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关键三步,1.减少失误（拼写、语法、字迹） 2.语言升级 3.模板句,词句升级的可操作性,开头句大众脸： With the development of science and technology, our life is more and more convenient.,词句升级的可操作性,开头句明星脸： As science and technology grow rapidly, our life is of increasing convenience.,词句升级的可操作性,开头句巨星脸： Thanks to the rapid advances in science and technology, the convenience of our daily life is on the rise.,词汇升级：,名词： people disadvantage advantage view government goal development,1. 表达“人们”,万恶的“people” Some people believe that education is important. Other people do not agree. However, all people need to study, because no people can grow without it. 1.1 直接去掉 people Some believe that education is important. Others do not agree. However, all need to study, because none can grow without it.,1.2 “人们”作主语的时候 翻译：一些人认为电子书对孩子是有好处的。 Some people believe that E-book is beneficial for kids. individuals,1. 表达“人们”,1.3 表达“在人们中” 这个问题引起了人们热烈的讨论。 This has aroused hot discussion among people. the society the general public,1. 表达“人们”,1. 表达“人们”,1.4 当“人们”与“自然”相对的时侯 翻译：人与自然的和谐共处 _ coexistence between people and nature harmonious human beings mankind,1.5 表达“年轻人” The young people should shoulder the burden of developing our country. youths youngsters adolescents,1. 表达“人们”,1. 表达“人们”,Summary people 1.1 直接去掉 1.2 individuals 1.3 the society/ the general public 1.4 human being 1.5 youths/ adolescents,2. 表达“优点”,只能用advantage吗？ merit / virtue/ benefit/ strong points 翻译：我认为两种意见都有其优点而且可以共存。 I believe that both views have their own _ and can coexist. merits/ virtues,3. 表达“缺点”,只能用disadvantage吗？ demerit/ drawback/ flaw/ shortcoming 坏处？缺点？短处？弊端？瑕疵？,3. 表达“缺点”,demerit/ drawback/ flaw/ shortcoming 翻译：我认为我们应该利用互联网的好处而避免它的坏处。 From my point of view, it is wise to take advantage of internet while minimizing its drawbacks.,4. 表达“观点”,view，opinion There are two opinions about this topic. perspective, standpoint , outlook, viewpoint,5. 表达 “政府”,The government should take effective measures to stop it. authority/ authorities Its time for the universities to The university authorities,6. 表达“目标”,goal Our main goal in universities is to develop our academic performance. objective; ambition; target; destination; intention; aim; purpose,7. 表达“发展”,development With the rapid development of society growth, advance, expansion, modernization, globalization, industrialization,词汇升级,形容词： important many good bad helpful different,1. 表达“重要”,1.1 表达“重大，显著” 翻译：iPod是苹果公司最重大的发明之一。 One of the most _ inventions of Apple company is iPod. significant remarkable predominant,1. 表达“重要”,1.2 表达“关键的” 翻译：勤奋是成功的关键。 Hard work is _ to success. essential,1. 表达“重要”,1.3 表达“不可或缺” 翻译：数码产品已经成为日常生活不可或缺的一部分。 Digital products have become _ in daily life. indispensable indispensbl,1. 表达“重要”,1.4 一个黄金词组 翻译：互联网对开阔我们的眼界至关重要。 The Internet plays a _ role in widening our eyes. vital widen ones eyes? broaden ones horizons,1. 表达“重要”,Summary important 1 significant/ remarkable/ fundamental 2 essential 3 indispensable 4 play critical/ crucial/ vital role,2. 表达“好”,2.1 表达“对有好处” 翻译：上艺术班对孩子们是有好处的。 Attending art classes is _good_ for kids. beneficial 翻译：他们发现交流思想是有好处的。 They found it good to exchange ideas. profitable,2. 表达“好”,2.2 表达“好生活、好工作” decent 抓住这个好机会 seize this decent opportunity 相当不错的薪水，工作，住所 decent salary/ job/ place to live,2. 表达“好”,2.3 表达“好主意” a good idea brilliant sensible terrific fantastic,2. 表达“好”,2.4 表达“优秀，杰出”（好学生、好产品） a good student outstanding extraordinary excellent distinguished top-quality,2. 表达“好”,2.5 表达“A比B更好” A is better than B. A is superior to B. 翻译：人类思维总会胜过机器。 Human mind is always superior to machines.,3. 表达“坏”,3.1 表达“坏的，有不好后果的” harmful detrimental ,detrimentl 有害的，不利的 hazardous hzds 有害的，危险的，有风险的 disastrous极糟糕的，灾难性的,3. 表达“坏”,3.2 表达“A 比B 坏/差” A is worse than B A is inferior to B. 翻译：现代音乐常被认为不如过去的。 Modern music is often considered inferior to that of the past.,4. 表达“许多”,翻译：很多人在金融危机中损失了很多钱。 可数： a large number of; numerous 不可数：mass; a vast amount of A large number of investors had lost a vast amount of money in the financial crisis. Numerous investors had gain a mass profit.,5. 表达“有助于”,Regular exercise is helpful for good health. Regular exercise is conducive to good health. conducive rewarding beneficial advantageous,6. 表达“不同的”,Different people have different opinions. To this issue, different people hold various attitudes. When it comes to, perspectives vary from person to person. There is no consensus of opinion in society on this issue.,different various varied diverse diversified,6. 表达“不同的”,词汇升级,动词： think 认为 try/ want to do sth. 努力、打算 like 喜欢 will/ would 将会 副词： very nowadays 短语： more and more for example,想，认为，觉得，思考：think harbor the idea that take the attitude that hold the view that it is widely shared that it is universally acknowledged that,低分： I believe (think)+宾从 高分： 主句，as I am firmly convinced. 或 It can be assumed / concluded that+从句 低分句：I think we shouldnt judge others by their looks. 高分句: We shouldnt judge others by their looks, as I am firmly convinced.,表达“认为”,try/want to do sth. endeavor to do sth. do ones utmost to do sth. spare no effort in doing sth. be motivated to do sth. be encouraged to do sth. be inspired to do sth. be willing(determined ) to do sth.,表达“努力，想要做某事”,表达：“喜欢”,like I like reading books in the spare time. enjoy / be fond of / be keen on take delight in doing sth. have a liking for sth. be obsessed with be addicted to be fascinated by sth. appeals to sb.,表达“将会”,will/ would? 翻译：石油资源会在未来几十年被耗尽。 Petrol resource will be used up in a few decades. is likely to tends to,Exercise,翻译：大多数人认为，英语会变得更重要。 Most people think that English will become more important. According to most individuals, the significance of English tends to increase.,如：very large house extremely nervous enormously successful highly necessary extraordinarily moving remarkably accurate,表达“非常”,此句土，土在何处？ Nowadays, environmentally friendly products are becoming more and more popular.,表达“现在”,Nowadays, environmentally friendly products are becoming more and more popular. currently in contemporary society in this day and age,Exercise,翻译：现在，很多人过上了比以前更好的生活。 Nowadays, many people live a better life than before. Currently, a vast number of individuals live a relatively decent life compared with the past.,表达“越来越”,越来越多的刚刚毕业的大学生发现越来越难找到好工作。 初级版 More and more college graduates who have just graduated from university find that finding a good job is more and more difficult.,表达“越来越”,越来越多的刚刚毕业的大学生发现越来越难找到好工作。 中级版 A growing number of fresh graduates find that obtaining a decent job is increasingly difficult.,表达“越来越”,越来越多的刚刚毕业的大学生发现越来越难找到好工作。 高级版 The difficulty of being employed by a decent employer is on the rise, as the number of fresh graduates grows.,表达“越来越”,more and more adj.= increasingly adj = n. is on the rise more and more n. = a growing number of n. = the number of n. is growing,表达“例如”,for example / for instance take sth. as a typical/ vivid / concrete example a typical/ vivid case in point is,三招提升词汇,输出类项目（写作、口语）要偷师输入类项目（阅读、听力） 考察以下的阅读文段： Indeed, until two centuries ago, the West was so backward in agriculture compared with China, that the West was the underdeveloped world in comparison with the Chinese developed world.,1.名词化,1.1 形容词名词 翻译：知识非常重要。 Knowledge is very important. Knowledge is of great importance. The importance of knowledge is obvious.,1.名词化,1.2 副词名词 翻译：我们需要客观地看待这个问题。 We should look on this problem objectively. We should look on this problem in an objective way.,1.名词化,1.3 动词名词 We should take measures to save wild animals. We should take measures for the safety of wild animals.,1.名词化,Summary 1.1 be adj. be of + n. n. is 1.2 adv. in a adj. way/manner 1.3 to do sth. for sth.,2. 双重否定,阅读文段的例子： It is generally believed that fashion is common in any country that has a strong consumer economy. In other words, fashion is not unique to the United States.,2. 双重否定,题目：Will E-books Replace Traditional Books? 传统书会一直存在就像电视机一直存在一样。 Traditional books will still exist just like that televisions have never disappeared.,3. 上层词,阅读文段的例子： Headache has arrived with the cold and wet conditions. The illness is striking almost everybody from infants to the elderly.,3. 上层词,好处：避免表达的重复；比较容易想到 再看一个阅读例子： Higher water levels in the lake area may also damage bamboo woods. That means giant pandas, which feed on these plants will suffer, too.,3. 上层词,翻译：艺术班如雨后春笋般涌现，不少家长把孩子送到这些艺术班。 Various art classes keep rolling in and a great number of parents send their kids to_. these art schools such kind of supporting education,写作句型,高分作文标志:,1.是否长短句交叉使用 2.是否会使用插入语 3.用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词 4.关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词 5.句型使用是否准确、地道,写作的“三项基本原则”,一、 长短句原则 As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar. 长短句结合，抑扬顿挫,二、 主题句原则,文章一定要有主题句，切忌“群龙无首”！ It is generally accepted that one should never expect a reward when doing a good deed. Seemingly justifiable, however, it is not always the case. 文章的开头（保险型）或者结尾，让读者一目了然， 隐藏主题句则会冒很大风险！,三、 一二三原则,“一、二、三” 是关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚，条理清晰，有逻辑 to begin with, additionally, furthermore, finally for a start, in addition, to sum up first and foremost, besides, last but not least most important of all, moreover, finally for one thing, for another thing on the one hand, on the other hand,作文加分句型,1. It is universally acknowledged that (众所周知.) It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us. 类似表达： There is a growing recognition that It is generally accepted that There is no doubt that There is no denying that ,作文加分句型,2. A pose to B 或者 A place / put on B （对造成了) Pollution poses a great threat to our existence. Rapid population growth will put/place a strain on economies around the world.,作文加分句型,3. It is high time + S + 过去式 (该是.的时候了) It is, therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the authorities. (therefore, however等常可作为插入词放在中间；applicable 替代 proper, approaches 替代 ways, implement 替代 carry out , authorities 替代 government),作文加分句型,4. It is no exaggeration to say that (可以毫不夸张地说) It is no exaggeration to say that telecommunications bring huge benefits as well as great convenience to our daily life.,作文加分句型,5. time phrase + witnessed (过去的时间见证了什么事的发生) The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of e-books.,作文加分句型,6. Adj. + as + Subject(主词)+ be, S + V. (虽然.) Wealthy as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory.,作文加分句型,7. As a classic proverb goes that As a classic proverb goes that no garden is without weeds, computers do play a positive role in the development of people lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts.,作文加分句型,8. 英语中多用被动句 Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.,篇章结构,文章结构：起承转合，清晰严谨 英文文章的逻辑性都比较严谨，无论是整个篇章还是各个段落，通常都是“总分总”结构。 内容：紧扣命题，有理有据 平时应多阅读中英文报刊，积累观点，扩大知识面，这样写作时才能有丰富的素材来充实文章的内容。,(1) 起：启动观点，开篇点题 第一段和每段的第一句话是“起”，其作用在于启动整篇文章或整个段落。常用的关联词有：currently、nowadays、at present等。,(2) 承：观点承接，正面论证 第二段和每段的中间部分是“承”。 常用的关联词有以下三种： 分类论证： in the first place、first and foremost、above all、to begin with、on the one hand、for one thing等；in the second place、besides、furthermore、moreover、in addition、whats more、on the other hand、for another等； (the)last but not (the) least、even worse、more importantly等。 举例论证：for example、for instance、a case in point is等。 解释论证：indeed、in fact、certainly、obviously、truly等。,(3) 转：观点转折，反面论证 第二段和每段的中间部分既可以“承”，又可以“转”。基础好的考生可以考虑用“转”，即进行反面论证，对问题进行逆向思维。此时可以选择使用yet、instead、whereas、otherwise、by contrast、in comparison、conversely、nevertheless、unfortunately、on the contrary等精彩表达，用以代替but、however等普通表达。,(4) 合：文章结尾，合并归纳 第三段以及每段的最后一句话是“合”，用以总结整篇文章或整个段落。在议论文和说明文中，表示“合”的关联词可以使用三次，分别用在第三段首句和第二、三段的尾句，如下所示： 因此：thus、hence、therefore、accordingly、consequently、as a result等。 总之：in conclusion、in general、by and large、on the whole等。 简言之：in short/brief、briefly speaking、in a word、to sum up等。,以2012年6月作文为例,Write an essay entitled The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication. Your essay should start with a brief description of the picture.,Father: Hi sweetie, how was school today? Daughter: You can read all about it on my blog, dad.,得分要点提示： 根据去年官方的评分标准解释：该作文类型既考表达，又考理解。即：1)The impact of the Internet on interpersonal communication; 2)对于对话的评论：“Dad：Hi sweetie, how was school, today? Daughter: You can read all about it on my blog, Dad.“ 如果只写网络对于人际交流的影响，而没有对图片里的信息作出评论。作文评分时，会受到很大影响。,As is described in the picture, a father wants to inquire about his daughters school day. Instead of answering directly, the daughter asks him to visit her blog. It is not uncommon that youngsters nowadays incline to communicate v