高考英语书面表达讲解(示范课课件).ppt

To better your writing 让你的作文 起来,Yongchuan middle school Du Gaoyan,书面表达评讲之: 建议性书信文体,“亮”,25,20-30minutes 80-120words,clear 清楚 accurate 准确 logical 逻辑 fluent 流畅,英语书面表达？ 语文作文？,No!,09年高考书面表达（重庆卷） 国外某网站举办新的一轮网上讲座活动，正面向全球中学生征集话题。假设你是新华中学的学生李华，经常访问该网站。现请你用英文给该网站发送一封电子邮件，向其推荐话题。内容包括: 自我介绍 写信目的 话题：我们应该感恩（thankful). 推荐理由 预祝活动成功 注意：1.词数100左右; 2.邮件格式已为你给出； 3.邮件出不能出现本人信息；4.在答题卡上作答。,A piece of a students work(学生作品） My name is Li Hua. I am a student and I study in XinHua Middle School. I often visit your web, and from it I know you are finding theme from students all over the world. Now, I write this letter because I want to recommand a theme. We should thankful is a good theme. Our father and mother throw thick and thin raise us, we should be thankful to them. Our teacher teaches us how to study, leading a lot of knowledge into our head. we should thank to them. as a Chinese, we should be thankful, because where there is thankful, therere hopes to make the world better, and only with a thankful heart, we can realize how beautiful life is. I really hope you can choose my theme. I wish the activity will have an successful end.,15分,What makes a good piece of writing?,1.neat writing书写,2. content内容,3. structure结构,4. language语言,Good first impression,Well organized and smoothly developed,Everything required included,No Chinglish No Grammatical mistakes exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns,应用文写作五部曲,step1 topic exploring 审题,step2 wording 构词,step3 sentence making 成句,step4 essay writing 成篇,step5 improving 修订,Step1 审题,1 审体裁,2 审人称,3 审时态,4 审要点,定文章结构,09年高考书面表达（重庆卷） 国外某网站举办新的一轮网上讲座活动，正面向全球中学生征集话题。假设你是新华中学的学生李华，经常访问该网站。现请你用英文给该网站发送一封电子邮件，向其推荐话题。内容包括: 自我介绍 写信目的 话题：我们应该感恩（thankful). 推荐理由 预祝活动成功 注意：1.词数100左右; 2.邮件格式已为你给出； 3.邮件出不能出现本人信息；4.在答题卡上作答。,三段式,总,分,总,自我介绍 写信目的,话题（我们应该感恩） 列举理由,预祝活动成功,in brief,in detail,in brief,Step2 wording,拼写 词性 近义词 同音词 单复数 冠词 大小写,Simple mistakes leave a bad impression!,My name is Li Hua. I am a student and I study in XinHua Middle School. I often visit your web, and from it I know you are finding themes from students all over the world. Now, I write this letter because I want to recommand a theme. We should thankful is a good topic. Our father and mother throw thick and thin raise us, we should be thankful to them. Our teachers teach us how to study, leading a lot of knowledge into our head. we should thank to them. as a Chinese, we should be thankful, because where there is thankful, therere hopes to make the world better, and with a thankful heart, we can realize how beautiful life is. I really hope you can choose my theme. I wish the activity will have an successful end.,be,a,As,looking for topics,recommend,topic,topic,through thick and thin,thankfulness,17分,step3 sentencing 成句,1 简单句,2 并列句,3 复合句,4 非谓语形式,5 特殊结构,时态，语态,别忘了并列连词,No Chinglish!,连词的选择,主语一致,避生就熟！,强调句型；倒装； 独立主格结构,1. My name is Li Hua. I am a student and I study in XinHua Middle School.,2. I often visit your web, and from it I know you are looking for topics from students all over the world.,I am Li hua, a student from Xin Hua Middle school.,Improve your sentences.,I often visit your website, where I got the news that youre looking for topics from students all over the world.,1. We should thankful is a good theme. 2. Our father and mother through thick and thin raise us, we should be thankful to them. 3. Our teacher teaches us how to study, leading a lot of knowledge into our head,we should thank to them. 4. Only with a thankful heart, we can realize how beautiful life is. 5. I really hope you can choose my theme. 6. I wish the activity will have a successful end,Have a try!,1.We should be thankful is a good topic.,That we should be grateful is a good idea.,2.Our father and mother through thick and thin raise us, we should be thankful to them.,It is our parents who brought us up through thick and thin, so we should thank them.,3.Our teachers teach us how to study, leading a lot of knowledge into our head. we should thank them.,We owe our teachers thanks, for we couldnt be who we are now without their hard work.,4.As a Chinese, we should be thankful, and only with a thankful heart, we can realize how beautiful life is.,Thankfulness is also our traditional Chinese virtue.,Only with a thankful heart, can we fully realize how beautiful life is.,5.I really hope you can choose my topic.,I would really appreciate it, if my topic is chosen. Hopefully, my topic will be chosen.,6. I wish the activity will have an successful end.,Wish the activity a great success. May your activity succeed.,Step4 成篇 That we should be thankful is a good idea. It is our parents who brought us up through thick and thin, so we should thank them. We owe our teachers thanks, for we couldnt be who we are now without their hard work. Thankfulness is also our traditional Chinese virtue. Where there is thankfulness, there are hopes to make the world better. Only with a thankful heart, can we fully realize how beautiful life is.,In my opinion,firstly,besides,Whats more,Necessary conjunctions make a pieces a writing more smoothly developed.,应用文写作五部曲,step1 topic exploring 审题,step2 wording 构词,step3 sentence making 成句,step4 essay writing 成篇,step5 improving 修订,draft (草稿）,Now, Lets check whether our writing has been improved in content, structure and language ? 我们的文章亮起来了么？,Im Lihua, a student from Xin Hua Middle School. I often visit your website, where I got the wonderful news that youre looking for topics from students all over the world. Here, Im writing to recommend one. In my opinion, that we should be thankful is a good idea. Firstly, it is our parents who brought us up through thick and thin, so we should thank them. Besides, we owe our teachers thanks, for we couldnt be who we are now without their hard work. Whats more, thankfulness is also our traditional Chinese virtue. Where there is thankfulness, there are hopes to make the world better. Only with a thankful heart, can we fully realize