级写作词汇句型升级.ppt

四级写作,从改卷员的角度,误解：高分=读起来是好文章 正解：高分=看起来像好文章 如何改卷： 抓壮丁心态 每天500篇以上 5篇范文对照（2、5、8、11、14分） 扫两点（错点&亮点）,关键三步,1.减少失误（拼写、语法、字迹） 2.语言升级-词汇和句型 一、词汇准确多变-高级词汇 二、句子变化多样-句型、语序、语态 3.多用关联词,Words, my swords!,改，桑田变沧海,词句升级的重要性,开头句大众脸：,With the development of science and technology, our life is more and more convenient.,词句升级的重要性,开头句明星脸： With the expansion of IT implication, our life is of increasing convenience.,词句升级的可操作性,开头句巨星脸： Thanks to the rapid expansion of IT-based implication, the convenience of our daily life is on the rise.,Words, my swords!,词汇升级16组,1.名词化,举例,The bicyle is important for us. The bicyle is of importancce for us. The bicyle plays an important role in our life. The bicycle, environmental friendliness vehicle, plays an important role in our life.,举例,As far as I am concerned. As far as I am firmly concerned. As far as the private cars are concerned, I firmly believe that,举例,I am offering thanks to my parents. I am, from my bottom heart, offering my gratitude to my loving parents.,遣词-N个“恶心”词汇,名词： people disadvantage advantage view government goal development,表达“人们”,万恶的“people” Some people believe that education is important. Other people do not agree. because no people can grow without it. 1.1 直接去掉 people Some believe that education is important. Others do not agree. because none can grow without it.,1. 表达“人们”,1.2 “人们”作主语的时候 翻译：一些人认为电子书对孩子是有好处的。 Some people believe that E-book is beneficial for kids. Individuals/ folks,1. 表达“人们”,1.3 表达“在人们中” 这个问题引起了人们热烈的讨论。 This has aroused hot discussion among people. the society the general public.,1. 表达“人们”,1.4 当“人们”与“自然”相对的时侯 翻译：人与自然的和谐共处 Harmonious coexistence between people and nature human beings mankind,1. 表达“人们”,1.5 表达“年轻人”时 young people The young people should shoulder the burden of developing our country. adolescents youths,1. 表达“人们”,Summary people 1.1 直接去掉 1.2 the society/ the general public 1.3 individuals/ folks 1.4 human being,二、 表达“优点”,advantage merit / virtue/ benefit/ strong points take advantage of sth? make full use of sths merit /virtue,二. 表达“优点”,merit /virtue 翻译：我认为两种意见都有好处而且可以共存。 I believe that both views have their own _ and can coexist. merits/ virtues,二. 表达“缺点”,disadvantage demerit/ drawback/ flaw/ shortcoming 拖后腿？坏处？代价？短板？瑕疵？,二. 表达“缺点”,demerit/ drawback/ flaw/ shortcoming 翻译：我认为我们应该利用互联网的好处而避免它的坏处。 From my point of view, it is wise to take advantage of internet while minimizing its drawbacks.,三. 表达“观点” view,view，opinion There are two opinions about this topic. perspective, standpoint , outlook, horizon,表达 “government”,government The government should take effective measures to stop it. authority/ authorities Its time for the universities to The university authorities,表达“goal”,goal Our main goal in universities is to develop our academic performance. objective; ambition; target; destination; intention; aim; purpose;,表达“development”,development With the rapid development of society modernization, globalization, industrialization,遣词-N个“恶心”词汇,动词： think encourage cause know expect try/ want to do sth努力、打算 finish, complete完成 like, be interested in喜欢 will/ would disagree with,我想，认为，觉得，思考，。：think harbor the idea that take the attitude that hold the view that it is widely shared that it is universally acknowledged that,低分： I believe (think)+宾从 高分： (2）句子，as I am firmly convinced. (3) It can be argued (assumed, concluded) that+从句 例句： I think we shouldnt judge others by their looks We shouldnt judge others by their looks, as I am firmly convinced. It can be concluded that we should ,表达“认为”,努力/打算做某事：try/want to do sth. endeavor to do sth. do ones utmost to do sth. spare no effort in doing sth. be motivated to do sth. be encouraged to do sth. be inspired to do sth. be willing(determined ) to do sth.,表达：“努力，想要做某事”,want/ try to do I want/ try to pass the CET-4 this semester. endeavor to do sth. do ones utmost to do sth. spare no effort in doing sth. be motivated to do sth. be inspired to do sth. be willing(determined ) to do sth. be encouraged to do sth.,表达：“喜欢”,like, be interested in I like/ am interested in reading books in the spare time. be obsessed/preoccupied with, be addicted to; be fascinated by, exerts a tremendous fascination on sb be hooked on, sth. appeals to sb., sth. ,表达“将会”,will/ would? 翻译：石油资源会在未来几十年被耗尽。 Petrol resource will be used up in a few decades. 6.1 is likely to 6.2 tends to,Exercise 1,翻译：大多数人认为，英语会变得更重要。 Most people think that English will become more important. According to most individuals, the significance of English tends to increase.,遣词-N个“恶心”词汇,形容词： important many, more and more good bad helpful different,表达“重要”,1 表达“重大，显著” 翻译：iPod是苹果公司最重大的发明之一 One of the most _ inventions of Apple company is iPod. significant remarkable predominant,表达“重要”,2 表达“关键的” 翻译：勤奋是成功的关键 Hard work is _ to success. essential,表达“重要”,3 表达“不可或缺” 翻译：数码产品已经成为日常生活不可或缺的一部分。 Digital products have become _ in daily life. indispensible,表达“重要”,4 一个黄金词组 翻译：互联网对开阔我们的眼界至关重要。 The Internet plays a _ role in widening our eyes. vital、decisive widen ones eyes? broaden ones horizons,表达“重要”,5 一个钻石句型 A is to B what perfume is to a flower. 众所周知，兴趣对于学习至关重要。 As is known to us, interests are to study what perfume is to a flower.,表达“重要”,Summary important 1 significant/ remarkable/fundamental 2 essential 3 indispensable 4 play critical/ crucial/ vital role 5 A is to B what perfume is to a flower.,表达“好” good,1 表达“对有好处” 翻译：上艺术班对孩子们是有好处的 Attending art classes is _good_ for kids. beneficial profitable,表达“好”,2 表达“好生活、好工作” decent 抓住这个好机会 catch this decent opportunity 工资待遇好 decent salary,表达“好”,3 表达“好主意” a good idea decent wise sensible fascinating fantastic,表达“好”,4 表达“优秀”（好学生、好产品） a good student outstanding extraordinary,表达“好”,5 表达“A比B更好” A is better than B. A is superior to B. 翻译：少数服从多数 Majority is superior to Minority.,12. 表达“坏”,1 表达“坏的，有不好后果的” harmful detrimental hazardous disastrous,表达“坏”,3 表达“A 比B 坏” A is worse than B A is subordinate/ inferior to B.,表达“许多”,翻译：很多人在金融危机中损失了很多钱。 可数：an astronomical number of the vast majority of , the overwhelming majority of numerous; an army of； 不可数：mass; a vast amount of An army of investors had lost a vast amount of money in the financial crisis. Numerous investors had gain a mass profit.,不同的 different various varied diverse diversified,我想，认为，觉得，思考，。：think harbor the idea that take the attitude that hold the view that it is widely shared that it is universally acknowledged that,低分： I believe (think)+宾从 高分： (2）句子，as I am firmly convinced. (3) It can be argued (assumed, concluded) that+从句 例句： I think we shouldnt judge others by their looks We shouldnt judge others by their looks, as I am firmly convinced. It can be concluded that we should ,表达“认为”,表达“helpful”,helpful It is helpful for us to eliminate this phenomenon. beneficial rewarding advantageous,遣词-N个“恶心”词汇,副词： very,一些表示程度的副词：very 如：very large house extremely large house tremendously large house substantially large house remarkably large house,1.名词化,1.1 形容词名词 翻译：知识非常重要。 Knowledge is very important. Knowledge is of great importance. *The importance of knowledge is obvious.,1.名词化,1.2 副词名词 翻译：我们需要客观地看待这个问题 We should look on this problem objectively. We should look on this problem in an objective way.,1.名词化,1.3 动词名词 We should take measures to save wild animals. We should take measures for the safety of wild animals.,1.名词化,Summary 1.1 be adj be of + n n is 1.2 adv in a adj way/manner 1.3 to do sth for sth,2. 双重否定,阅读文段的例子： It is generally believed that fashion is common in any country that has a strong consumer economy. In other words, fashion is not unique to the United States.,2. 双重否定,题目：Will E-books Replace Traditional Books? 传统书会一直存在就像电视机一直存在一样。 Traditional books will still exist just like that televisions have never disappeared.,3. 上层词,翻译：海外旅游价格越来越便宜，因此很多人选择海外旅行。 The price of oversea travelling is continuously dropping. Accordingly, a large number of people prefer_. these travelling/ tour lines this kind of recreation.,7. 比较级,翻译：她比他更聪明。 She is smarter than him. She is relatively smart compared with him.,8. 表达“许多”,翻译：很多人在金融危机中损失了很多钱。 可数：numerous; an army of；an overwhelming / astronomical majority of 不可数：mass; a vast amount of An army of investors had lost a vast amount of money in the financial crisis. Numerous investors had gain a mass profit.,9.,此句土，土在何处？,Nowadays, environmentally friendly products are becoming more and more popular.,9. 表达“现在”,Nowadays, environmentally friendly products are becoming more and more popular. currently in contemporary society in this day and age,Exercise 2,翻译：现在，很多人过上了比以前更好的生活。 Nowadays, many people live a better life than before. in contemporary society, a vast number