书面表达.docx

书面表达1书面表达（本题20分）根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。假如你是一名叫李明（Li Ming）的中学生，看了上述故事后，你想表达自己的看法。 请你给栏目编辑写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1. 你对其中的哪个故事感兴趣？原因是什么？2. 你对这个故事所提及的现象的看法。3. 就该现象提出至少两条解决问题的建议。作文要求：1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。2. 语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。Dear Editor,I read the stories on BBC World Have Your Say today,_Your,Li Ming2书面表达(满分15分)假如你叫李明，是一位高一新生，你的班主任(也是你的英语教师)要求你们在下午的班会课上用英语演讲的形式参与班长(monitor)竞选，请根据图片和文字提示，以“I believe I can” 为题写一篇演讲稿。要求:1.短文必须包括三个方面内容：我的优秀品质；我的能力；我将为大家做什么；2.短文内容可适当发挥，提示词可选用；3.短文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；4.短文词数为80左右，开头、结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。I believe I canGood aftemoon, ladies and gentlemen! My name is Li Ming Thank you!3书面表达从前，我们通讯不便捷，只能通过书信与千里之外的亲朋交流，富有浓浓的亲情。今天，随着互联网的发展，智能手机（smart-phone）已被广泛使用。人们的交流变得非常的方便，可我们身边的“低头族(phubber)”随处可见，很多人都有同感：“距离近了，可亲情远了。”请根据图中所示，结合表格所提供的信息,以“Refuse to be phubbers”为题写一篇80词左右的短文。要求：1. 短文须包含所有信息，语句通顺、意思连贯,可适当发挥；2. 题目与开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：1. have effects on 2. concentrate on 3. face-to-face conversation 4. make good use ofRefuse to be phubbersWith the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people. Phubbers can be seen here and there._Refuse to be phubbersWith the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people. Phubbers can be seen here and there.Some family members play with their smart phones while eating with families instead of talking with them. It has effects on the relationship between them. Some people look at their smart-phones while walking even riding or driving. It may increase the danger of causing traffic accidents. Some children want to play with smart-phones before sleeping. Its bad for their health and their study.In fact, face-to-face conversations are much more conventient and better than chatting on line by phone. Mobile phones are helpful and necessary tools for modern life. But we should make good use of it to be “healthy” users rather than Phubbers.【解析】 试题分析：本文要求按图表提示，以“Refuse to be phubbers”为题作文。短文重点是两个方面，一是现象与弊端：揭示现代人用手机的恶习及其产生的危害；二是观点与方式：告诉人们怎样正确的使用手机，利用好这个现代的通讯工具。短文主要用一般现在时态。第三人称或第一称形式。写作亮点：短文首先结合现代人使用手机的现象，说明了人们使用手机给生活带来的危害，接着告诉人们怎样正确地使用好手机。条理分明，层次清楚。短文包含了提纲的所有信息，语句通顺，意思连贯。文中用了while doing， instead of, rather than等等结构，给短文增色不少。试卷第3页，总3页本卷由系统自动生成，请仔细校对后使用，答案仅供参考。参考答案1 Dear Editor,I read the stories on BBC World Have Your Say today. I am interested in Mikes story, because I had the same experience when I traveled in Guangzhou. I cant stand bad manners in public, either. In fact, I really get angry when people jump the queen and smoke in non-smoking areas. I think its wrong to break the rules in public. In my opinion, we should know more about good manners. On the other hand, we had better stop people around us from being rude. If we cant stop them, we can always ask the police or someone like that for help.Yours,【解析】 试题分析：这是一篇电子邮件。本题所给材料是是根据上文的故事表达自己的感受。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。写作亮点：文章直接谈到作者对麦克的故事感兴趣。文中用到了一些好的句式，如：I cant stand bad manners in public, either.；On the other hand, we had better stop people around us from being rude.给文章增色不少。考点：考查提纲作文。2 Good afternoon ladies and gentlemen!My name is Li Ming! Im very glad to be a member of our class. I want to be monitor for these reasons.First, Im hard-working and helpful. I work very hard at my study and do well in all subjects. I am kind and I would like to help you anytime. Second, I am active. I have a lot of hobbies such as playing basketball, singing and dancing. I believe I will guide our class in the correct direction in study and other fields. Im sure we will have a wonderful time during the following three years. Thats all.Thank you!【解析】 试题分析：本文要求写一篇演讲稿，要按照要求，从：我的优秀品质；我的能力；我将为大家做什么三个方面进行写作。用第一人称形式，我的品质和能力用一般现在时态，我将为大家做的用一般将来时态。要根据演讲稿的特点选择恰当的词语和句型结构，增加语言的感染力。写作亮点：范文开头简单的自我介绍后直接点题：我要当班长；接着由first, second 等等列出自己想当班长的原因；后面用两个一般将来时的句子说明自己将会怎样当好班长。叙述清楚，结构明晰。文中的I believe I wi11；Im sure we will充分表达了作者的自信，彰显了作者个性，突出了短文主题，语言精炼，符合演讲稿的特点。【考点定位】 考查提纲类作文。3 Refuse to be phubbersWith the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people. Phubbers can be seen here and there.Some family members play with their smart phones while eating with families instead of talking with them. It has effects on the relationship between them. Some people look at their smart-phones while walking even riding or driving. It may increase the danger of causing traffic accidents. Some children want to play with smart-phones before sleeping. Its bad for their health and their study.In fact, face-to-face conversations are much more conventient and better than chatting on line by phone. Mobile phones are helpful and necessary tools for modern life. But we should make good use of it to be “healthy” users rather than Phubbers.【解析】 试题分析：本文要求按图表提示，以“Refuse to be phubbers”为题作文。短文重点是两个方面，一是现