广东高考基础写作.ppt

高考专题： 基础写作,上周，我们以“谁是你的偶像”为题，在 2600名学生中进行了一次调查(survey)。以下 是调查数据： 1调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象； 2男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异； 3“父母”在男女生偶像中的排序差异； 4男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的异同； 5你的偶像及理由。,07年广东卷,你很荣幸地成为2008北京奥运会的一名志愿者，负责编写奥运比赛项目的英语介绍。 【写作内容】：请根据以下中文提纲，编写射击项目的英语介绍： 背景：射击最初只是生存工具，19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。 1896：第一次成为奥运项目 1904：中断 1928：中断 1932：重回奥运会 1968：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛 现状：稳步发展，1896奥运会只有三项射击项目，现今有17项。,08年广东卷,1、写作题材贴近考生的学习和生活。 2、信息点多，必须用5句话表达。 3、信息呈现方式多为表格、图表等。 4、以翻译为基础、注重考察表达能力。,一、题型特点：,二、能力要求:,1、审题能力 2、处理信息的能力： 信息组合、排列合理 3、表达能力 语法正确 句式灵活 信息内容表达准确、完整 语篇连贯,三、表达能力训练,1.写好简单句 简单句的五种基本句型： 1）主语+不及物动词 (S+V) 2）主语+及物动词+宾语 (S+V+O) 3）主语+系动词+表语 (S+V+P) 4）主语+及物动词+双宾语 (S+V+O+O) 5）主语+及物动词+宾语+宾补 (S+V+O+C),Ex : 改正下列病句并指出基本句型。 My favourite subjects including English and Chinese. Last week we hold a discussion about this topic. The future life will become more and more better. The fire destroied their houses. 5. He spends two hours to study English every night.,_,应改为include,_,应改为held,_,_,应改为better and better,_,应改为destroyed,_,应改为studying,6. He cost ten dollars for the book. 7. He felt confused，he didnt know what to do. 8. He watched TV for a while before went to bed. 9. She is confidence and patience. 10. In his opinion, get fat is a terrible thing.,_,应改为paid,_,应改为. He,_,应改为going,_,应改为confident and patient,_,应改为getting fat,2、如何做到句式灵活？ 1)并列句 2)复合句 (定语从句、状语从句、名词性从句) 3)强调句型 4)非谓语动词 5)倒装句 6)其他句型及结构,Ex:按要求改写下列句子。 1) English is widely used in the world. Most business letters are written in English. (合并为并列句) English is widely used in the world and most business letters are written in English. 2) People thought of some ways to solve the problem. These solutions didnt work. (合并为并列句) People thought of some ways to solve the problem but these solutions didnt work.,3) I suggest that you visit the Great Wall. It has a history of more than two thousand years. (合并为定语从句) I suggest that you visit the Great Wall, which has a history of more than two thousand years. July 11 has been named the Sailing Day in our country since 2005. Zheng He began his famous voyage on July 11. (合并为定语从句) July 11, when Zheng He began his famous voyage, has been named the Sailing Day in our country since 2005.,5) I will not be able to meet you at the airport. I have some experiments to do that day.(合并为状语从句) I will not be able to meet you at the airport because I have some experiments to do that day. 6) The problem was complicated. He solved it in only two hours with a computer. (合并为状语从句) Though the problem is complicated, he solved it in only two hours with a computer.,7) In the past five years, there have been changes in peoples diet. It is a fact.(合并为名词性从句) It is a fact that in the past five years, there have been changes in peoples diet. 8) The weather was fine. We went to visit the ZhongShan Park. (独立主格结构) The weather being fine, we went to visit the ZhongShan Park.,9) You should never give up when you are faced with difficulties. (非谓语+倒装句) Never should you give up when faced with difficulties. 10) When a man and a woman meet, the woman first offers her hand. (改为强调句) When a man and a woman meet, it is the woman who first offers her hand.,11) 众所周知, 吸烟危害健康。 （一句多译） a. It is known to all that smoking does harm to peoples health. b. As is known to all, smoking harms peoples health. c. Everyone knows that smoking is harmful to peoples health.,四、如何使文章连贯？(过渡词的使用) 1) 时间： soon, then, suddenly, meanwhile, before, after, earlier, in the morning, afterwards, later, immediately, next, the other day, nowadays, gradually 2) 空间: above, below, up, down, under, near, far from, in front of, behind, beside, beyond, on the right/left, around, inside, outside, opposite to, next to, on top of, across.,3) 列举： for example, such as, first(ly), second(ly), finally, besides, apart form, for one thing for another thing 4) 比较: like, unlike, on the contrary, in contrast to, on the one handon the other hand, than, not soas, asas, while, similarly, the former, the latter, someothers, onethe other, compared with,5) 逻辑关系： a. 并列：and, as well as, also b. 转折：but, however, yet c. 递进：besides, apart from, in addition, whats more, furthermore, moreover, to make things worse d. 原因：because, because of, as, since, for that reason e. 结果：so, therefore, thus, as a result f. 让步：though, although, in spite of,五、基础写作的推荐步骤：,1、认真审题 2、归纳、排列信息点 3、确定短语和句型、连词成句 4、组句成篇 5、检查修改,某报设有一个求助信箱，请根据以下表中列出的信 息，以高三学生李华的名义给Mr. Helper写一封英文 短信。信的开头和结尾已写好，不计入五句话。 Dear Mr. Helper, Im a senior 3 student. I am now in great need of your help because I can hardly stand the great pressure. _ _ I am looking forward to your advice. Yours sincerely, Li Hua,写作步骤：,第1步 审题,写信,描述高三学生现状。,第一人称。一般现在时。,6项,第2步 整合信息, 译成英语。,1) 每天在校时间约10小时。每天完成作 业时间34小时。 Every day we stay at school for about ten hours to have lessons. We spend at least three to four hours doing our homework. 2) 每天几乎没有时间娱乐、消遣。 a. We hardly have any time for relaxation. b. Hardly can we find any time to do what we want.,3) 每天睡眠时间不足，不利于健康。 a. We dont have enough time to sleep, which does harm to our health. b. We suffer from lack of sleep, which, in the long run, is not good for our health. 4) 负担过重的原因是面临高考。 a. The main cause of our heavy burden is the pressure from the college entrance examination. b. The reason why we are carrying such a heavy burden is that we are facing the college entrance examination.,5) 父母对我们的期望很高。 a. Our parents expect too much of us. b. Our parents have high expectations of us.,Dear Mr. Helper, Im a senior 3 student. I am now in great need of your help because I can hardly stand the great pressure. Every day we stay at school for about ten hours to have lessons _ spend at least three to four hours doing our homework. _, hardly can we find any time to do what we want. _, We suffer from lac