高考复习专题讲座-写作.ppt

透视五年上海高考英语 作文试题 （）,高考作文的评分标准,（内容分，语言分，组织结构分，共计分） 内容要求： A档 分 重点明确，内容充实 B档 分 重点明确，内容较充实 C档 分 重点明确，但内容单薄 D档 分 重点不明确，内容松散 E 档 分 严重离题,高考作文的评分标准, 语言要求： ） 语言表达正确，文字流畅（分） ） 语法，措词等错误，每处扣分，同一错误不重复扣分 ） 单词拼写，标点，大小写等错误，每处扣分，同一错误不重复扣分 ） 每句扣分不超过分 ）语言分最多扣分,高考作文的评分标准, 组织结构要求： 凡内容和语言两部分得分超过分，词数超过个，并符合下列条件者可加分 ）凡全文的措词，句子结构，上下文连贯性等方面比较出色者，可酌情加分 ）凡内容充实，语言正确，用词贴切的优秀作文，可加分 词数要求：不足个酌情扣分，少于个，总分得分最多不超过分,记叙文的写作,Write an English composition about 100 to 120 words, according to the situation given in Chinese. 我最难忘的一课 具体说明为何难忘 感想 （年上海高考题）,In my school life, I have attended many classes. But the most unforgettable lesson I have ever had is an English lesson when I was at Grade Two. It is the teachers way of teaching that I always remember. On the day, we took out our English books and waited for our English as usual. But to our surprise, she entered the classroom without the English book, but a radio and some paper instead. She gave out the paper and told us that we would learn an English song and she asked us fill in the blanks in the paper while we listened to the song. How wonderful! It was the first time that we had had such a text. We were very excited and listened to the song very carefully. What surprised us most was that we could memorize the words more quickly than ever before. I like the lesson. This new method of teaching makes it easy for us to learn English words. It can also develop our interest in English. I will never forget my lesson.,SIMILAR TOPICS,An unforgettable test An unforgettable person A happy journey Great changes on the campus/ in Shanghai/ in my neighbourhood A class meeting before graduation My favourite TV programs Growing pains,提示作文的写作,根据提示用英语写出一段词的短文 一些学生认为学英语很重要 一些学生认为不必学英语 我认为（观点，理由） （年上海高考题）,Peoples views on learning English vary from person to person. Some think in todays world we need to make frequent contacts with different people in different parts of the world, so it is absolutely necessary to learn English. Others consider English useless. They feel learning English is nothing but a burden. But I regard English as one of the most important subjects. Of all the subjects I like English best. There are several reasons why I like English best.,Firstly, English is one of the most widely used languages in the world. Nearly all information on the Internet and over half of the worlds technical materials are in English. Therefore, a good command of English will greatly benefit me in my work. Secondly, as the world becomes more and more globalized, we need to learn modern technology in order to catch up with developed countries. A solid foundation of English means chances and opportunities. In the competition for a well-paid job, the one who can speak fluent English has an advantage over those who cannot. For all these reasons we should not only learn English but master it in the shortest time possible.,SIMILAR TOPICS,Studying abroad Necessity for examinations My view on mixed-ability teaching Should a student own a mobile phone? Students doing part-time jobs? The advantages and disadvantages of private tutoring My view on school uniforms Students doing cosmetic surgery? My view on raising pets How to spend a weekend? The Teacher-student relationship Should private cars be encouraged in China?,看图作文的写作,Write an English composition in over 120 words on the picture and instructions given (2002上海高考题）,Due to the one-child policy in China, most families have only one child and therefore this child is regarded as the treasure of the whole family. Both the parents and grandparents usually over-indulge the child. We can see in the picture, when a child is learning to ride bicycle, the parents and grandparents are sweating from running alongside the bike and are trying their best to protest the child; for fear that she should fall and hurt herself. We all know the greatest glory consists not in never falling, but in rising every time we fall. So I think, for the parents, they should be aware of the negative effect too much pampering has on their child. Under the parents protection, the children know only comfort and ease. If they dont learn how to live independently, how can they cope with the adversities which they will meet with in the future?,For the children, they should let their parents know that they have confidence in themselves and are able to exist in the competitive community without the constant watchful eye of an eager parent. The path to success is filled with various kinds of difficulties and obstacles. Only when we have learned to stand on our own two feet, can we survive in the 21st century.,SIMILAR TOPICS,A video game trap How to spend holidays Traffic rules are the friends of our lives 材料的来源：报纸，杂志,漫画书上的comics,图表作文的写作,根据所给图表，简要描述某城市试题近年每百人受机用户的增长情况，并试分析其增长的原因（年上海春考）,The chart above indicates that the number of mobile phones has increased in the city in recent years. Between 1995 and 1999 the number of mobile phone users increased by 10 percent each year. In 2001, the number almost doubled. It is predicated that the number will skyrocket in the years to come. The reason for the increase can be various. First a mobile phone is convenient for people especially business people. Because of its small size, light weight and portability, you neednt go to a phone booth to make a telephone call. One user says, “With a mobile phone, I can make a phone call to do business without worrying about time and space. This saves me time and trouble.,Besides, mobile phones are finding their way into ordinary families. Mobile phone lovers talk with their friends, family members whenever they like. Of course, there are some other people buying mobile phones merely to follow the fashion or show their position in society. Whatever reason it may be, I think the increase will continue into the future because they can make our life convenient and the world smaller.,SIMILAR TOPICS,1.请你谈谈轿车大量进入家庭后，对家庭，环境，经济可能产生的影响（年高考试题） 大学入学人数三年递增说明的问题及你的 感想 长假期间人们不同的休闲方式及你的分析或建议,书信类作文的写作,你的好友因为家境一般买不起名牌而闷闷不乐.给他写份信,谈谈你的看法和建议. 收信人:徐海青 寄信人:黄平 写信日期: 2003年6月8日 （年高考试题）,June 8,2003 Dear Xu Haiqing, You said in your letter that many of your classmates were wearing fashionable clothes, but you couldnt afford to buy the best brands. So you felt very depressed. There are different views on peoples wear. The following are my ideas about it. firstly, you shouldnt put too much emphasis on physical appearance. You must always remember the most important task for you today is to concentrate your attention on your studies. No matter what you wear, you will really look your best when you come out first in your examinations.,A famous saying goes, “Frugality is the mother of virtue.”