《英语作文小经验》PPT课件.ppt

万能的英语长句 英语长句的万能,2010年12月英语四级作文类型及话题预测,Online Shopping 1. 很多人开始在网上购买商品 2.网上购物可能存在的问题 3.我的看法,首段：3句话= 背景+事实描述+举例说明 The past decade has witnessed the huge advancement of Information Technology (背景描述). And shopping through the Internet has gained great popularity among web suffers(主题事实描述). For instance, it can be noticed that an increasing number of youngsters purchase clothes, books, electrical equipment and the like on Taobao, EBay and Alibaba。(举例法扩展段落) (或：A case in point is the Group Purchasing, which attracts thousands of customers. 举例+定语从句),2段：问题分析4句话 = 主题句+ 危害1+危害2 +危害总结 In spite of the convenience and low price of this shopping, others argue that we can not turn a blind eye to its negative aspects. Firstly, they point out that the quality may not be as superior as it is described and sometimes, it is possible for customers to buy fake commodities. In addition, many customers find it troublesome to make a change when they are not satisfied. As has been noted, these do exert bad impacts。,尾段：解决措施(即我的看法)3句话 = 总说+建议+展望未来 As a customer, I am convinced that effective measures should be taken to enhance it。(总说看法) To be specific, it is suggested that regulations and rules should be worked out to scrutinize online shop owners. (或者：Specifically, shoppers are well-advised to be alert when purchasing online。) A promising online shopping is just awaiting us if we spare no effort to do so。,Online Shopping,According to a recent survey ,a growing number of people express a strong desire to do some shopping on the Internet in order to save more money and time. It is commonly thought that our society has been dramatically changed by modern science and technology ,and human has made extraordinary progress in knowledge and technology over the recent decade ,online shopping is absolutely one of the most interesting inventions. Although peoples lives have been dramatically changed over the last decades ,it must be admitted that ,credit is still one of the biggest questions that buyers and sellers nowadays have to face because that the money and the goods online cannot perfectly match each other .when it comes to online shopping ,the majority of people believe that online shopping is not safe .,62. According to a recent survey, a growing number of people express a strong desire to take another job or spend more time on their job in order to get more money to support their family. 根据最近的一项调查，越来越多的人表达了想从事另外的工作或加班以赚取更多的钱来补贴家用的强烈愿望。 46. It is commonly thought that our society has been dramatically changed by modern science and technology, and human has made extraordinary progress in knowledge and technology over the recent decades,+ 人们普遍认为我们的现代科技使我们的社会发生了巨大的变化，近几十年人类在科技方面取得了惊人的进步. 53. Although peoples lives have been dramatically changed over the last decades, it must be admitted that, shortage of funds is still the one of the biggest questions that students nowadays have to face because that tuition fees and prices of books are soaring by the day. 近几十年，尽管人们的生活有了惊人的改变，但必须承认，由于学费和书费日益飞涨，资金短缺仍然是学生们面临的最大问题之一。 6. When it comes to education, the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study. 说到教育，大部分人认为其是一个终生的学习。,组合长句,8. Proper measures must be taken to limit the number of foreign tourists and the great efforts should be made to protect local environment and history from the harmful effects of international tourism. 应该采取适当的措施限制外国旅游者的数量，努力保护当地环境和历史不受国际旅游业的不利影响。 38. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that advantages of bicycle far outweigh its disadvantages and it will still play essential roles in modern society. 通过以上讨论，我们可以得出结论：自行车的优点远大于缺点，并且在现代社会它仍将发挥重要作用。,In my opinion ,if we want online shopping develop better ,proper measures must be taken to improve the safety system of website and the great efforts should be made to protect buyers and sellers from the harmful effects of the people who dont want to obey the laws and rules such as some swindlers . From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that the safety of website is the most important thing of online shopping .,From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that the safety of website is the most important thing of online shopping . In conclusion ,if we want online shopping develop better ,proper measures must be taken to improve the safety system of website and the great efforts should be made to protect buyer and seller from the harmful effects of the people who doesnt want to obey the laws and rules such as some swindler .,From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that pr