高中英语解析08江苏高考书面表达课件.ppt

writing,Writing 假如你叫Jack,参加学校开展的“有困难向谁求助”（Whom do you turn to when in trouble?）的调查活动，调查结果如下表。请用英语给校报编辑写一封反映调查结果。,注意: 内容要点全面,并表达出你的观点及理由; 为了使文章连贯,可适当增加内容; 词数150左右; 信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。,江苏卷高考评分标准 评分原则 1.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 2.词数过少或过多的，从总分中减去2分。 3.评分时应注意的主要内容为:内容要点，应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。 4.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 5.如书写较差以至于影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。,内容+词汇、语法结构（时态、语态、句型）、连接手段,Appreciation composition I,Recently, who do you turn to when in trouble has become the focus of the society., According to the research, we can see that, The reason why they do this is that , On the contrary, 12% turn to nobody. On the one hand, they arent willing to communicate with others; on the other hand, it is hard for them to talk with others., But for me, I would rather turn to parents, because,Appreciation composition II, My own point of view is that, Also ,Appreciation composition III, Other 30 percent choose their parents and teachers because they consider them patient, experienced, trustworthy and full of love. However, statistics show that the left 12 percent find it hard to communicate with others, so they are usually alone when in need of help.,Appreciation composition III, As far as I know, the first people to turn to when we are in trouble are our parents., From the time we were born , they stayed for the most time in our lives with us, which made them the very persons who know us most.,Appreciation composition III,They understand our joys and sorrows , offering us the warmest hug and love wherever we go and whatever we do., I wont deny the help from our classmates and friends., In a word,一.定基调,体裁,人称,时态,二.找要点,三.写短语,四.写句子,五.写文章,写 作 步 骤,Writing 2008 江苏 实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表，更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇题为 “Being a Good Listener”的英语演讲稿。,注意: 对所给要点,逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。 词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。 演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。, ,show respect， respect， look up to， treatwith respect ,promote understanding， understandbetter， have a better understanding of， make oneself understood by others , Listen toattentively， listen with attention /patience，lend an ear to， give an ear to , form/develop /build up a good interpersonal relationship, improve the relationship with, understand children, know sb. well, narrow /smooth away the generation gap /misunderstanding, share their joys and sorrows, meet their needs/ demands/requirements , place themselves in a good relationship with ,meet the needs put forward by students. ,strengthen /develop/form/deepen the friendship with, make more friends, make progress hand in hand, help and learn from each other., keep eye contact with , dont interrupt, keep quiet while listening, listen attentively and patiently, focus ones attention on,make a proper response to, respond to appropriately such as : nodding, a knowing smile, sighing raising questions and giving your suggestions at proper time,.,家长倾听孩子,Parents listen more to children., Experts suggest that parents (should) listen more to children.(宾从）, It is suggested that parents (should) listen more to children.（主从）, Experts suggestion is that parents (should) listen more to children.（表从), There is an experts suggestion that parents (should) listen more to children.(同位语从句）,Teachers listen more to students. They can have a better understanding of students. They can meet students needs.,If they want to have a better understanding of students and meet their needs ,it is a better way for teachers to listen more to students.(条件、it),To know students better and meet their needs, teachers should listen more to students.(目的状语）,Listening more to students can enable teachers to understand students better, sharing their joys and sorrows, thus meeting their needs. (V-ing 作主语、结果状语）,Teachers listen more to students. They can have a better understanding of students. They can meet students needs.,To teachers listening is an effective way to have a better understanding of students ,and to students listening offers a chance to make their needs expressed and satisfied.（介词短语）,Listen more to students ,and teachers will know students better, which helps meet their needs.(祈使句 、定语从句）,The more teachers listen to students, the better they understand students and then meet their needs.,Writing 2008 江苏 实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表，更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇题为 “Being a Good Listener”的英语演讲稿。,注意: 对所给要点,逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。 词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。 演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。, ,用于文章的开头 1. Many people often ask such question:“？” 2. There is no doubt that,用于句首提出论题或现象的句型 1 Recently , has become the focus of the society . 2 Nowadays there is a growing concern for 3 Nowadays it is common to hear /see ,用于陈述个人观点/想法的常用句型 1 As for my own idea about ,I believe 2 What I want to stress is that 3 My own point of view is that ,用于结尾的常用句型 1 Therefore , it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that 2 Taking into account all these factors , it is obvious/clear that 3 In a word/in conclusion/to sum up,Possible version: Good afternoon, everyone! The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener. Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship. Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed. What I want to stress is that each of us should listen more to others. Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be open-minded to different opinions even though you dont like them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other. Thank you for your listening！,Possible version: Good afternoon, everyone! The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener. Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship. Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap