中学生高考英语必备材料5拓展句.ppt

谈论你个人对网上购物的看法。 (主题句引入看法) In my view, we must have a positive attitude towards online shopping. On one hand, online shopping has its advantages. Firstly, it is much cheaper. As far as Im concerned, online stores offer lower prices to the customers and some dont charge delivery fee if we buy more than one. Secondly, it is more convenient as customers neednt walk store after store for what they like. And its easier for them to compare products online. On the other hand, online shopping has its disadvantages. In a way, it is unsafe to buy goods by credit card. In addition, it is impossible to check the quality. Sometimes the goods we receive are not what we want, so we may be cheated and waste money. (拓展句正反式+列举式),列举式,一方面利用正反式谈论其优点和缺点，另一方面利用列举式分别谈其优点或缺点。,如何拓展主题句？,列举式,谈论“互联网对人们生活带来的影响” (主题句）The Internet plays a vital role in our daily life. （拓展句）It not only provides people with amounts of latest information, but also changes the way people communicate with each other. Besides / Moreover, the Internet enables people to go shopping at home easily and conveniently.,递进式,提供最新信息;改变交流方式; 网上购物,方便快捷,说明原因,你读完这个故事（目标的重要性）的感受。 （主题句-感受）I was deeply inspired by such a story,( 拓展句-原因 ) as it makes me realize the power of a goal in shaping ones success and gives me strength to pursue my goal, despite the hardships I am to go through .,你对国家“禁止商场免费提供塑料袋”的看法。 （主题句-看法）It is necessary for government to forbid shops from offering free plastic bags.,（拓展句-结果）With this ban, shopping customers would gradually form a habit of bringing environmentally friendly bags with them so that the consumption of plastic bags would be greatly reduced.,说明结果,就“诚信的重要性”的主题发表看法，要点1）你读后的感受。 （主题句-感受）After reading the story ,I feel it is important to be honest. (拓展句)Its obvious that an honest person will definitely win the respect from others, which is of great importance in our study and daily life, let alone in the business world. However, a dishonest person will lose his fame and trust from others sooner or later. No matter how intelligent he is, dishonesty will ruin his future.,正反式,勇于认错和道歉的重要性。 （主题句重述要点）Since nobody is perfect and everybody may make mistakes , it is of great importance for us to deal with mistakes properly whenever we are mistaken. (拓展句）(反面）As people say, denying a fault doubles it. If we refuse to admit our mistakes when we are wrong, we will not be accepted and forgiven by others.,（正面） On the contrary , if we admit mistakes and apologize sincerely, others will be likely to forgive us ,which makes us closer to each other.,正反式,就“如何减少交通事故”的主题谈论人们应该如何避免交通事故。 What can we do to avoid traffic accidents? As to drivers, careful driving is of great significance. Drivers should never try drunk driving (酒后架车). Moreover, they should keep their emotions under control and respect others. On the other hand, pedestrians and cyclists should strictly obey the traffic rules. Besides, they should value their own lives.,相关式 相关式是指围绕决定事物的相关因素谈论问题的方法。,我们可以围绕造成交通事故的相关因素如司机和行人来谈论如何避免。,相关式 / 关联式,(主题句) To rid ourselves of the terrible accidents, we should take some measures to change the situation. In the first place, we students should be more aware of the importance of safety. Only by doing so can we protect us from danger immediately. On the other hand , schools should educate students to promote their awareness of safety. Furthermore, more equipment such as monitors should be installed on campus and management should be strengthened to guarantee the safety of teachers and students. (拓展句: 递进式 + 相关式 ),你对考试作弊的看法。 （主题-明示观点）In my opinion, this phenomenon will have a very bad effect on middle school students study habit.（拓展句）（细化）Those who usually cheat in exams will never treat study seriously again because they believe they will always get good marks without working hard.,Those who never cheat in exams will consider its unfair for them, thinking studying hard is not necessary.,细化主题,就“如何看待外貌”的主题举例发表看法 要点：举例：某某 As the saying goes, “Never judge a man by his looks.” What makes a person beautiful is his attractive personality rather than his physical appearance(主题句). In one of my previous classes, there was a beautiful girl named Lucy who had almost a perfect face and slim figure. But she treated her beauty in a matter-of-fact way (平淡的方式) and she was kind to everyone. Her personality was accepted by others and it made her an outstanding beauty. (拓展句),类似故事或经历故事归纳,(主题句:引入经历）This reminds me of the story of my friend, Lily. Being a high school student, she has to live in dormitory in spite of the fact that her home is not far away from the school. It happened to be a Friday afternoon. Thinking of spending the weekend with her family, Lily ran quickly out of the classroom. She was so happy that she crossed the street without paying no attention to traffic lights. All of sudden, there came a bus and knocked her down . Fortunately, it was not so serious, but she was too frightened and even could not stand up by herself.（拓展句: 举例子适当增加情感态度）,遇到举例的写作要点，有时虽能将思路展开，把故事的经过表述清楚，但往住缺乏生动性，因此，表达时可有意识地多一些人物的心理活动的描写及情感态度表达，使之达到锦上添花的效果。如： So upset was I that I was unwilling to make an apology to him. Fortunately, with the help of him, I gradually realized the importance of being honest. Much to my delight, due to my honesty, one year later, I became one of the popular students in my class.,类似故事或经历故事归纳,写作内容 1. 以约30个词概括短文的要点； 2. 以约120个词就这“学生安全问题”发表看法，并包括如下要点： 1）请谈谈你读完这则新闻的感受； 2）请讲述你自己或身边朋友的有关经历； 3）应采取何种措施保护学生的安全？,范文欣赏,（第一段: 概括） A lot of students died because of a variety of accidents, including food poisoning, drowning and traffic accidents. In fact, the major reasons for those accidents are students poor safety awareness and the poor management in school. (37) （主题句感受）After learning the sad news, I was totally shocked and wanted to express my profound grief over the victims. I wonder why more and more accidents happen around us. despite the rapid development of our society. （拓展句-说明原因）,范文欣赏,(主题句:引入经历）This reminds me of the story of my friend, Lily. Being a high school student, she has to live in dormitory in spite of the fact that her home is not far away from the school. It happened to be a Friday afternoon. Thinking of spending the weekend with her family, Lily ran quickly out of the classroom. She was so happy that she crossed the street without paying no attention to traffic lights. All of sudden, there came a bus and knocked her down . Fortunately, it was not so serious, but she was too frightened and even could not stand up by herself.（拓展句: 举例子适当增加情感态度）,(主题句) To rid ourselves of the terrible accidents, we should take some measures to change the situation. In the first place, we students should be more aware of the importance of safety. Only by doing so can we protect us from danger immediately. On the other hand , schools should educate students to promote their awareness of safety. Furthermore, more equipment such as monitors should be installed on campus and management should be strengthened to guarantee the safety of teachers and students. (拓展句: 递进式 + 相关式 ),1.首先确定第二部分的要点有几个。 2.然后确定段落数,一般是一个要点一个段落。 3. 认真研读各要点,组织好写作思路,避免审题不清。 4.各段开展要遵循先定主题句,然后拓展句,最后结论句(结论句多数出现在最后一段)的规律。 5. 拓展句要以读的任务为标准，学会灵活运用文章给出内容，总之要懂得“聪明的拿，聪明的用”。同时拓展句子可结合多种方法，使得文章层次分明，更加生动。,总结小结:,总之, 构思清晰才能有的放矢，条理、结构清晰。在写作时除了锤炼自己的语言之外，组织好自己的写作思路，令到自己有话可言，而且是言之有理，言之有序，一定能取得令自己意想不到的高分！,书面表达上下文如何衔接过渡？,1）to begin with then furthermore finally,2）to start with next in addition finally,3）first besides last but not least,4）on one hand on the other hand,5) for one thing， for another thing，,1.顺序 ：,2.让步：,although ， after all,in spite of,despite,even if,whatever may happen.,3.转折：,however,rather than,instead of ,unfortunately,4.比较:,like/,similarly /,likewise /,in the same way /,equally,5.对比 :,while /,on the other hand /,unlike/,different fro