与思考,浙江省温州二中 黄跃跃,评卷程序概述 主观题部分评卷情况反馈与分析 对高中英语教学的几点建议,一、评卷程序概述,评卷教师构成 评卷质量保证 可能调整评分标准 （要点是否齐全）,二、主观题部分评卷情况反馈与分析,历年试题难度,Two years before, I travelled to Brazil and I rented for a car. ago Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car and I needed Unfortunately, to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents weeks , so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will but would be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and me far that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a interesting result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.,短文改错,the,新概念英语2special difficulties,你校正在进行“英语读书周”活动。该活动要求学生摘录名言佳句（quote）并相互交流。以下是某同学摘录的句子：“Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you.”。请按下列要求用英语写一篇100-120个词的短文： 1.针对摘录句中的观点谈谈你的看法； 2.举例说明理由。 注意：短文的开头已给出（不计词数）。 In the English Reading Week, one of my classmates recommended a quote to us, which goes like this:“ Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you.“ _,题目内容要点分析,1）“五档”评分标准 注意内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性、上下文的连贯性。 第五档（25-30分）血肉骨气备之 第四档（ 19-24分）云而通之 第三档（13-18分）知所云，但未周之 第二档（7-12分）知所欲云，然未能云 第一档（1-6分）不知所云 （黄会健） 2）词数、拼写与标点符号、书写,评判标准,书面表达整体分析,试题难度：1）题目指导语不够明确 2）开放度较高 3）任务缺乏情景创设的真实性 4）学生对主题内容体验不够（赖朝晖） 学生： 1）缺乏良好的审题习惯，没有深度理解题意。 2）缺乏举例说明或说理、举例背离主题。 3）缺乏个性看法和追求独立思考的能力， 思维停滞。 4）缺乏语篇能力和整合语言的能力。 5）背套路；硬套范文；使用不灵活，举例不合理，不能自圆其说,考生失分原因分析,动词 句子结构混乱或错误 汉语式英语 拼写错误 派生词使用错误 （success succeed successful） 代词 连接词误用、滥用 套句 说空话、无思维,考生语言失分错例收集与分析,1. 认真研读课程标准和考试说明，注重思维能力与习惯的培养和语言的训练相结合。 “使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑” 注重认知能力、言语信息、情感策略、文化意识等的培养 充分利用教材,三、对高中英语教学的几点建议,欣赏 借鉴 模仿,文章立意 文章结构 修辞手法 佳句欣赏 难句解析 衔接语运用,MIUI Friendship Reading : Annes best friend,Appreciate all the words or expressions in terms of the “description of surroundings” in the diary. Divide these words or expressions in two catalogues and tell the reason Appreciate all the descriptions about Annes feelings. What can be inferred from the description of Annes feelings? Write a short diary in the name of Anne, describing nature in Annes eyes and her deep feelings if Anne regained freedom after the war.,2.重视写作教学；落实写作训练 循序渐进积累语言 - 筛选、讲解、情境创设、巩固 背诵范文、美文 针对性训练语言运用实际 eg: 记叙事件 明确记叙文和事件记叙文的要素 了解记叙文应注意点 罗列常用表达 （如 时间、地点、戏剧性插入、评