2013年12月四级作文真题解析及范文.doc

2013年12月英语四级作文题目一Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short easy on the picture below. You should start your easy with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in peoples life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.People are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using sticks in order to see.例文1The Overusing of Cell PhonesAs the drawing presents（描述图画内容）, there is a man walking across the street absorbedly focusing on his cell phone without noticing the surroundings. This sort of phenomenon is not uncommon and rare in some metropolis, especially among the youngsters.What the picture illustrates is the prevailing situation that has long existed in todays China. That is the mobile phone obsession. With the advent of information age, people are becoming increasingly fascinated on the electronic products, especially the cell phones. Not surprisingly, you could easily notice that most of us are obsessed in sending messages, playing online games with their mobile phones. It cannot be denied that this phenomenon may negatively impact the relationship among people, and therefore they will become estranged and isolated.Personally, in view of the overuse of mobile phones, I hold that we individuals should raise the necessary awareness that good relationship are reinforced by sincere and face-to-face communication.例文2This picture portrays an ironic situation（描述图画内容）: on the road, stands a man, who is completely concentrating on his cellphone whereas using a stick for direction, which implies the unprecedented popularity or even overusing cell phones nowadays.Exaggerated as the picture is, the phenomenon behind it is rather thought-provoking.（图画介绍了或传达了什么内涵，想表达什么用意） With the development of high-tech equipment, especially smart phones, people in growing numbers tend to become addicted to the excessive use of them. According to a survey carried out in China Daily several days ago, almost 47% of citizens explain that they would experience certain kind of anxiety without cellphones at hand. Meanwhile, the overusing cellphones, firstly would exert detrimental impact on the health of us. Whats worse, it would perform a negative character in interpersonal relationship since we have less time to communicate.statisticsJudging from the evidence above, certain measures should be taken. Firstly, certain institutions in China should launch relevant campaigns to limit the excessive use of cellphones. Moreover, we, as college students, should put emphasis on it right from ourselves as a start.例文3From the cartoon given above, we can observe that（描述图画内容） there are many people crossing the street. Instead of looking at the way, they are staring at their cell phones and using walking sticks to see. It is obvious that they are fascinated with cell phones while even ignore their security.We learn from the cartoon that cell phones have been increasingly widespread in peoples life.（图画介绍了或传达了什么内涵，想表达什么用意） Cell phones are of great benefit to all of us. One of the most obvious advantages is that we can contact with our friends and relatives more conveniently than ever before. However, it is mobile-phones advantages that lead some people to overuse or be addicted to them, which tends to exert a negative impact on our life. For example, oversusing cellphones will reduce face-to-face communication among people. It seems that most of us enjoy the convenience of contact at the expense of interpersonal relationships. Moreover，entertaining electronic games, magnanimous information and a bewildering variety of social networking tools in mobile phones have occupied much of our time. Information distribution tools and social networking tools, in particular, have attracted all of our attention, which tempts us to keep our eyes on the screen around the corner of every second. Then, do not expect us to talk with the people around us, we dont have time! This, has resulted in a phenomenon of alienation between acquaintances and familiarity between strangers.Science and technology and modern tools should be served as an angel to improve our living strandard, rather than a devil to disturb our normal life and communication. Just imagine, live one day without mobile phone, will you be relaxed? Or anxious ? (279words)参考译文：如图所示，我们可以看到有很多的人正在过马路，他们没有仔细看路，却都盯着自己的手机并且用一根拐杖代替他们看路。很明显，他们都着迷于手机，甚至忽视了自身安全。我们从图画得知手机已经在人们的生活中越来越普遍。手机对于我们有巨大的好处，最明显的好处之一，就是我们可以比以前更加便利地联系朋友和亲人。然而，正是手机的诸多好处导致一些人过度使用或者是沉迷于手机，而这往往会给我们的生活造成一些负面的影响。比如，过度使用手机将会减少人与人之间的面对面的沟通。似乎我们大多数人都是以牺牲人际关系来享用联系的便利性。再者，手机上得娱乐性的电子游戏，海量的信息和各种各样的社交网络个您根据也已经占据了我们很多的时间。尤其是信息传播工具和社交网络工具已经占据了我们所有的注意力，这使我们每分每秒地将目光锁定在屏幕上。那么，就别指望我们很周围的人聊天了，我们没有那个时间！这也导致了一个现象：熟悉人的陌生化，陌生人的熟悉化！科技和现代工具应该是提高我们生活质量的天使,而不应该是影响我们正常生活和沟通的魔鬼。设想一下，如果过一天没有手机的生活，你会放松？还是会焦虑?2013年12月英语四级作文题目二Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.破题解析：本次四级作文形式仍为漫画题，探讨因特网等现代信息技术对人们交流模式的影响。话题贴近日常生活，难度中等。题目要求简述网络的影响，并解释“电子通讯能否替代面对面的交流”，考生需要明确给出正面或反面的观点。如选择“可以替代”，可考虑从信息技术先进程度、交流方式多样化(文字、语音、视频)等方面举例论述。如选择“不可替代”，则可强调信息技术无法实现的方面，如面对面情感交流、文字信息内容传达的不完整性，或是网络技术的不稳定、不可靠等方面。例文1From the cartoon given above, we can observe that there are two people in front of a computer. With his wife standing behind, the man is writing an E-mail to their son which states, Dear Andy - How are you? Your mother and I are fine. We both miss you and hope you are doing well. We look forward to seeing you again the next time your computer crashes and you come downstairs for something to eat. Love, Mom and Dad. We learn from the cartoon that the Internet has exerted a great impact on the way of peoples communication. （图画介绍了或传达了什么内涵，想表达什么用意）People used to communicate face to face, make calls or write letters. While in modern society, people are more prone to communicate via, as the cartoon depicts, Internet tools like E-mails, QQ or microblogs. People hold that these ways of communication are more convenient and are able to save them an enormous amount of time. Here comes a question, “whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact?” Definitely not. When enjoying the convenience of of electronic communication, people have began to realize that it tends to weaken the affection between people, reduce working efficiency or even bring about some misunderstandings or frictions. Moreover, communicating through electronic tools will be likely to make people solitary or even suffer from certain mental disorders.What the cartoon depicted can be tragic: the family could have communicated face to face happily without E-mail. But now,a family living together seems to be a thousand-mile apart. Perhaps, we should take a moment to think, Does anyone there want to fall victim of convenience of the Internet and electronic communication tools ? (275 words)Go to extremes/ moderate/ sensible/ reasonable/ positive/ optimistic/ take measures / proper/ appropriate/Actions should be taken to do参考译文：通过这幅所给的题目，我们观察到有两个人在电脑前。男子的妻子站在后面，而男子则正他们的儿子写邮件，并说到：亲爱的安迪，你好！你妈妈和我一切都好，并且很想你，也希望你一切都好。我们期待下次在你电脑崩溃或者是下楼取东西吃的时候再次见到你。爱你的妈妈，爸爸。我们从这幅图画得知互联网对人们的沟通方式带来了巨大的影响。人们过去习惯于面对面的沟通、电话沟通或者是书信沟通。而现代社会，人们更倾向于像图画所画的那样，用诸如邮件、QQ或者是微博这样的互联网工具进行沟通。人们认为这样的沟通方式更加方便，节省时间。现在，就由这样一个问题了：电子交流是否会取代面对面的沟通呢？答案是否定的！人们在享受电子沟通带来的便利性的同时，也已经开始意识到了这会削弱人与人之间的情感，降低工作效率有时候甚至会带来一些误会和摩擦。再者，电子沟通也会使人变得孤僻甚至是产生更加严重的心理疾病。图画中所描绘的场景，是可悲的: 如果没有互联网，此刻他们可能其乐融融的在一起聊天呢。然而现在，同处一室的家人，正式因为互联网的便利性，却变得相距千里。或许我们应该花点时间想一个问题：有人想成为互联网和电子沟通工具的便利性的牺牲品吗？例文2 没有描述图画内容，因此不符合图画作文的要求，The modern technology has greatly altered the mode of communication among people. With the help of the Internet, people can easily contact each other anytime anywhere. However, the side effect is that many people have become ov