常见初中英语写作句式错误.ppt

,1. Many people cross streets dont see traffic lights. 2. They usually arent see the green “walk“ sign when they cross the street. 3.Many traffic accidents happen are every year to people.,Many people cross streets without looking at traffic lights.,Usually, they dont look at the traffic lights when they cross the street.,Many traffic accidents happen (to people) every year.,4. In order to protect these accidents happen again, . 5. Because they lack traffic safety awareness and catch up with tiem quickly. 6. Third, riding a bikes must be slow and careful.,In order to prevent / stop / keep / these accidents from happening again, .,Because they lack traffic safety awareness and are in a hurry.,Third, we must ride bikes slowly and carefully.,7. We would rather wait three minutes than save a second. 8. Some of them in order to catch the time, so they didnt obey the traffic rules,We would rather wait (for) three minutes to keep safe than die from crossing the road one second before the traffic lights turn green.,In order to save time, they dont obey / break the traffic rules.,9. A lot of people before crossing the road without looking traffic lights. 10. If the light is red, we dont walk until we see the light turns green.,Before crossing the road, a lot of people dont look at traffic lights.,We mustnt cross the road until the lights turn green.,1. Her age is over thirty (years old). 2. She came to Shanghai at three years ago. 3. She has lots of hobbies. Such as listen to music, play computer games, play golf and so on.,She is over thirty (years old).,She came to Shanghai three years ago.,She has lots of hobbies, such as listening to music, playing on the computer, playing golf and so on.,4. She also like to cook. 5. She has worked in teach English for ten years. 6. Her sons name is Jim that studys in Shang Hai.,She also likes cooking.,She has taught English for ten years.,Her son Jim studies in Shanghai, too. Her sons name is Jim and he also studies in Shanghai.,7. She often with a smile on her face. 8. She is a lot of hobbies. 9. She also like in order to make delicious food with my family.,She often smiles.,She has a lot of hobbies / interests.,She also likes making delicious food for her family.,10. She husband is a computer company engineer. 11. We are all like her very much. 12. She patients teach us a lot of useful knowledge.,Her husband is an engineer in a computer company.,She all like her very much.,She teaches us a lot of knowlege patiently.,13. She has teached English since she come to Shanghai three years old. 14. Some people always so nice. 15. Travelling also is one of her hobbies.,She has taught English since she came to Shanghai three years ago.,Some people are always so nice.,Travelling is also one of her hobbies.,16. When three years ago, she came to Shanghai teach English. 17. She works is very hard. 18. Her families except herself, her families have two people, her husband and her son.,Three years ago, she came to Shanghai to teach English.,She works (very) hard. / She is hard-working.,Besides herself, there are two other members in her family - her husband and her son.,19. Learn how to face to other people smile can make you make more friends. 20. Shes favorite colors is blue and white. 21. She is very patient teacher.,Learning how to smile to other people can help you make more friends.,Her favorite colors are blue and white.,She is a very patient teacher.,22. She work hard and she is kind of to students. 23. She say that reading make her enjoy. 24. Of cause, she aslo is smart woman.,She works hard and she is kind to students.,She says that reading makes her happy.,Of course, she is also a smart woman.,25. Hers face often keep smile. 26. She teach English already ten years. 27. Learn to smile to yourself. You will succeed.,There is often smile on her face. / She often smiles.,She has already taught English for ten years.,Learn to smile to yourself, and you will succeed.,28. If someone bad for you. You smiling. 29. Smile can changes the world. 30. When you give your friend a smile in he is need, he will more confident.,If someone is bad to you, you can still keep smiling.,Smile can change the world.,If you give your friend a smile when he is in need, he will be more confident.,31. Lets learn to smile and every day will be sunshine. 32. When you in a bad mood, you can smile to yourself. You can feel not badly. 33. She is look like tall.,Lets learn to smile and make every day full of sunshine.,When you are in a bad mood, you can smile to yourself. Then you will not feel so bad.,She is / looks tall.,34. We love she very much. 35. She come from the Canada. 36. She is often smile.,We love her very much.,She comes from Canada.,She oft