英语作文作者亲身经历类.ppt

记叙文写作 一, 包括两类：1. 记叙他人的或其他的故事; 2. 讲述作者自己亲身经历 二，如何概括? 概括时候要抓住记叙文的以下要素：,One morning(时间), Mr Hare(人物) was running on the road(地点). Suddenly he saw Mr Tortoise(人物), who was also running on the road towards him. Mr Hare ran up to Mr Tortoise and laughed at him. Mr Tortoise got angry and suggested having a race(事件) to see who could first get to the big tall tree by the roadsides. Mr Hare agreed with him without hesitation. The race began. Mr Hare and Mr tortoise started from the same line at the same time. When Mr Hare was far ahead of Mr Tortoise and even couldnt see Mr Tortoise, he thought that Mr Tortoise fell behind and couldnt catch up with him. So he stopped and lay down to have a nap(情节). But soon he fell asleep. At the same time, Mr Tortoise kept on running and running(情节). When Mr Hare woke up, he found Mr Tortoise had already sat under the tree(结果) and was smiling at him!,三，概括模式 1. 记叙他人的故事的或其他一件事情; 2. 讲述作者自己亲身经历 1) The passage shows us that/ a story that (事件).（情节）.（结果） 2) The passage/ The story is about (事件). （情节）.（结果） 3) The author tells us a story 4) In the passage, the author tells us that 5) The passage/ story tells us about the writers experience,四，注意事项： 1.选择重要的要素为中心，相对不重要的可以省略。 2.阐述一个故事梗概，忌力陈细节，忌掺入个人评价或观 点（但是材料中作者给出了评价或观点时，此观点一定 要包在概括中）。 3. 忌直接摘抄文中原句，要用自己的话重新组织句子。,One morning(时间), Mr Hare(人物) was running on the road(地点). Suddenly he saw Mr Tortoise(人物), who was also running on the road towards him. Mr Hare ran up to Mr Tortoise and laughed at him. Mr Tortoise got angry and suggested having a race(事件) to see who could first get to the big tall tree by the roadsides. Mr Hare agreed with him without hesitation. The race began. Mr Hare and Mr tortoise started from the same line at the same time. When Mr Hare was far ahead of Mr Tortoise and even couldnt see Mr Tortoise, he thought that Mr Tortoise fell behind and couldnt catch up with him. So he stopped and lay down to have a nap(情节). But soon he fell asleep. At the same time, Mr Tortoise kept on running and running(情节). When Mr Hare woke up, he found Mr Tortoise had already sat under the three and was smiling at him! (结果),1. The story tells us a race between Mr Hare and Mr Tortoise . In the race Mr Tortoise was proud and lay down to have a nap while Mr Tortoise kept running . As a result, Mr Hare lost the race. 2. The story tells us a race between Mr Hare and Mr Tortoise , in which Mr Tortoise was proud and lay down, having a nap while Mr Tortoise kept running . As a result, Mr Tortoise won the race.,五，需要考生写的是一般是以下几种： 这个故事给你的启示/ 影响； After reading the story I was lost in thought. And I begin to realize that/ come to realize that /come to know that/ understand that/ come to a conclusion that 2. 谈谈你或者你的朋友的一次类似经历； (1) I have a similar experience. I want to share it with you. (2)I also have gone through such an experience. (3)I have the same experience as the writer (4)This story reminds me of another story that happened to my friend. I want to share it with you. (5)This story reminds me of a similar experience of my friend (6) Sb, my friend, once had a similar experience as the writer.,在组织故事时，注意以下两点: 由于受篇幅的限制，我们也尽可能省去心理描写和 对话等细节，用简练的语言（尽量用间接引语）把故事的过程讲清楚即可。 在往试卷上写之前可以简单列出要点，有利于我们选择短语、句型和相关的连接词语。 在组织自己的故事的时候可以按照以下顺序：,3. 这个经历对你或你朋友的影响/经历此事后的感想/ 别人对你或你朋友的评价。 Now, whenever I (am to lose my patience), Ill From then on, I /my friend never From the above two stories, we can see that / I see that From the above examples/ my experience, I strongly believe that,综上所述，记叙文的写作框架可以总结如下： 第一段：summary : he passage shows us that/ a story that / The author tells us a story(事件) (情节）（结果） 第二段：启示: After reading the story I begin to realize that/ come to realize that 第三段： 主体: (1). 过渡句： I have a similar experience. I want to share it with you./ This story reminds me of another story that happened to my friend. I want to share it with you. (2) 你的或类似的经历 (耳熟能详，简单明了，符合话题，说服力强) 第四段：你的感想： From the above two stories, we can see that / I see that,One morning(时间), Mr Hare(人物) was running on the road(地点). Suddenly he saw Mr Tortoise(人物), who was also running on the road towards him. Mr Hare ran up to Mr Tortoise and laughed at him. Mr Tortoise got angry and suggested having a race(事件) to see who could first get to the big tall tree by the roadsides. Mr Hare agreed with him without hesitation. The race began. Mr Hare and Mr tortoise started from the same line at the same time. When Mr Hare was far ahead of Mr Tortoise and even couldnt see Mr Tortoise, he thought that Mr Tortoise fell behind and couldnt catch up with him. So he stopped and lay down to have a nap(情节). But soon he fell asleep. At the same time, Mr Tortoise kept on running and running(情节). When Mr Hare woke up, he found Mr Tortoise had already sat under the three and was smiling at him! (结果),1)以大约30个词概括短文的要点； 2)以大约120个词写一篇记叙文，描写你或你的朋友因骄傲而落后的一次经历，并包含以下内容： a)谈谈这则故事给人们的启示； b)叙述你或你的朋友因骄傲而落后的一次真实或虚构的经历； c)谈谈这次经历对你或你的朋友思想态度的影响. 1. The story tells us a race between Mr Hare and Mr Tortoise , in which Mr Tortoise was proud and lay down, having a nap while Mr Tortoise kept running . As a result, Mr Tortoise won the race. 2. From the story, we learn that we shouldnt be proud at any time. Instead, we should always keep modest in life. 3. The story reminds me of one of my experience. 4. From then on, I became modest and never proud again.,练习（1） Years ago in Scotland, Clark and his wife worked and saved, making plans for their family to travel to the United States. Finally they had saved enough money and gotten passports. The entire family were filled with excitement. However, seven before their departure, the youngest son was bitten by a dog. The doctor sewed up the boy but hung a yellow sheet on the Clarks front door. Because of the possibility of rabies, they were separated for fourteen days. The familys dream was dashed. They would not be able to make the trip to America as they planned. The father, filled with disappointment and anger, wept bitter tears and cursed both his son and God for their misfortune. Five days later, the tragic news spread throughout Britain- Titanic, which was on her maiden voyage on April 4, 1912, had sunk, taking hundreds of lives with it. The Clark family should have been on that ship, but because the son had been bitten by a dog, they were left behind. When Mr. Clark heard the news, he hugged his son and thanked him for saving the family. He thanked for God for turning what he had felt was a tragedy into a blessing. a)叙述你或你的朋友因祸得福的一次真实或虚构的经历； b)谈谈这次经历对你或你的朋友的影响。,making plans to travel to the USA,the Clark family,Years ago (April, 1912),Scotland,one son was bittenunluckily not board Titanic,luckily saved,练习（2） The other day, my father told me that one of his foreign friends from Scotland was coming to visit us. I became nervous at once. Should I talk to him in English? “He cant speak Chinese,” said my father. “So its a good chance for you to practise your spoken English.” My English was very poor. When I talked to other people in English, I got nervous about my grammar and could not speak fluently. The worst thing was that when I spoke, I felt everybody was looking at me. And if I made too many mistakes, I thought I would be laughed at. I really lacked the confidence t