高中英语 1.4 Writing课件6.pptx

,思路点拨,素材积累,实战成篇,如何写建议信假定你是李华,你在某英语论坛看到一个网名叫Marc发的求助帖子,请根据他的问题回帖。Ineedyourhelp!Asastudentaged17,Imboredwithmyobesity(肥胖)whichresultsfrommylovingjunkfoodandhatingsports.Wouldyoumindansweringmyquestions?1.Whatdoyouthinkofbeingfat?2.Whatisyouradviceonmylosingweight?注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。,思路点拨,素材积累,实战成篇,HiMarc,Yours,LiHua,思路点拨,素材积累,实战成篇,1.人称:第一人称。2.时态:一般现在时及将来时态为主。建议信主要是对现在情况的说明(一般现在时)和对未来的建议(一般将来时)。3.内容要点:建议信要简明扼要,具有合理性和说服力。建议信要写出写信的原因,建议的内容,提出建议的理由。语气要中肯、礼貌。论述要逻辑分明,合情合理。在说理过程中尽量站在对方的角度客观地谈问题,让对方考虑并接受自己的建议。,思路点拨,素材积累,实战成篇,参考表达词汇:1.对烦beboredwith2.对很在乎caremuchabout3.过的生活livea.life4.改掉getridof5.锻炼takeexercise6.坚持做insistondoing7.对有害beharmfulto/doharmto,思路点拨,素材积累,实战成篇,常用句式:建议信开头常用句式:1.Imwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning.2.Thanksfortrustingme.3.Ifeelsorrytolearnthat.表达建议常用句式:1.Ifeelthatitwouldbehelpfulif.2.IfIwereyou,Iwould.3.AsfarasImconcerned,.4.Inmyopinion,.5.Asforme,.,思路点拨,素材积累,实战成篇,建议信结尾常用句式:1.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestions/proposals/recommendationspractical/useful/helpful.2.Iwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyouindetails.3.Imsureyourproblemwillbesettled.,思路点拨,素材积累,实战成篇,HiMarc,Ifeelsorrytolearnthatyouareboredwithyourobesity.Teenagersusuallycaremuchabouttheirfigures,soobesitymaybeannoying.Thoughbeingfatisaproblem,itisnoteverything.Fatpeoplecanstillliveahappylife.Therefore,dontbeupset.Anyway,youwillhavetogetridofyourbadhabits.Firstofall,takingenoughexerciseisthemostpracticalwayanditisimportanttoinsistondoingiteveryday.Then,donoteattoomuchjunkfoodanymore,whichisalsoharmf