初中英语中考书面表达训练课件潘.ppt

Song Time,English Writing,英语书面表达训练,书面表达 目的在于考查学生应用各项语法知 识、正确进行书面表达的能力，善于 理解要点提示的内容，抓住要点和中 心思想的能力。,书面表达六步法,Writing steps:,一、中考中常见写作解题方法与技巧: 仔细审题，弄清题目要求，明确作文的中心思想，判断文章的类型:,（记叙文、议论文、说明文等）,(2) 仔细分析要点，确定要素。比如，故事发生 在何时、何地，要点中的人物为何人，他们做 了什么事，结果如何等。,Writing Skills,(3)，逐个要点描述, 意思要一致，语言文字要连贯，语法要正确无误: a.检查句子的语法结构; b.注意英汉表达的差异; c.检查字母大小写是否规范; d.名词单复数、形容词比较级、动词的时态等。,(4) 要详略得当得体, 尽量分段写。,(5) 把已写好的文章通读一遍，并结合 要点进行必要的检查、修改，力求全文 内容表达准确、完整，并最大限度减 少错误。,(6) 字数是否合乎要求。,Whos your favorite star?,Lets talk something about your favorite star.,Lets talk.,Lets enjoy the pictures.,图片欣赏,Who can you see?,Do you know him?,David . Beckham,He is my favourite football star.,贝克汉姆,材料作文:,假设你是一个足球迷,你喜爱的足球明星是英国的大卫 贝克汉姆(David Beckham).明天英语口语课讨论的话题是“我最喜欢的明星（My favourite star)”。 现在请根据下面的有关贝克汉姆的资料写一篇90字左右的 短文。 1.他是英国人，出生于1975年5月2日； 2.1991-2007年，他曾在曼联足球俱乐部（Manchester Untied Football Club) 和皇家马德里队（Real Madrid)踢球； 3.2007年7月他和他的家人一起前往美国，他现在效力于美国洛杉矶银河队（Los Angeles Galaxy); 4.贝克汉姆来过中国好几次，在中国有很多球迷。,写作分析,1. 这篇习作要求介绍足球明星贝克汉姆的人生经历，属于_。 2.根据所给材料，我们可按_依次进行介绍.最好分成三段写.,记叙文,时间顺序,文章开头第一段应点明:,He is fromand he was born.,“My favourite star is”.,接着介绍他的国籍和出生日期,可用 : _ 来表达,这是大家很熟悉的句型,但要注意 时态.,第二段重点介绍贝克汉姆的职业生涯, 即提示2和3要点给出的信息.如:“给踢 球,效力于”.可用短语:_ 来表示.,play for,最后一段介绍贝克汉姆的几次中国之 行以及在中国有很多球迷,即提示第4点 内容.“球迷”可以用_来表示.,fan,第六步 誊写,其次要考虑全文的人称和时态. 因为 是介绍性文章,所以应该用_. 本文涉及贝克汉姆的内容大多发生在 过去,所以要特别注意时态的运用.与现 在有关的一般情况用_, 如介绍他现在效力的球队; 与过去有关 的情况用_,如他在曼联踢球, 应用_.,第三人称,一般现在时,一般过去时,He played for.,材料作文:,假设你是一个足球迷,你喜爱的足球明星是英国的大卫 贝克汉姆(David Beckham).明天英语口语课讨论的话题是“我最喜欢的明星（My favourite star)”。 现在请根据下面的有关贝克汉姆的资料写一篇80字左右的 短文。 1.他是英国人，出生于1975年5月2日； 2.1991-2007年，他曾在曼联足球俱乐部（Manchester Untied Football Club) 和皇家马德里队（Real Madrid)踢球； 3.2007年7月他和他的家人一起前往美国，他现在效力于美国洛杉矶银河队（Los Angeles Galaxy); 4.贝克汉姆来过中国好几次，在中国有很多球迷。,Can you correct the mistakes?,找一找,错在哪?,My favourite Football Star,There are many famous football player in the world. David Beckham is one of them. He is my favourite football star. He was born in England in May 2,1975. Beckham played football very well. He played for Manchester United Football Club and Real Madried in 1991 and 2007. In July ,2007,he went to the USA with his family. Now he plays for Los Angeles Galaxy. Beckham came to China several times. He has lots of fans in China. They all love him.,players,on,plays,from,to,has been to,Are there any mistakes?,文段赏析,How to write a person?,My favorite Football Star,There are many famous football players in the world. David Beckham is one of them. He is my favourite football star. He was born in England on May 2,1975. Beckham plays football very well. He played for ManchesterUnited Football Club and Real Madried from 1991 to 2007. In July ,2007,he went to the USA with his family. Now he plays for Los Angeles Galaxy. Beckham has been to China several times. He Has lots of fans in China. They all love him.,Read them loudly(大声朗读),Now let me introduce another star to you . Do you want to know who heshe is?,Watch the video.,Maybe you know himher very well.,Guess.flv,Jackie Chan 成龙,Writing,请用六步法写一篇短文,Its time to practice writing.,课堂练习,某英语论坛正在就“我最喜爱的明星（My Favorite Star)”这一话题展开热烈的讨论。假设你最喜欢的明星是 成龙（Jackie Chan), 现在请你根据下面的提示发一篇帖 子向大家介绍成龙。 提示： 1.他是一位著名的国际功夫影星； 2.他有一个大鼻子和一头乌黑而有点卷的短发； 3.拍功夫片的工作很危险，但他总是非常认真，尽力做到 最好； 4.他非常乐于助人，常做慈善事业。,要求： 1.表达无误，逻辑清晰，语言简洁流畅； 2. 字数80左右，可适当发挥。,参考词：卷发 curly hair 功夫：Kung Fu 慈善：charity,Practicing time （练习时间）,动动笔，写一写,Share time,One possible version（参考范文）： My favorite Star-Jackie Chan Do you know Jackie Chan, the famous movie star in the world. He has a big nose and short, curly black hair? He is my favorite star. His work is dangerous , but he is always trying his best to do well in his movies. I like his Chinese Kung Fu best. He often helps others that need help and gives his money to charities. He is very helpful .I have learnt a lot from him.,Summary,What have we learned in this lesson?,Writing skills,一.审题 1. 主题， 2.几个要点； 3.人称、时态 句式； 4.要用哪些词语、句型表达； 二.写提纲 三.组织语言，联句成篇 1.上下文过渡词 because, or , but , and ,first, then,however , and so on 2.最后有感而发的语句。,四修改 1.信息点 2.单词拼写； 3时态、语态、主谓一致; 4.名词单复数、词组搭配; 5.词数; 6.表达式切换 7.标点符号.,Homework,巩固练习,假设你的美国朋友安娜在网上听了青花瓷这 首歌后喜欢上了周杰伦（Jay Chou),但她不懂汉语， 因此对周杰伦的了解非常少。现在请你根据以下提 示向她介绍一下周杰伦。 提示： 1.中等个头，有一头短发，眼睛不大。 2.有一副好嗓音，歌声很动听； 3.看起来很酷，许多年轻人很喜欢他； 4.非常受欢迎，自己独立创作了很多 歌曲。,要求： 1.表达无误，逻辑清晰，语言简洁流畅； 2. 字数90左右，可适当发挥。,Homework,Bye Bye,Thank you!,参考词汇：start (开办), finish ones studies, the Garden City, live a better life,One possible version: Bill Smith is a businessman from Australia. He is 45 years old. He likes computer and music. (There are three people in his family.) His wife is a doctor and his son is a student. He works hard and carefully. He is kind-hearted/kind and helpful. Bill Smith has started two big factories in Fuzhou. With his help, ten poor children have finished their studies. He is sure that the Garden CityFuzhou will be more and more beautiful and the people here will live a better life in the future.,3. 请以“I want to be a/an.”为题写一篇 短文，词数6080词。内容必须包括 提示中的三项要求，请不要使用真实 姓名及所在学校名称。 提示： What do you want to be? Why do you want to be a/an? How can you make it come true?,One possible version: I want to be an inventor Many people want to make their new ideas and wishes come true. They want to invent some new things for the world. I am one of them. I just want to be an inventor. Inventions can change the wor