高三英语-高中英语书面表达训练.ppt

,How to deal with the composition,书面表达,重要性 历年分值与要求,近几年高考作文的类型,MET91 六幅图 应用文 介绍 MET92 六幅图 记叙文 记事 MET93 六幅图 记叙文 故事 MET94 提纲 应用文 通知 MET95 单幅图 应用文 书信 MET96 图表 应用文 介绍 MET97 六幅图 记叙文 故事 MET98 六幅图 应用文 日记 MET99 两幅图 应用文 书信 MET00 四幅图 记叙文 故事 MET01 图表 应用文 书信,信头,信内地址、姓名,称呼,正 文,结束语,签名,附言、附件,（Enc:/Encl:),Letter writing,A Letter,Nov 5, 2001 Wuzheng Middle School Zhejiang P.R.C.,Jack Tongxiang High School,Dear Mary,Body,Yours, Jack,亲人、家属：Yours lovingly ; Yours affectionately 朋友、平辈：Sincerely yours Yours sincerely 上级、长者：Yours respectfully Respectfully yours 单位、部门：Yours sincerely Yours faithfully,结束语Closing,信封正面,发信人姓名 发信人地址,收信人姓名 收信人地址,信封背面,发信人姓名 发信人地址,June 5th , 2000 Dear Mr. Zhao, I am sorry that I am unable to attend school during the following week because of the Sports Meet. The school expects me to play an important part in it . And I will be back to class in a week . I hope you will excuse my absence .(in fact , I take a French leave) Yours respectfully Charles Encl: the PE Teachers certificate (证明）,便 条（病/事假条）,（NOTICE/ANNOUNCEMENT),口头通知： Ladies and Gentlemen, May I have you attention please? 正 文 书面通知： NOTICE In celebration of May Day , there will be - 正 文 School Office April 25th , 2000,通知、通告,Wednesday May 5th Cloudy It is nearly a month since I began keeping diaries. I find it a very good exercise in English composition. I got back my essay on A Visit to the Park . It was marked with A.There were only three mistakes in it: one in grammar and two in idiom. Im happy to see that I can now express myself in English more usually than ever before. ,日记 Diary,书面表达如何写？,五个步骤,1、审题,题材、人称、时态、要点,2、以词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句 话的细节要点。,3、联词成句：用联词成句的方法将上述要点 的词语扩展成句子。,4、联句成文：,注意：,主语和谓语,背景（适当增加时间、地点条件等）,逻辑关系,开头与结尾 语篇衔接,5、检查修改，规范抄写,并列and; as well as ; also; 选择or; eitheror; or else; otherwise 原因because ; owing to; due to ;on account of ; thanks to 结果so ; therefore ; thus ; as a result 时间when ;soon after ; before; later ; first ; and then ; next ; finally ; afterwards. 比较on the countary ; on the other hand ; like 转折but ; yet; however ; although; in spite of ; instead ; 递进besides ; moreover ; even ; in addition 举例for example/instance; such as ; that is ; namely ; 总结after all ; in short ; in general ; generally speaking Adverbs,组句成文的各种关系的过渡词语,Therefore ; otherwise ; furthermore ; Thus ; finally ; moreover ; namely ; besides ; although ; afterwards ; however ; personally;,Adverbs,评分原则以及给分范围,第五档（很好）：完全完成试题规定的任务（21-25） 第四档（好）：完全完成试题规定的任务，漏掉1、2个次重点。（16-20） 第三档（适当）：基本完成试题规定的任务。（11-15） 第二档（较差）：末完成试题规定的任务。 （6-10） 第一档（差）：末完成试题规定的任务。 只能写出与所给要求内容有关的一些单词。 （1-5） 0分：末能传达读者任何信息。,练 习,根据下列图画中Tom骑自行车的经历，用英语写一篇短文。短文要写得连贯、完整。字数100字左右。,审 题,字 词 文,参考答案,2000年高考,审 题,1、体裁：叙述Tom骑自行车的经历，为记叙文体,2、主要时态：一般过去时，叙述描绘一起交通事故,3、人称：第三人称Tom,4、要点：记叙描绘文体，抓住四个要点：时间、地 点、人物、事件的前后经过。,字 词 文,词：, to ride a bike, to hit his bike and fall off,句：,Tom was riding a bike along the street.,The car hit his bike and he fell off it.,文：,The other day, Tom was riding along the street. Suddenly, a car was running towards him fast and hit his bike, then he fell off it.,参 考 答 案,The other day, Tom was riding along the street. Suddenly, a car was running towards him fast. He was so frightened that he quickly turned to the left side. But it was too late. The car hit his bike and he fell off it. When the driver realized that he had caused an accident, he got such a fright that he took flight with his car. He was soon out of sight, leaving Tom helpless on the spot. Fortunately a passer-by happened to see what had happened and remembered the number of the car. He reported this to the police. Now the driver has been caught and will be punished for his wrong doing.,NMET2000 书面表达（满25分）,审 题,短文改错,小 结,2000年高考书面表达审题,1、题材：一份书面材料，报告你所目击的一起交通事故 的经过，为记叙文体,2、主要时态：一般过去时，叙述描绘发生过的一起交通 事故。,3、人称：为“I”，第一人称。,2000年高考书面表达要点,（1）2000年2月8日发生了一起交通事故 （2）我走在公园路 （3）一位老人从街的另一边公园里出来 （4）一辆黄车开过来在公园路转弯 （5）黄车撞倒了老人并向西开跑 （6）我记住了车牌号是AC864，并送老人去医院,2000书面表达答案,It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8, 2000. 1_ I was walking along Park Road towards the east while 2_ an old man came out of the Park on the other side of the 3_ street. Then I saw a yellow car drove up Third Street and 4_ make a right turn into Park Road. The next moment the car hitted 5_ the man while he was crossing the road. He fell with a cry. A car didnt stop and drove off at great speed heading west. 6_ I noticed the driver was a young woman but 7_ the plat e number was AC864. After 8_ two minutes later I stopped a passed car 9_ and brought the old man to the nearest hospital. 10_ Lihua,小 结,注意选词 多用短句 慎用长句,巧用转折