英语作文之倡议书.ppt

What on earth do they care about?,1. 卷面 2. 分段 3 遣词造句 4. 过渡词 5. 内容要点,干净、整洁,篇章结构,选好句型，填内容,段落层次,全面、简单,A Proposal 倡议书,写倡议书的目的: 提倡开展某项有意义的活动、推行某种行之有效的作法。,倡议书通常包含以下内容: 在第一行正中标题处写出倡议的内容，字体较正文稍大。 2. 左边顶格写对倡议对象的称呼。,3. Structure Introduction 发出倡议的根据、原因和目的。 (B/T) 陈述所存在的问题 how serious is the problem (C) in brief, what solution do you propose?,2. Body 所倡议的具体内容和要求。 What do you want done?（P） How should it be done?（E） What things or people are needed?（E） When? How much will it cost?,3. Conclusion 要表示倡议者的决心和希望 （C）How will the proposal help ？ （Call) the person reading the letter a call to actionwhat do you want the reader to do,4. 结尾处要写上发倡议者的姓名和发出倡议的日期，通常写在右下角。,写倡议书时，尽量使用具有鼓动性和 感召力的语言，如名人名言、格言、 警句，以 提高语言的表达效果。例如，在倡议 书的结尾使用下列句子就可起到很好 的效果。,“Believe yourself and you can manage it! Stick to it, and your dream will come true!” “Dear friends, come on! If you think you can, you can!” “Please start from now on! You never know what you can do until you try!”,1. 在建议倡议的写作中, 应开门见山指出写作目的, 陈述建议或倡议的内容。如：I am writing to give suggestions about. (建议信)或In order to., I am going to make the following suggestions (倡议书)。,确定文体。建议信属于应用文信件类的范畴, 写作的时候一般使用将来时或者一般现在时。建议信在于给对方合理并且能够接受的建议, 考生应该注意使用一些委婉的语气。,2. 建议倡议类型的作文都有相关的一些固定句型, 考生需要熟练掌握使用这些句型和相关的语法。比如, 在句中使用到advise, suggest或advice, suggestion等表示建议的词时, 要考虑到虚拟语气的使用。,连句成篇。考生把句子合并成篇章的时候, 需要注意建议信常用的一些句型结构。如在建议信开头表示来信的目的, 如：You have asked me for my advice on.and I will try to make suggestions./ Thanks for trusting me. /Regarding., Id like to make some suggestions等句型。在表示建议的时候, 考生可以使用I feel that it would be beneficial if./ I would like to suggest that.等句型。另外, 考生若是使用虚拟语气的句子If I were you, I would., 也会让文章增色不少。,Polluted water Dear friends, As the chairman of the Environmental Protection Committee, I have no reason not to mention different kinds of pollutions we human beings are faced with(B). Amongthem, water pollution is one of the serious Problems(T). It threatens the survival of human beings, plants and animals(E). It is urgent that some strong measures should be adopted to solve the problem.(C) Introduction of the topic and himself/ threats / proposal),Since we are dependent on water, we should be involved in finding a solution to this problem.(B) We advocate that certain measures should be taken as soon as possible(T). | In the first place, (P1) the governments in both developed countries and the developing countries should lay down rules(指定规章制度） and regulations in respect of the pollution problem (E). Secondly, (P2) factories in towns and cities must be forbidden to drain（排放） waste liquids into rivers, lakes and seas before they are totally treated and purified（净化）. (E) (measures / difficulties ),I am certain that remarkable results will be achieved in this respect. Rivers which used to be polluted by industrial wastes will be cleaned and fish which could not live there a few years ago will be seen again. （C&W）Lets act now to make our world a better place.（Call） The chairman of EPC (foreseeable results/ a call),Assignments:,Write a proposal,Writing,假设你是学校学生会中的一员，为了拥有一个更美好的校园，你发出了全员环保的倡议，并制作了如下图的海报。,倡议内容: 1）捡起垃圾； 2）走路上学； 3）牢记关水和关电； 4）循环利用资源； 5）爱护校园的每一寸土地。,写作提示 1. 环保是我们中学生义不容辞的责任； 2. 我们要养成这些环保习惯； 3. 让我们人人都为地球母亲尽一份绵薄之力（120词左右）,Dear friends, Do you want to live in a beautiful world? So it is our obligation to maintain the ecological balance. To fulfill this task, we should bear the following ecological codes in mind. First, while sticking to the habit of walking to school, we should eat at least five kinds of fruits and vegetables a day. Its also important to recycle everything recyclable and cherish our schools en