近四年六级作文试题汇总.ppt

Part Writing (30 minutes),注意：此部分试题在答题卡1上。 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Digital Age. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.,What?,1.题型分类 2.评分标准,作文类型(07-10),1.正反对比型 4 2.解释说明性 2 3.问题解决型 2,1.正反对比型（真题汇总4）,2010.12 My view on University Ranking 1.目前学校排名非常盛行 2.对于这种做法人们看法不一 3.在我看来。,2009年12月英语六级作文真题 现在有不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班; 1、对这种做法有人表示支持， 2、有人并不赞成; 3、我认为 Should parents send their kids to art classes?,2009年6月 On the Importance of a Name 有人说名字（或名称）很重要 也有人觉得名字（或名称）无关紧要 我认为。,2007年6月 Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed? 有人作了好事期望得到回报 有人认为应该像雷锋那样做好事不图回报 我的观点,2.解释说明性（真题汇总2）,2008年6月 Will E-books Replace Traditional Books? 随着信息技术的发展， 电子图书越来越多 有人认为电子图书会取代传统图书，理由是。 我的看法,2007年12月 The Digital Age 如今数字化的产品得到越来越广泛的使用，例如： 数字化产品的使用对人们工作，学习，生活产生的影响,3.问题解决型（真题汇总2）,2010.6 Due Attention Should Be Given To the Study of Chinese 1 近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文学习的现象; 2 出现这种现象的原因和后果; 3 针对这种现象我认为,2008年12月 How to improve Students Mental Health? 大学生的心理健康十分重要 为此，学校应该 我们自己应当,大学英语四级测试作文评分标准,2分：条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 5分：基本切题，表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重语言错误。 8分：基本切题，表达思想比较清楚，文章尚连贯，但语言错误较多，其中有少量的严重错误。,大学英语四级测试作文评分标准,11分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 14分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误。 字数不够扣分。（各段已给出的主题句均不得计入） 段落不够扣分。,评分的四个观测点,1.切题 2.表达思想 3.连贯性 4.语言错误,1.等分四要素 2.时间分配 3.模板 4.模板句,How1: 得高分四要素,a) 书写卷面工整。（作文没有草稿纸，也没有打 草稿时间，要训练一次写成功。） b) 要用模板句，使全文有逻辑性 不要全部套范文 c) 单词句子要有亮点，比如：I think可以写成：in my eyes; I firmly think; personally, I think. 多用副词：dramatically, increasingly, d) 无重大语法错误。如：Some people are begin; There are some people want ; Why happen these things? (Why+ 助动词+主语)等，考试会得低分。,How 2:写作应试技巧,5 minutes 一、审题 ，明确文体 二、主题句，放在文章开头，突出重点，也确保作文不偏题。把题目中的中文提纲译成英语，再加以修饰拓展，即主题句。 三、outline，结构、条理清晰,How 2:写作应试技巧,合理安排时间 5 分钟先审题，理清写作思路，写下重点句子，打好文章的大概框架。 20 分钟左右写文章。 2-5分钟检查文章。（1）大小写及单词的拼写；（2）搭配正确用词贴切；（3）语法正确，特别是人称、时态、和单复数的三“一致”；（4）段落间及句子间衔接自然流畅，逻辑性强。,3.应用的模板： The Typical &Classical Western Essay Pattern I,1.an event + intermediate sentences+ topic 2. supporting point 1 supporting point 2 supporting point 1 3.Summary,Sample (PA of U1:Unsung Dad),Even more insulting is the recent media trend of regarding at-home wives as “status symbols” like an expensive car flaunted by the supposedly few men who can afford such a luxury. (An event) The implication is that men with at-home wives have it easier than those whose wives work outside the home because they have the “luxury” of a full-time housekeeper. (intermediate sentences) In reality, however, the men who are the sole wage earners for their families suffer a lot of stresses.(topic) The loss of a job or even the threat of that happening is obviously much more difficult when that job is the sole source of income for a family. (SP1) By the same token, sole wage earners have less flexibility when it comes to leaving unsatisfying careers because of the loss of income such a job change entails.(SP2) In addition, many husbands work overtime or second jobs to make more needed money for their families.(SP3) For these men, it is the family that the job supports that makes it all worthwhile. It is the belief that having a mother at home is important to the children, which makes so many men gladly take on the burden of being a sole wage earner. (Summary),应用的模板： The Typical &Classical Western Essay Pattern II,Part I. an event-intermediate sentences-topic (controversy, argument, flamewar, spat) Part II. Views from some people Views from other people Part III The authors opinion 在第四册书中的应用： P B of Unit 4: Japenglish; PA of Unit 5: Moral advantages,应用的模板： The Typical &Classical Western Essay Pattern III,Part I. an event-intermediate sentences-topic (to Come up with the problems) Part II. To analyze the problems Part III To give possible solutions 在第四册书中的应用： PB of Unit 5: Volvos dealing,怎样些首段?,描述event的句子,1.Many students have been faced with the psychological problem because of growth pain or severe social competition. 2.Recently, the issue of students mental health has aroused great concern among parents, teachers and experts. 3.Nowadays,there is a growing concern over 4. Never in history has the idea of ranking universities been so popular/the phenomena of sending kids to art classes been so popular. 5.According to a recent survey, 60% students are bothered by/ students Chinese literacy is getting worse and worse . 6.The English proverb says,.This is quite true because 7.A common way of thinking about usually goes something like that:,过渡的句子,分析现象：It means/indicates The implication is 解释现象后的原因： The underlying reason behindare is preferable in many ways, and perhaps the most basic reason is that 递进The more I though about it, the more worried I felt/ the more serious the problem is 转折： Despite the fact that majority hold the opinion thatI doubt that Some people argue as if it is a general true that;but to be frank, I cannot agree with them for following reasons. Although the people arrive at/reach/achieve the common understanding of, their views/idea/ about its influence/future/impact are at opposite poles.,转折： Despite the fact that majority hold the opinion that e-books will replace traditional book but I doubt it. Some people argue as if it is a general truth that;but to be frank, I cannot agree with them for the following reasons. Although the people arrive at/reach/achieve the common understanding of, their views/idea/ about its influence/future/impact are at opposite poles.,提出topic,1.It leads to the controversy/spat/flamewar among 2. In fact, as a matter of fact 3. However,怎样写body?,描述优缺点或不同观点的句子,Advantages or opinions from one group of people: 1) Since its appearance, people have benefited a lot from it. 2) is/are playing an increasingly significant role / part in our lives / society. 3)Some people are in favor of/claims that/put firm faith on /give credit to Disadvantages or opinions from other people It has brought much harm to humans. Like anthing else, it has its faults. 3) Compared to/with the above opinions, other people take opposing views of 4) Some people take the opposing view that 5) Yet, other people stand in opposition to the above people. 6)However, other people stand on a different ground.,分析原因的句子,The reasons/causes/factor for are complex/varied/ profound. mainly/largely stems/derives/ results form the factors as follows. 3.The underlying reason behindare 4. Too much stress placed onmay lead to 5. Such a statement mainly rests on the assumption that 6. A number of factors are accountable for this situation. 7. The factors that contribute to this situation include 8.One of the basic/primary factor is that,句式联系法,Firstly,Secondly,Thirdly, For one thing,For another,Finally, In the first place,In the second place,Finally, On one hand,On the other hand, First of all,In addition,Consequently, To begin with, whats more, last but not the least,怎样写尾段?,说出自己的观点,批驳别人的观点,1.controvery to what is widely accepted, I maintain that 2. It is true that, but one vital points is being left out. 3. The main problems with this argument is that it is ignorant of the basic fact that 4.The above points is certainly true if considered. 5.there is a further more subtle point we must consider. 6.Another reason why I disagree the above statement is that I believe that ,解决问题,1.It is necessary that steps should be taken to 2It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop 3.There is no easy method, but might be some help. 4.To solve the above mentioned problems, we must 5.Only in this way/only when/only through, can/will we 6.As long as ,we will be able to /the problem is bound to 7.With the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly. 8.In summary，if we continue to ignore the abovementioned issue， more problems will crop up突然、意外地发生.,全文总结,1.From what has been discussed above，we can draw the conclusion that 2. Therefore it is safely to draw the conclusion that 3. All reliable evidence point to one saying , that is 4.With the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly.,End!,九句话模板,1. 引导句（套入标题）,2. 主题句,3. 展开句（简单描述）,4. 主题句（提出论点）,5.6.7.,论据1论据2论据3,8. 总结句（概括全文）,9. 结束句（重复主题,第一段,第二段,第三段,Class work,套用九句话模板,Stop Smoking,（1）吸烟的问题越来越受到人们的关注 （2）吸烟的害处 （3）你的想法,Model,(1) There has never been an agreement as to the issue of smoking. (2) Recently, however, more and more people begin to pay attention to this question. (3) They have realized that smoking does great harm to health.,Model,(4) The harm of smoking can be seen from the following. (5) First, it can cause cancer. (6) Second, it pollutes the environment. (7) Third, it causes great waste of money.,Model,(8) In short, smoking does great harm to health. (9) Effective measures should be taken to stop smoking.,Model ( developed one ),(1) There has never been an agreement as to the issue of smoking. (2) Recently, however, more and more people begin to pay attention to this question, and some even write to the government calling for policies to stop smoking. (3) They have realized that smoking does great harm to the health of smokers and non smokers as well.,Model ( developed one ),(4) The harm of smoking can be seen from the following. (5) First, it can cause cancer. A recent survey by the WHO shows, of the diseases which cause death every year, nearly one third has to do with smoking. (6) Second, it pollutes the environment. Cigarettes ends may dirty our air and water.(7) Third, it causes great waste of money. Is it wise to spend nearly thirty yuan each day for something which will kill you eventually?,Model ( developed one),(8) In short, smoking does great harm to health. (9) It is high time that effective measures be taken to stop smoking.,正反观点型作文模板 1,1. It is true that. 2. However,. 3.I think. 4. can be listed as follow. 5. First of all, 6. Secondly 7.For example 8.Thirdly, 9. A case in point is . 10.It goes without saying that 11.There is no doubt that 12.In conclusion ,模板二,1. Some people believe that. 2. The truth is deep and profound. 3. As we know,. 4. In addition,. 5. There are numerous examples 6. A case in point is 7.There is close to suggest 8.For another example 9.Moreover,. 10.All mentioned above tell us 11.But one thing we have to notice is that 12.In a word, ,现象解释型写作模板 1,1。has become a common part of peoples life. 2. Andhas always aroused the greatest concern. 3. what impresses us most is . 4. The reasonsare varied. 5. Among the various reasons,plays an important role. 6.That is to say, 7.What is more, 8.For example, 9When talking about， 10On the one hand 11On the other hand, 12In brief,解释说明型模板二,1.We have witnessed 2.According to ， 3.And 4.Many reasons contribute to 5. To begin with ,. 6.More over, 7.In addition , 8.As a result , 9.As to me,， 10.First of all, 11.Besides, 12.To conclude,现象解释型模板三,1. has been brought into focus. 2.Nowdays,. 3.In addition, . 4.Many reasons contribute to 5. Generally speaking ,. 6.First of all, 7.More over, 8.Therefore , 9.As far as I am concerned,， 10.As we known , 11.Furthermore, 12.In a word,问题解决型作文模板 1,1. With the development/improvement of ,. 2. It is necessary that. 3. On the one hand, . 4. On the other hand, 5. Therefore, how to is worth paying attention. 6.Firstly7.Secondly 8.For example,9. Thirdly, . 10.In other words, 11.In fact, ways to are countless. 12.Its time that ,模板二：,1. There has been a discussion recently abouot. 2. It is obvious that. 3. Additionally, . 4. So it is high time, 5. First of all, 6.The reason is7.Secondly 8.That is to say, 9. Thirdly, . 10.In fact, more than three ways can be adopted, 11.As for me, 12.All in all, ,模板三,1. It is certain that. 2. For one reason,. 3. For another, . 4. However, some still puzzle on how to . 5. Here come some suggesti