《英语高分作文技巧》PPT课件.ppt

,2012中考书面表达高分突破,2013中考,总述：书面面表达不同于语文中的作文，它无需立意，构思和怎么展开，只需根据所给情景（图画，图表及提示）和要求去写就可以啦。 它允许学生有限制地适当发挥，但又不能逐字翻译所给材料，要求我们抓住所给信息和大意用自己所熟悉的语言进行表达。 要求：紧扣题目，包括所有内容要点，没有语法错误，具有较强的语言运用能力，格式正确，标点符号准确，符合英美的表达习惯，字数基本符合要求。 一般来讲， 中考作文写好十句话就足够啦。说以又称之为“ 十句作文法” 。,书面表达注意事项 1.无“过”便是“功” 不要为了追求“一鸣惊人” 而运用生冷词汇、句型等。对这些一知半解的东西用得不当，结果适得其反，使文章生硬、不协调，甚至错误百出，所以要使用有把握的词，避免不必要的失分。要尽量套用一些已学句型，避免写出没有把握的句子。写句子时要注意灵活表达，不钻“牛角尖”。遇到一些不便直译的生词，可采取“迂回”战术，绕着弯写。假如你不会写“勤奋”，你可以写“not lazy”；你若不会写“特长”，可以用be good at或do well in来表达。,2. 正确为先；流畅为好；文采为妙。 只写短句或简单句，写出的文章过于幼稚、空洞乏味。要使文章有血有肉就要把平时学的知识用进去，如：定语从句、宾语从句、主语从句，非谓语动词和比较等句型，关键时用上一两个，特别是对关联词的使用（如：so that, bothand , not onlybut also等）会使你的文章结构紧密、层次鲜明、条理清楚、不同凡响、更有文采。,3.注重衔接与连贯 1. 内容上的连贯。 文章中所有的句子都是为全文的中心服务的。就各段而言，其中的每一句话都要紧紧围绕着该段的主题句进行，不能说与主题句无关的东西。 2. 表达上的连贯。 文章的段落之间、段落中各句子之间要有一定的衔接。 衔接的三种方法：一是内容上的连贯，二是使用代词，三是使用关联词语。如： Go into the parkGo forwardCross the bridge Turn right After you enter the park，walk straight on till you come to a bridgeCross the bridge and turn right 加上after，till，and等过渡词，使句意连贯。,（一）写作能力的引导,5.学会使用好过渡词语,4.学会构建篇章,3.学会写段落,2.学写优美流畅的句子,1.学会使用较高级的句型,（一）写作能力的引导,1.学会使用较高级的词汇 4)同义结构替换法：英语中很多实用地道的短语，用在写作中可以让文章的味道更浓。比如，thanks to, turn out, in spite of, as a result, as for, on the other hand, make it等。另外英语中还常用分词结构或介词短语结构来替代一些状语从句。 例如: 一般：If the weather is fine, well go climbing tomorrow. 高级：Weather permitting, well go climbing tomorrow.,2.学写优美流畅的句子 1）正确构建简单句 2）恰当使用复合句 简单句：A girl was injured in the accident. She is now in hospital. 定语从句：The girl who was injured in the accident is now in hospital. 3)恰当使用分词结构： Feeling tired, I went to bed early.(= Because I felt tired, I went to bed early.) 4)长短句结合 5）尝试特殊句型：感叹句、强调句和倒装句 6) 适当引用格言谚语,（一）写作能力的引导,3.学会写段落 1）主题句(Topic sentence)：如：Smoking is bad for health.其中smoking 是主题（idea）,is bad for health是自己的看法。 2）支撑句（Supporting details）：比如上文的主题句Smoking is bad for health，可以使用下列细节来支撑：Heavy smokers often suffer from lung diseases./ Smoking gives people yellow teeth and bad breath./ People get addicted to smoking.支撑细节务必要紧扣主题，不能随意发挥。比如：Smoking costs a lot of money就不能很好地支持Smoking is bad for health这个主题句。 3）统一性和连贯性：在选择支撑信息时，要注意必须围绕主题句；同时要使用恰当的连接词汇，保持上下文的连贯性，如上面练习中用到的first of all, also等。,（一）写作能力的引导,4.学会构建篇章 一篇文章的结构与段落类似，包括：主题段、支撑段和结尾段。 主题段点明文章的中心思想，支撑段可能有1-3个，是对中心思想的展开和讨论。结尾段可归纳全文，也可改变措辞，回顾主题，还可以提问，引发思考。,（一）写作能力的引导,5.学会使用好过渡词语 并列与递进：and, also, as well as, besides, furthermore, moreover, in addition, whats more, etc. 转折：but, however, although, though, nevertheless, after all, in spite of, etc. 对比：or, otherwise, like, unlike, while, instead of, on the other hand, on the contrary, etc. 因果：because, as, for, since, so, thus, therefore, as a result, because of, for this reason, etc. 总结：in all, in brief, in a (one) word, in general, in short, on the whole, generally speaking, etc. 时间顺序：and then, next, after that, firstly, secondly, and finally, at once, immediately, shortly after that, two days later, at this point,高分作文技巧,使用多种句子结构,经典句型,1.There are many people who - There are many things that - 2.It is said that-/ It is reported that - /It is widely known that - 3. do / does + 动词原形 It is -that - 4.In my eyes +句子 / In my opinion,+ 句子 5.In oue life , + 句子 6.If I were-, I would - 7.The more -, the more -,经典句型,It is necessary for sb. to do sth. You had better do sth . He also believes that I do not quite agree with. Its not a good way to because. I find it + adj.+ to I think chatting is not a bad way.,It is +adj.+ for me to I find it +adj + for me to do sth. Doing sth is (动名词作主语） I have troubleproblems doing sth The problem my biggest problem is that. Another thing that troubles me is that,经典句型,中招作文中的经典短语,sosuchthat. not until not any more not onlybut also bothand neithernor the morethe more asas possible asas in order to prefer to do rather than do,Lets talk about,Your view on the Internet,1. We study or work with the Internet. 2. We can use the Internet to send emails. 3. We can chat with our freinds on the Internet. 4. We can shop on the Net. 5. There are lots of useful infermation on the Net.,Advangtages of the Internet,1. There are some bad web sites and they show us dirty things. 2. Some information on the Net may not be true. 3. We may chat with some bad people and they are dangerous to us.,Disadvangtages of the Internet,Nowadays, the Internet is more and more popular, and it has become a very important part in most peoples life.,The first paragraph,A lot of people work or study with the internet. By using the Interent, we can make frinds or chat with our friends. We can also send emails to our freinds. If we need information, we can get it on the Net. Some people even shop on the Internet.,The second paragraph,However, every coin has two sides. The Internet also has its disadvantages. For example, there are some bad wed sites that show us dirty things. And some of the information on the Net may not be true. Whats more, there are some bad people on the Net, and they may be dangerous to us.,The third paragraph,So, in my opinion, we can use the Internet to help us with our study and life, but at the same time, we should be careful to protect ourselves.,Ending,Nowadays, the Internet is more and more popular, and it has become a very important part in most peoples life. A lot of people work or study with the internet. By using the Interent, we can make frinds or chat with our friends. We can also send emails to our freinds. If we need information, we can get it on the Net. Some people even shop on the Internet. However, every coin has two sides. The Internet also has its disadvantages. For example, there are some bad wed sites which show us dirty things. And some of the information on the Net may not be true. Whats more, there are some bad people on the Net, and they may be dangerous to us. So, in my opinion, we can use the Internet to help us with our studay and life, but at the same time, we should be careful to protect ourselves.,一、 环保 1. It is widely known that its our duty to protect our environment. 2. It is very important to take care of our environment. 3. We should not throw litter onto the ground. 4. We should not spit in a public place/cut down the trees. 5. We should plant more flowers and trees. 6. We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin. 7. If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.,八类话题典型句子,书面表达： 请以“How Can We Protect the Environment?”为题，根据存在的问题(如污染、噪音、白色垃圾、伐树、浪费资源等), 从怎样节约资源、不到处扔垃圾，不用或少用塑料（plastic）袋、多植树少砍伐等方面来写一篇短文。开头部分已经给出。 词数：60-80 要求：语句准确流畅，内容有条理，字迹清楚，卷面整洁。 How Can We Protect the Environment? The environment is getting worse and worse. There is so much pollution on the earth. _,The environment is getting worse and worse. There is so much pollution on the earth. People can hear all kinds of noises and see the white trash everywhere. Many trees are being cut down every day and maybe we cant see any trees in the future. Wasting is also a big problem. So, what can we do to protect the environment? Everyone can turn off the shower and lights when we dont need them. We shouldnt drop litter everywhere. And we should try not to use plastic bags. Planting more trees and cutting down trees less is also a good way to protect the environment. In a word, everyone should try their best to stop it!,It is widely known that the environment is getting worse and worse. There is so much pollution on the earth, such as noise pollution , air pollution , water pollution and the white trash everywhere. At the same time , Many trees are being cut down every day. Wasting is also a big problem. So, what can we do to