2019-2020学年高中英语 Unit 4 Making the news Section Ⅳ Writing课件 新人教版必修5.ppt

SectionWriting,概要写作概要写作要求考生基于一篇350词以内的短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要,以此来考查学生准确获取关键词,并对文章大意进行归纳概括,进而用简洁的语言转述文章重要信息的能力。考生要在正确理解短文的基础上,用简明、精练的语句高度浓缩文章的主要内容和观点,是对阅读理解能力和书面表达能力的综合考查。短文选材以说明文和议论文为主,文章结构比较清晰,通常包含35个要点。考生要客观准确归纳要点,不照搬原文句子,要点之间要恰当衔接,全文内容要连贯,过渡要自然。写作时应遵循以下步骤:,一、细读短文,明确篇章结构,确定要点数量。首先,仔细阅读短文。阅读的目的是确定文章的体裁和主题,明确篇章结构。根据意义划分段落,然后对段落划分层次,确定要点的数量。二、处理文章,抓住主题句,删除细节信息。明确全文结构之后,就要对文章内容进行处理。处理的目的是删除次要内容,保留主要内容。文中描述性的语言、细节和列举的示例都属于要删除的内容。剩余的主要部分要仔细研读,与主题相关的关键词句要重点标注出来,这些词句就是最后归纳转述的要点。,三、逐段进行归纳,提取关键信息,准确转述要点。删除了短文中的细节、例证等细枝末节后,每段的主要内容已经明确,然后要用自己的语言准确地表述各段的要点。为避免和原文的句子重复,可使用同义转述的形式,也可以用句子重构的方式来完成要点归纳。归纳时要分清主次,各要点的词数应根据文中对应的内容来定。同时,要选用适当的关联词来进行衔接,保证上下文连贯。四、检查要点,修改错误,确定终稿。初稿完成后,要检查要点是否齐全,各要点是否表述准确,检查是否有语法错误、拼写错误和标点符号错误等,还要检查词数是否符合要求。,阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Sciencecantexplainthepowerofpets,butmanystudieshaveshownthatthepanyofpetscanhelplowerbloodpressure(血压)andraisechancesofrecoveringfromaheartattack,reducelonelinessandspreadall-roundgoodcheer.,Anyownerwilltellyouhowmuchjoyapetbrings.Forsome,ananimalprovidesmorefortthanahusband/wife.A2012studymeasuredstress(紧张)levelsandbloodpressureinpeoplehalfofthempetownerswhiletheyperformed5minutesofmentalarithmetic(心算)orheldahandinicewater.Subjectspletedthetasksalone,withahusband/wife,aclosefriendorwithapet.Peoplewithpetsdiditbest.Thosetestedwiththeiranimalfriendshadsmallerchangeinbloodpressureandreturnedmostquicklytobaselineheartrates.Withpetsintheroom,peoplealsomadefewermathmistakesthanwhendoinginfrontofotherpanions.Itseemspeoplefeelmorerelaxedaroundpets,saysAllen,whothinksitmaybebecausepetsdontjudge.,Astudyreportedlastfallsuggeststhathavingapetdognotonlyraisesyourspiritsbutmayalsohaveaneffectonyoureatinghabits.Researchersatahospitalspentayearstudying36fatpeopleandtheirequallyfatdogsthatwereputondiet-and-exerciseprograms;aseparategroupof56peoplewithoutpetswereputonadietprogram.Onaverage,peoplelostabout11pounds,or5%oftheirbodyweight.Theirdogsdidevenbetter,losinganaverageof12pounds,morethan15%oftheirbodyweight.Dogownersdidntloseanymoreweightthanthosewithoutdogsbut,sayresearchers,gotmoreexerciseoverallmostlywiththeirdogsandfounditworthdoing.,Petscanhelpuskeephealthy.(要点1)Astudyshowspeoplefeelmorerelaxedwithpetsaroundthanwithotherpanions.(要点2)Anotherstudysuggestspetscanaffectpeopleseatinghabits.(要点3)Researcher