作文范文之大学英语作文开头.docx

大学英语作文开头【篇一：大学英语写作开头、段落、结尾】 【网络综合 - 大学英语四六级考试(cet)四级】 四级写作中常用的开头段的表达方法举例如下： 使用引语（use a quotation） 使用一段名人名言，或人们常用的谚语、习语，以确定文章的写作范围和方向。 如： “great minds must be ready not only to take the opportunity, but to make them.” colton, a great writer once remarked. but it still has a profound significance now. to a person, in whose lifetime opportunities are not many, to make opportunities is more essential to his success. 分析：开头引用colton的名言说明“创造机会”对于成功的重要性，点明主题。 引用具体或粗略的数据 （use figures or statistics） 当然对于图表题型，该种方法是必须的选择，具体做法是给出一些具体或粗略的数据，然后作出概括性分析，点明主题或引出需要论述的问题。 如： as is demonstrated in the table, more and more college graduates are out of a job in our country, which is a serious problem to our economic development and social security. it is estimated that in 2004, there are 500,000 unemployed graduates, more than 30% higher than in 2002. 分析：文章引用2004年找不到工作的毕业生达到50万这一数据来说明大学生找 工作难这一现象的严重性，很有说服力。 提出问题（ask a question） 提出有争议或探讨性的具体问题，然后加以简要回答或展开引导性简短讨论。 如： what do you want from your work money promotions interesting challenges continual learning work-based friendships the opportunity to develop your own idea and potentials though we are all individuals and so our answers will differ, all agree that work provide more than material things. 分析：文章开头提出“你想从工作中得到什么”这一问题，然后自问自答，指出工作 除了物质利益，还可以给我们带来很多其它收获这一结论。 给出具体实例或报道（offer relevant examples or reports） 给出具体生活实例或新闻报道 如： as regards the stress for college students, there has been a heated discussion among the public in the e society. it was reported that a student killed four of his classmates just because of a trivial matter. it can be easily seen that pressure has become a serious issue we cannot neglect. 分析：文章通过引用新闻报道的一个实例，说明了大学生心理问题的严重性。 定义法（give definition） 针对讨论的主题或问题加以定义，然后进行深入探讨。如： as we all know, practice makes perfect. this is an accumulated experience we inherit from our forefathers, and now it is still widely applied to our daily life. it means that the more we practice, the more likely we are going to do things perfectly. 分析：文章用it means that这一句型，说明了practice makes perfect的含义。 主题句法（use of topic sentence） 文章一开始就以主题句点明全文主题，然后围绕主题内容进行发展。 如： nowadays one of the serious problems china is faced with is the increasing illiteracy among the adolescents. according to a recent survey by dr. li, dean of educational department of beijing normal university, about 18% of the children between 8 and 15 years old have dropped out of school across the country. 分析：文章开头即提出中国的文盲现象日益严重这一问题，然后再用实例数据加以佐证。 开头段的常用核心句型归纳如下，大家可选择使用： as opposed to generally accepted views, i believe that ? the arguer may be right about ?, but he seems to neglect to mention the fact that ?. although it is commonly agreed that ?, it is unlikely to be true that ?. there is an element of truth in this statement, but it ignores a deeper and more basic fact that ?. in all the discussion and debate over ?, one important fact is generally overlooked. on the surface （at first thought）, it （this） may seem a sound （an attractive） suggestion （solution / idea）, but careful weighing on the mind （on closer analysis / on second thought）, we find that ? although many people believe that ?, i wonder whether the argument bears much analysis the danger （problem / fact / truth / point） is that?. i agree with the above statement because i believe that ?. there is a public controversy nowadays over the issue of ?. those who object to ? argue that . but people who favor , on the other hand, argue that. currently （in recent years / in the past few years / for many years now）, there is （has been） a（n） general （widespread / growing / widely held） feeling towards （concern over / attitude towards / trend towards / awareness of / realization of / illusion of / belief in）?. as far as i am concerned, however, i believe that ?. 怎样写好大学英语四级作文-一-常见问题 在整个四级卷面（满分为100分）中占15分，考生在这一部分的得分直接决定其四级成绩。近年来国家教委又明确规定，四级中，如果学生得零分，那么即使前面得了满分（即85分），其总成绩仍将视为不及格。因此写好一篇文章对参加四级的学生来说可谓至关重要，不容轻视。 要有以下几个方面的问题： 第一、底子太薄。 底子太薄主要表现为对语法知识掌握不牢及对基本词汇记忆不清。它包括定冠词和不定冠词的滥用，主谓不一致，单复数搞不清楚（例如：a people等），时态和语态混乱及词语的各种形式掌握不牢。有的学生文章写得很长，字迹也很工整，但是读完之后只觉得思路紊乱，支离破碎，没有一个完整的句子，所以也就只能得两三分以慰劳苦。 第二、词汇量太小，且对已学词汇记忆不清。 除了底子太薄这个历史原因之外，学生词汇量太小也是一个不容忽视的原因。有的学生汉语功底很好，用汉语，他们就会思如泉涌，下笔千言，但是一到用就好像被缚住了手脚，不知如何下手。比如99年1月的，题目是dont hesitate to say no, 大部分学生能够领会题意并能按给出的汉语提纲，但有的学生连hesitate是什么意思都不知道，更不用说在此基础上再作发挥了。另外有的学生虽然对题目及要求非常清楚，但是因为自己所掌握的词汇所限，无法用一些合适的词来表达自己的思想，于是只有绕着题目翻来覆去乱说一气，再加上这次出的提纲就象一道绕口令： 1、 别人请求帮助时，在什么情况下我们会说“不”； 2、 为什么有些人在该说“不”的时候不说“不”； 3、 该说“不”时不说“不”的坏处。 所以在说过一个又一个的no再加几个yes之后，阅卷老师也给搞得云里雾里，头脑发胀，最后也只得酌情给个两三分罢了。还有的一写到纸上就是错字别字满篇，有些词汇的用法也走了样。其中最典型的就是for example写成example for , for instance写成for a instance, illegal 写成unlegle, 而such as, in spite of 等许多短语则是乱用一气。词汇的有限导致许多学生有口难言，欲说不能，对他们来说，用实在是一件很头疼的事情。 第三、缺乏思想，深度不够。 99年1月的中很大一部分学生不能得高分还有一个重要的原因，就是他们的缺乏思想，深度不够。很多学生虽然已是大二的学生，甚至是大三大四的学生，但是他们在当中所表现出的智力水平与阅历似乎只相当于一个初高中生。写出的文章着眼点低，视野狭窄。作为学生，着眼于学生之间的关系，反映学生之间的帮忙，这并不为过，但是这种帮忙不能仅仅限于在当中的帮忙，而且对这种帮忙都是一句话 dont hesitate to say no。更有相当一部分学生在文章中写帮忙就是这一次四级当中的帮忙。与在校考生比较起来，社会考生应该多了许多社会阅历，也多了一些见解，但是举出来的例子也是范围太窄，大多是讲老板或领导让干的事只能答 yes而不能回答 no。其实除了这些，可举的例子很多，关键是要抓住实质。 第四、缺乏应试技巧。 缺乏应试技巧，主要表现为有些学生在篇首或篇尾有喊口号倾向（如dear friends, lets not hesitate to sayno）,或画蛇添足,本来文章该结束 了却偏要罗罗嗦嗦再来两句多余的话；另外一些学生字数把握不准，不是写得太短就是写得太长，写得太短的会因为字数不够而失分，太长的又因为阅卷老师任务繁重，时间窘迫，不能因为一篇文章乱了整个阅卷节奏。还有一些学生的笔迹（尤其是用纯蓝墨水钢笔和出水太浅的圆珠笔写的），让阅卷老师怎么也看不清楚。 以上是四级中常见的几个问题，更是我们平时当中应该注意的几个方面。要写好一篇文章，关键要在平时下功夫，打好牢固的基础，但是如果这一功夫在使用的时候不讲技巧，不但不能事半功倍地发挥出最高技巧，取得最佳成绩，甚至可能出现与实际水平相去甚远的低成绩。因此，上面讲到的四个问题应该是相辅相成，缺一不可的，做到了这几点，写出一篇好的大学四级应该是不难的。 样写好大学英语四级作文-二-句子写作 我们在前面曾提过学生的主要有以下几个方面的问题： 第一、底子太薄。 第二、词汇量太小，且对已学词汇记忆不清。 第三、表达思想不清楚。 下面我们以考生的实际来进行一下分析。 1） some one consider that fresh water will not touch its end.(96年1月，2分) 2） one mans life lack of money, he will impossible to live on. （95年1月，5分） 3） as is know, that there are much fake commodities in todays society.(97年12月，6分) 这里引述的例句与考生通篇的写作水平是一致的，其中5、6分的例句具有典型性，代表了近乎中等水平考生的写作水平。从这些例句中不难看出，中等水平的考生，事实上也包括中上等水平的考生，在写作上存在的主要问题是表达思想不清楚。 表达思想不清楚的主要原因是考生中严重汉化的，即中式，比如： man can live happiness， man is iron, and food is steel., women are half side sky.。此外，语言错误的普遍性和严重性十分惊人，比如，主谓不一致，名词单复数不分，动词时态语态滥用，常用词拼写错误比比皆是。这些严重地影响了思想的表达。实践表明，多数考生在写作上的主要欠缺不是系统的写作理论和方法，而是最基本的单句写作能力。 文章无论长短，都是由句子组成的，句子是表达思想的最基本的单位。因此，句子是否能写得正确、达意和清楚，将直接影响整篇文章的写作质量。大学四、六级和研究生入学的实践都表明，考生写作成绩长期得不到明显提高的主要原因是欠缺写好单句的能力。 为改变这种状况，我们将从剖析考生中的典型病句入手，对写作测试中的基本句子结构和写法进行评议和分析，来帮助考生进一步提高句子写作能力。 一、 there be结构 考生病句： 1. there are many people like to go to the movies. 2. there are different kinds of vegetables can be bought on the market by people. 正确表达： 1. there are many people who like to go to the movies. 2. there are different kinds of vegetables that people can buy on the market. 这两个例句的错误比较有普遍性，因为在历次中有不少考生不能正确运用there be这一最常用的句式。在这种结构中，there是引导词，没有实际意义。be在句中作谓语，有时态和数的变化。 例如： 1. there was no school in the village at that time. (=there was not a school.) 注意：在否定句中，否定词用no，也可用not a或not any。not a后接单数名词，not a 后接复数名词，no后面的名词单复数都可以。 2. there is not a moment to be lost. 3. there are many people rushing into the cities every year. 4. there are many things we can do to prevent traffic accidents. 5. there is no use holding back the wheel of history.【篇二：大学英语开头部分的写作】 开头部分的写作 (1)开门见山，点明主题法。适合“自由发挥型”和“给定观点型”两种提纲式作文 练习： direction: with the rapid economic development, the average living standards of our country have greatly increased. meanwhile, we are faced with a glaring social problem, the widening gap between the rich and the poor. what do you think of the gap in our country? any solutions or suggestions? ? in my perspective, the ever-growing contrast between the rich and the poor in china may give rise to lots of problems. ? in my perspective, the best way to bridge the ever-growing gap between the rich and the poor in china is to improve the social security system/ raise the income level of the people with low income/ strengthen legal system building 2)正反表态法。在开头一段中把正反观点都表达出来，最后一句写自己的观点。 先用一两句介绍主题，再用一两句介绍正反两种观点或看法，接下来再表达自己的看法。这种写法比较适合“对比选择型”题目。 如1999年专四作文考题“a major advantage/disadvantage of advertising on television”可以用正反表态法开篇。 ? nowadays more and more advertisements are seen on tv every day. some harbor the idea that advertising on tv can bring us a lot of benefits; other individuals, however, hold the different opinions. for my part, i am in favor of the former. 练习：where would you go after graduation? direction: after university study, some students struggle to go to super cities, such as beijing, shanghai, while some choose to go back to their hometowns, maybe a provincial capital or a small town. which do you think is better? give reasons for your answer. ? nowadays, many students are faced with where to go after graduation. some students choose to go to super cities for career development. others, however, prefer to return to their hometowns. i hold the view that going back to my home city is a better choice. (3) 让步法（也称为先抑后扬法），先把反方观点引出来，做一个肯定的评价，然后笔锋一转，回到自己的观点上来，比较适用于“对比选择型”题目。 如2004年专四考题“will phones kill letter writing?”的开头可以采用让步法。 ? nowadays young people choose to phone each other rather than write letters. some are worried that letter writing will be useless in the future. even so, i still maintain that letter writing will never be killed by phones, despite the fact that we have already stepped into the information age. 练习: degree and university study direction: some people think to get a degree is the only important thing while studying in college. do you agree with them or disagree? in our society, the most commonly recognized standard of a students academic achievement is degree. consequently some people regard the degree as the only thing valuable while studying in college. admittedly, the degree is essential for students who want a prosperous future, but it is by no means the only purpose at university. (4)背景法 即对一个现象进行分析时，先把这个现象事件的原因、发展、结果等背景信息介绍一下，然后再给出自己的看法。这种写法适合“给定观点型”和“自由发挥型”题目。 如2003年作文“the importance of keeping a good mood” ? the modern society is characterized by rapid pace, and people in such a society have to cope with a lot of pressures from either outer world or inner will. the most difficult, but necessary thing for them is to keep a good mood under whatever circumstances. 练习：travel has become part of our life. and more and more of us have come to know the significance of travel through our own experience. write a composition on the following topic “travel broadens the mind” ? with the rapid improvement of our living standards, more and more people can afford travels at home or even abroad. as a matter of fact, travel has become part of our life. speaking from my own experience, travel broadens my mind significantly. （5）提问式 先把话题以问句形式提出，然后通过回答问题表达自己的观点。该方法比较适用于“对比选择型”题目。 如作文“ does personality decide destiny?”的范文的开头一段： ? personality and destiny is a permanent topic of discussion. does personality decide destiny? in my perspective, im more a supporter than an opponent to it. 练习：is money all-powerful? ? “is money all-powerful?” if someone asks me such a question, my answer is always the same: money is by no means all-powerful. (6). 改写、扩写指令法 *红色字体部分背诵。【篇三：大学英语四级作文开头】 开头 1. recently, the problem of has aroused peoples concern. 最近, 问题已引起人们的关注. 2. internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. it has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色.它给我们带来了许多好处,但也产生了一些严重的 问题.3. nowadays, (overpopulation) has become a problem we have to face.如今,(人口过剩)已成为我们不得不面对的问题了. 4. it is commonly believed that / it is a common belief that 人们一般认为 5. many people insist that 很多人坚持认为 引出不同观点: 1. peoples views on vary from person to person. some hold that . however, others believe that. 人们对的观点因人而异.有些人认为. 然而其他人却认为 2. people may have different opinions on 人们对可能会有不同的见解.3. attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person. 人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异. 4. different people hold different attitudes toward (failure). 对(失败)人们的态度各不相同. 结尾 1. taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that 把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论 2. taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that 考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论 3. hence/therefore, wed better come to the conclusion that 因此,我们最好得出这样的结论 4. there is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits. 毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点.5. all in all, we cannot live without but at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise. 总之,我们没有是无法生活的.但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题. 提出建议: 1. it is high time that we put an end to the (trend). 该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了. 2. it is time to take the advice of and to put special emphasis on the improvement of 该是采纳的建议,并对的进展给予特殊