基础写作之-人物介绍.ppt

基础写作之,Character introduction,人物介绍,1. age, sex, birth-place, background (概况) 2. appearance, character (外表、性格) 3. education (教育背景) 4. big events in his or her life (in order of time) (经历、生平) 5. evaluation (评价),写 作 提 示,Guess the person described in the following sentences,Born on the 18th of January, 1979 in Taiwan, which is a beautiful island of our country, he was raised by his mother and was shy and quiet during his childhood. Showing interest in music, he began learning to play the piano at the age of 3. When his first album （专辑）was released（发行） in 2000, he got the attention of the world. His popularity sky-rocketed(急速上升), and he has received many awards for his songs. His own unique Chinese R&B style (蓝调音乐) is unparalleled by others and he continues to make breakthroughs as he takes risks in attempting new things.,Jay Chou, Born on the 18th of January, 1979 in Taiwan, Jay Chou, a famous singer, was raised by his mother and was shy and quiet during his childhood.,分词结构,同位语,身份与生平,多用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺。,分析句子,Showing interest in music, he began learning to play the piano at the age of 3. When Jays first album was released in 2000, he got the worlds attention. His popularity sky-rocketed, which allowed him to received many awards for his songs.,经历,现在分作状语,状语从句,定语从句,注意：用非谓语动词, 使文章精炼。,用复合句,倒装,非限定定语从句等，润色文章。, His own unique Chinese R&B style is unparalleled by others and he continues to make breakthroughs as he takes risks in attempting new things.,评价,注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组。,1.他1910年11月2日生于一个富裕家庭, 2005年4月24日因病于北京逝世。（die of） He was born into a rich family on November 2,1910 and died of an illness in Beijing on April 24,2005. Born into a rich family on November 2,1910, he passed away because of disease in Beijing on April 24, 2005.,小试一把：翻译下列句子,变成分词了作状语，用pass away换掉句中谓语。,2.他上大学时，先从事于医学学习，但后来却改变主意。 （从事 be engaged in choose to work on） When he went to college, he first chose to work on medicine but then changed his mind.,3. 19301935年间，他在清华大学学习，之后到英国继续深造.(further education) Between 1930 and 1935, he studied in Tsinghua University and then went to England for further education. 4.他获得博士学位。 He received his doctors degree.,5.他一生致力于社会科学(sociology)研究，促使(advance)中国农村经济发展。 He devoted himself to the research on sociology and advanced the development of Chinas rural economy.,致力于 devote oneself to 中国农村经济 Chinas rural economy,费孝通是我国著名的社会学家和社会活动家。请根据下文提示，用英文写一篇短文介绍一下费孝通先生。,参考词汇：社会学家 sociologist; 社会活动家 social activist 【写作要求】使用5个句子表达全部所给的内容，并组织成连贯的短文。,Born into a rich family on November 2, 1910, Fei Xiaotong, a famous Chinese sociologist and social activist, passed away due to disease in Beijing on April 24, 2005. When going to college, he first chose to study medicine but then changed his mind. Between 1930 and 1935, he studied in Tsinghua University and then went to England for further education ，where he received his doctors degree. After 1938, he once taught in Tsinghua University and Peking University. Fei, who studied hard all his whole life, devoted himself to the research on sociology and advanced the development of Chinas rural economy.,How do you do the Basic Writing ?,The suggested steps:,1. 审题: 确定文体、人称和时态,2. 整合信息 :把所有内容整合成5句,3. 翻译句子：考虑语法结构,4.连句成篇,5. 检