《高考英语短文改》PPT课件.ppt

2011高考英语短文改错解题指导 首先要理解整个短文的含义，逻辑关系，篇章结构。再仔细研究每一句的意义。借助划分句子成分的方法判断每一部分是否有错误。读句子时一定以整句为单位。,在研究每一行的句子时，首先把握句子的意思，然后划分句子的成分：主语；谓语部分；宾语；状语：地点，时间，方式等。如果句子是并列句或复合句，先分开各部分小的分句，根据各个分句之间的关系判断使用的连词是否正确。然后再研究各个分句的成分。,1. We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, English and physics. subject是可数名词根据本句的意思，前面有quite a few修饰，应当改为复数形式。 2. We practise three times every week and often watch football match on TV together. 根据本句的意思match在此应当改为复数形式。 3. On the way up I was taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. picture应当改成复数形式，因为作者一路上忙于照相，不止仅照一张像。 另外还要注意名词所有格形式上的错误使用。,（一）名词使用错误：名词一般在句中做主语或宾语，名词的错误主要在于名词单，复数的错误使用。,1. My favourite sport is football. I was a member of our school team. 全句的基本时态应当是现在时，was应改为am 2. Playing football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and team spirit. 主谓一致的错误。Give的主语是Playing football，动名词作主语是单数形式，应改为：gives 3. the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. Evening came down. 时态错误。全句是过去时态，passes 改为passed 4. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. 动词形式的错误。句中有三个连续的动作做谓语。因此visit不是 伴随状语，是第二个谓语动词，应该为visited.,（二）动词的语法错误： （1）作为谓语动词，注意谓语动词在时态，语态，与主语是否一致以及用词方面的问题。,（2）作为非谓语动词，现在分词，过去分词，动名词，不定式形式的使用错误，同时注意非谓语动词在平行结构中出现的错误。 1. Not far from the hotel, there was a shop with all kinds of clothes hang up. hang up在此做定语修饰先行词clothes，应改为现在分词形式表示挂着各种衣服。 2. He had worked on farms and in shops where he spent his spare time studied by himself. 定语从句是说：他把业余时间花在学习上，按句型结构：spend some time doing something.所以studied应改为：studying.,Im sure well have a wonderfully time together. 形容词与副词混用。have a wonderful time：过得非常愉快。Wonderfully 改为：wonderful 2. People will work few hours than they do now. 这是一个含比较级的句子。（句中有than），few 改为比较级形式fewer 3. Computers will be more smaller and useful. 比较级smaller前面的修饰词应该是副词much。More与多音节形容词或副词原形构成比较级。More改为much 4. Last week, I went to a movie, which was very moved. 形容词moved指人受到感动。本句的定语从句的主语是movie。应当是moving.,（三）形容词，副词使用错误：注意1，形容词和副词的比较级，原级，最高级使用方面的问题；2，修饰比较级的副词的错误使用。3，以ing和以ed结尾的形容词的混用。4，形容词和副词的混用。,（四） 1. My class will be over by then or I will pick you up there. 前后两句的关系是并列关系or应改为：and 2. My grandma was the best cook in the world but could make the most delicious dishes. 前后两句是并列关系不具有转折意义but改为：and 3. It doesnt matter that I would win or not. Matter后面的从句是whetheror not结构。That改为：whether,连词使用错误：并列句连词and与but的误用是历年高考题中 常考的内容。复合句如宾语从句，状语从句，定语从句中主， 从句的连接词的误用根据主从句的关系可以发现。,（五）例题： 1. The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home. 句子的主语the Smiths指Smith全家，是复数形式，谓语do ones best 中的ones作为物主代词应当和主语一致，his应当改为their. 2. At once I apologized and controlled me at my best till the dinner started. 根据句子意思：我立刻道歉并且尽最大努力控制了自己。Control后面的宾语与主语一致，指同一个人，应改为反身代词myself. 3. There will be more people in the world and most of whom will live longer than people live now. 本句是and 连接的并列句，whom 连接的是定语从句。所以whom应当改为them.,4. The sport teaches us the importance of obedience. Each player must obey the captain, who is the leader of the team. And they must not break the rules too often if we want to win the game. 全句是以第一人称叙述的。所以they根据语境应改为we,代词的错误使用：代词的使用错误主要出现在代词（物主代词，人称代词，反身代词）在句中指代错误，物主代词与指代的名词在数，性别，以及格上的不一致。,（六） 1. As everyone knows, its famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. 根据句义：这是一座名山。明显地发现这里缺少了表示“一个”的不定冠词。应在famous前加上a 2. They had the wonderful evening and came home quite late. 根据句义：他们过了一个非常愉快的夜晚。过得很愉快：have a good/wonderful time. The应改为：a 3. He wrote a message and put it in the bottle. The message gave hi name and address.,根据全句的语境：他把这个纸条放进一个瓶子里。此处bottle是泛指。The应改为：a 4. after I put down the receiver, the phone rang the third time. 根据句义：根据句义：电话又一次响起来。这里不是说“第三次”，而是指 “再一次”。The 改为：a,冠词的使用错误：冠词的使用错误主要表现在： the / a / an 之间的误用；缺少冠词，多余冠词； 这些错误通过对句义的理解，特别是句中名词的 意义，运用所学的冠词的基础知识就可以发现并 正确改正这些错误。,（七） 1. I have arrived in America for two months. 根据句义：我到美国有两个月了。Arrive是非延续性动词，不能在完成时中与for时间短语连用。应改为：been,用词不当的错误：这种问题主要集中在谓语动词的近义词的选择使用上。,（八）1. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain. It was about noon是全句的主句，后面应是一个时间状语从句。表示：当我们到达山脚下时，已经是中午了。此处缺少了连词when 2. If it doesnt work, bring in friend that you feel comfortable, and have him or help you. 根据句义：如果这还不奏效，那么带一个你与之在一起感到舒服的朋友来，friend前面缺少表示“一个”的冠词：a； 定语从句最后应加上介词：with,单词遗漏：根据句子意思，句中常缺少冠词，连词或介词。,（九） 1. I hope that both you two could come and visit us some time soon. 本句前面已经有both， 后面再出现two 显然多余，应去掉two. 2. You might have to change for your method a couple of times. Change在此是及物动词，表示“改变方法”，所以去掉for 3. When I was a boy, the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring Festival.,全句是说：最令人兴奋的事是欢渡春