《高三英语书面表达》PPT课件.ppt

高二政治,文成职业技术学校 郭霞,Writing,What happened ?,It turned into ruins only 3 minutes after the earthquake.,A terrible earthquake hit the Wenchuan County县. 袭击,Can you talk about the terrible earthquake which hits Wenchuan ?,2. Where did the earthquake hit (袭击)firstly?,The earthquake happened at 2:28pm on May 12th, 2008.,The earthquake hit Wenchuan county firstly, and then it spread to almost half a country quickly . 波及,1. When did the earthquake happen?,What damage did the earthquake cause?,Thousands of buildings collapsed.倒塌,Many people were buried 被掩埋 under the ruins 废墟下,More than 50,000 people were killed by the earthquake,The injured 伤员 were over 240,000.,More than 5 million refugees 难民become homeless.流离失所无家可归,Almost all the kind-hearted people try their best to help those victims.,Survivors幸存者,The soldiers were busy rescuing those survivors.幸存者,An orphan baby,Students are contributing money to the Sichuans victims.,The China Red Cross Society(中国红十字会) are receiving donations from home and abroad.,Li Lianjie donated one million Yuan to help Sichuans victims.捐赠现金1百万帮助灾民,捐 款,国 内 外,A terrible earthquake hits Sichuan,Write a passage to describe the earthquake and put it on the BBS,书面表达的五个步骤,1. 仔细审题，找出主题 (Read the directions carefully, look through all the words or pictures given to you in order to find the main idea.),line 1: line 2： line 3: line 4： line 5:,hit Wenchuan County, at 2:28 pm on May12th,2. 找出关键词, 按顺序排列好 (Find out the keys words in each line),Covered/spread to, half a country,so that, save/rescue,Damage/loss, the injured , refugees, become homeless,kind-hearted people try their best to help those victims,3. 把中心词或词组扩展成句子。 (Extend the words and phrases to sentences.),背诵经典常用句型,提高写作水平,4. 把以上句子编排成一个段落，在必要的地方加入一些连接词或句子。 (Arrange these sentences in order, getting in some linking words where necessary.),1. 避免使用对其拼法、意义和用法没有把握、不熟悉 的词汇和句型，避免可以避免的错误。,2. 留心汉英表达差异, 避免中式英语。,3. 书写必须工整,确保不犯拼写错误 (以避免丢冤枉分)。,5. 通读全文，仔细检查。 (Read through the whole passage to make sure that no mistakes are made.),特别注意3点,earthquake,4. More than 50,000 people were killed by the earthquake, and the injured were over 240,000. Whats more, about 5 million refugees (灾民) become homeless(无家可归). 5. A large number of kind-hearted (有爱心的)people from all over the world are trying their best to contribute money to the Sichuans victims.,What did you learn from this lesson?,1. 有关地震词语 I have learnt the words or phrases about earthquake. 2. 3个句型 I have mastered the three sentence patterns. 3. 写作5步骤 I know how to write a passage better according to following the five steps. 4. 互帮互助 We should help each other when one need help instead of discovered in hand watching.,Yes,No,Homework,1.