李润生4月预测以及准确分析小作文7分副本.ppt

04月5号，12号，26号雅思考试 依次为,政府类， 教育类 社会生活类，,雅思议论文,李威廉老师下载绝杀雅思写作和阅读宝典和最新8分范文集,雅思图表作文,线图， 柱图， 柱图与饼图组合题,#2014年04月5号，12号，26号雅思考试 #小作文依次预测为：线图，柱图，柱图与饼图组合题，详细的5分，6分，7分的思维方式和必备十组句型，一定准备好。大作文依次为政府类，教育类和社会生活类，搞定6分，20组语法错误，一定不能犯。6.5分是细化思维的问题，避免讲空话，7分适当增加批判性句型。,自我介绍： 李润生 李威廉老师 南京大学与美国霍普金斯大学硕士 雅思阅读写作7分速成专家； 小说watch 90后作者 资深婚姻猎头 留学与职业规划咨询师； 性格匹配以及Face Reader 高手； 坚定的critical 思考着；,来和威廉老师一起励志一下：,在这个雅思报名都很费劲的时代，我们没有理由不充分准备好再去参加雅思考试；在这个雅思考官对于没有和考官进行真实沟通，即对背模板零容忍的前提下，没有理由不真正提高语言能力和思维能力，就去送死；也许一次报名费只是吃一次大餐的费用，但考5次的报名费足以去泰国和人妖亲密接触一下了。,励志一下！,时至今日都是我咎由自取，差就是差，与任何人无关。又懒又笨又矫情造就我词汇少语法弱，导致今日屡考不过的地步。其实，我一直很感谢push 我的人，虽然我知道学渣不管如何被损也还是这个逼样。我不好好学习的行为不配得到原谅，我没背的素材也难以弥补，但我想弥补，必须去弥补，这是我今日之后的生活。至于我自己，已咎由自取，愿日后再不学渣。雅思虽易，想过不易，且考且珍惜。,新浪微博：李威廉老师 下载讲座PPT 和绝杀雅思-写作宝典； 绝杀雅思-阅读宝典 ；”十大必背段落结构“ 加QQ群:” 246218826”: 加公共微信：DFIELTS 推送每期作文预测与范文 微信：Dianfengyasi及时互动,最精准和科学的提分方案 从4.5到5.5，从5.5到6.5，从6.5 到7.5,# 写作5分到6.5的提分不可回避 的三步曲#,写作是完全可以短时间提高的，主要是方法不对导致6分以内。首先，要纠正20组语法错误；再翻译5篇全文最新考题中文，理清思路，规范结构，理解英文思维(这一步至关重要）。这一步至关重要！接着背十篇作文素材，80个地道词伙。最后原创5篇，名师修改。,首段的写法,6分的写法： The pie charts show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. 8分的写法： The charts compare the sources of electricity in Australia and France in the years 1980 and 2000.Between these years electricity production almost doubled, rising from 100 units to 170 units in Australia, and from 90 to 180 units in France.,（第二段）先总后分的原则：,5 分的思维： The number of total production of electricity was 100 units in Australia in the year 1980 and was 170 units in the year 2000. Whereas, the figure of units of electricity by fuel source was 90 units in the year 1980 and that was 180 units in the year 2000.,6分的思维： The total production of electricity in Australia increased from 100 to 170 units respectively in the years 1980 and 2000; While, the total production of electricity rose from 90 units to 180 units in France respectively in the years 1980 and 2000.,7分的思维： The total production of electricity in Australia was on a 70-percent rise (from 100 units to 170 units) in Australia while that experienced a doubling process from 90 units to 180 units during the same period in France.,8分的思维： The charts compare the sources of electricity in Australia and France in the years 1980 and 2000.Between these years electricity production almost doubled, rising from 100 units to 170 units in Australia, and from 90 to 180 units in France.,第三段）先一般后特殊 (本处写 2段),7分的思维： In 1980 Australia used coal as the main electrical source (50 units) and the remainder was produced from natural gas , hydro power (each producing 20 units) and oil( which produced only 10 units) . However , by 2000, coal had become the fuel for more than 75 percent of electricity produced and only hydro continued to be another significant source supplying approximately 20 percent.,第四段）写特殊的那段,7分的思维： In contrast, France used coal as a source for only 25 units of electricity in 1980, which was matched by natural gas. The remaining 40 units were produced largely from oil and nuclear power, with hydro contributing only 5 units. But by 2000 nuclear power, which was not used at all in Australia ,had developed into the main source, producing almost 75 % of electricity ,at 126 units ,while coal and oil together produced only 50 units. Other sources were no longer significant.,（第五段）完美的结尾段 Overall, it is clear that by 2000 these two countries relied on different principle fuel sources: Australia relied on coal and France on nuclear power.,新浪微博：李威廉IELTS,2014. 03.15 日雅思写作最新8分范文,It is important for all towns and cities to have large public outdoor spaces, such as parks and squares. Do you agree or disagree?,良好的开端是成功的一般，鬼都知道第一段很重要,纽约的时代广场和北京的天安门广场都成为了城市的标志性建筑。在建筑上，文化上，政治上，市民休闲等方面都很有价值。对于这些大城市，拥有自己的市民广场和公园是非常有意义的。但是对于人口密度非常的小的城镇，很显然这是一种奢侈品和浪费。,首段细化思维和批判性思维 搞定7分,The New York times square and Beijing Tianan Men square have already been the symbol buildings,which are of great assets , no matter architecturally, culturally, recreationally, and even politically. While talking about the necessities for all the all the towns and cities to have their own parks and square, regardless its scale and population density, it is more a luxury and waste.,大城市和人口密度高的乡镇拥有自己的广场的理由是足够的。从最基本的功能，广场和公园能给市民提供娱乐放松的场所，市民可以跳舞，锻炼身体，练习唱歌，拍拖。很多恋爱中的男女在相恋的初期，最喜欢去的地方就是广场和公园。,理由之一,The contributing factors for the metropolises and densely populated towns to have their own parks and squares are ample. On the basis of fundamental functions, the large square and parks offered the citizens a place for recreation and leisure, in which citizens probably dance, exercise physically, practice the songs as well as date with their lovers,接地气的理由一,It is highly understanding that the most welcome and attractive places for lovers in their dating periods are surely in public parks.,第二个理由具有西方特点的理由二,广场和公园在西方往往也是一个集会，市民主张公共权益和政治主张的地方。各种选票阶段的游说和拉票活动，公司工会组织罢工，以及市民在投票赞成和反对新建公共设施的地方往往都是在这样的公共场所。在这一点上，公园就不仅仅是为了玩的地方，更是市民表达个人意愿和主张公民权利的地方（parks are not just having fun, but a place to express personal willingness and to claim the civil rights of citizens.),反驳段,至于谈到每个城镇都拥有自己的公园和广场，很显然，就没有必要了。首先这是一个耗费巨大的工程，对于人口稀少，甚至是人口密度只有几百人每平方公里的城镇来说，比如在遥远的中国西部，美国的中部，澳洲和新西兰的偏远地区，这个很明显是浪费的奢侈品。更值得注意的是，公共设施和公共场所的投资和维护将会需要长期的投资和维护成本。,2月1日考题是空话大王的克星,2014 年2月1日 最新考题：Some people believe that the best way to produce a happier society is to ensure that there are only small differences between the richest and the poorest members. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?,居民的工作满意度，收入的高低，身体的健康构成了幸福社会的最重要的元素。减小贫富分化是其中一条重要的途径，但我们社会的幸福程度更多的并不取决于收入的绝对数量。（TIP:中国人的幸福是建立在对门的幸福之上,哈哈),8分的思路和句型，你能接受吗？,The high degrees of job satisfaction, higher income and physical performance constitute the major part of happier society. When it comes to the narrowing the gap between the poorest and the richest as the best contributor to the happier society, i can hardly reach the consensus because whether or not being happier does not bear close relevance with the wealth difference.,李威廉老师下载绝杀雅思写作和阅读宝典和最新8分范文集,先让步,不得不承认的是，我们会为因为收入的局限而不能满足物质需求而不开心，也更会因为收入的差别而产生的物质生活质量的区别。基尼系数（Gini Coefficient）对于反应社会财富分布和社会稳定性有很强的参考价值，但是他对于衡量社会以及居民是否幸福意义不大。因为我们发现，很多富裕的人并没有很强的幸福感。,李威廉老师下载绝杀雅思写作和阅读宝典和最新8分范文集,先让步，还是写balanced structure 更容易得分,Admittedly, we always feel unhappy because of the restriction of financial limit or sometimes fail to achieve full happiness as we are comparably less wealthy than those in the privileged and rich class. Gini Coefficient can be an extremely valuable indicator of the social stability and social wealth distribution. However, it is indeed hard to conclude the “ degree of happiness” as we always see the hardships and harassment on their long face.,李威廉老师下载绝杀雅思写作和阅读宝典和最新8分范文集,当我们深入讨论幸福社会的时候，我们会发现完全不一样的答案。社会的财富分布更加均衡将有助于那样弱势群体获得更多的公平，正义，尊重感。财富的确是获得满足感的重要手段，无法为自己的梦想买单。但是社会幸福的程度更多的是和软性的东西有关，比如公民的教育，遵守社会准则的文明程度，公共设施的完善以及社会公平和正义。,The in-depth observation about the “happy society” reveals a radically different picture. The narrowing of social wealth gap which means the more even distribution of social wealth makes great sense to the less-privileged people who have access to the social justice and higher social-standing.,Wealth is also the great contributor to the living satisfaction as we can pay for the commodities as well as the dreams in career. But ,more importantly, social happiness bear closer relations with the soft indicators in terms of education level, the morality degree to follow the social disciplines, the utilities and caring more about the social justice.,总的来说，社会幸福是一个综合的问题，不能只是单个几个指标能全面表明。但从根本上来说，物质收入的差距不能拉的太大，人们也应该更倾向于以享受过程的生活态度。,安全的结尾段,In summary , the issue of social happiness is not a single and isolated, but comprehensive and integrated concept. The best polices lies in the transition from the result-orientated life attitudes to the process-orientated ones. Of course, it is unexpected to see the widening gap between the rich and the poor.,首段具有细化思维是得7分前提,绝大部分的青少年都是在学校里面完成自己的青少年时期的，这个传统已经延续了数百年。这种老师和学生在一个教室里面互动学习的方式，也被证明是最佳的学习方式。,Childrens education is expensive. In some countries, the government pay some of or all of the costs. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?,2014年 2月22日 最新真题以及8分范文,教育从某种意义上是一种投资，也许是投资回报率最高的投资。但是因为儿童的教育从幼儿园，到小学，中学乃至大学的费用支出占到家庭收入的很大一块，因此有责任感和有能力的政府应该为承担部分的费用甚至全部，尽管会给政府造成一定的负担。,首段即可体现细化思维和批判性思维,Education is essentially deemed as a kind of investment, probably the highest profitable one.（批判性思维） Due to its high cost and lion share in the family total outlay, the responsible and affordable governments should bear a part or the whole part, though this practice may exert a certain burden on the governments（批判性思维）.,让步段,很多纳税人在过去一直担心这样会给政府造成不可承受的负担，影响其他政府项目的投资。比如基础设施，疾病控制，市政公共场所的建设。从另外的角度来说，他们普遍甚至认为教育是每个家庭自己的事情，教育机构很多也是商业机构，孩子的教育更是一项投资，获益者也是孩子本身，因此政府不需要承担。,It was once assumed that the taxpayers doubt the unaffordability of governments and potential affects of normal operation of other more imperative projects such as infrastructure, diseases control and municipal construction. From the other perspectives, some critics even point out that education is rather restrictedly a familial business, regarding the education as a kind of investment and children as the only beneficiaries.,4分和5分作文是如何实现的？ 十组语法错误,第一组： 1，Although the crime rate is falling in many parts of the world, but violent crimes are constantly rampant. 2，Man has become master not only of the earth, but also the space. 3,To rear a child alone are challenging to any parent.,4分和5分作文就是这样实现的！ 十组语法错误,1， The number of the population was decreased in the 1990 to 1995, the figure of population was increased in the years of 1996 and 2000,the data was then continue increase in the last 5 years. 2, I earned the money is the least. 3,I was come from Nanjing.,戳到你内心的“痛” 十组语法错误,第二组： 1，There are plenty of natural resources in china ,most of that are unused. 2，I cry, you cry. 3, We all tried our best, however, we lost the game. 4, Education has been made available to more people ,however , many adults have some problems with literacy and numeracy.,语法错误是5分之殇,第三组： 1，In the modern society has a lot of influence on the way people manipulate telecommunication equipments. 2，In china has more than 100 million subscribers to cable television. 3，The cell phones in the modern society have used the latest functions to promote the communication efficiency. 。,多么痛的“领悟”,第四组： 1，The government measures，which has negative influence on corporate employees，also poses as a threat to the benefit of the employers. 2，Overtaking, coupled with poor diet ,lead to physic