2018. 6 月浙江英语续写 李华原创.ppt

2018.6月续写,浙江兰溪兰荫中学李华,第二节读后续写(满分25分)阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul,mydadsfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.,HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning.UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast.“Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,”hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze(吃草).IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.,Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasntgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains.“Dontbelateforsupper,”UnclePaulcried,“andkeeptothetracksothatyoudontgetlost!”“OK!”mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(编织的)blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.,Paragraph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Paragraph2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.,Basicinformation:,Dad,Writer,Avocationlikeneverbefore,AtriptotheWildWest,Lateafternoon,night,Morning,Afternoon,Settings:,1.listeningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby,3.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.,4.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwovenblanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.,2.headedslowlytowardsthemountains.,Descriptionoftherabbit:,ThelittleRabbithasacoatofwhite/brownhair.Thetwoearsarelongandprickuponitshead.Itisfurry,softandwhite/brownwithtworedeyesglaringabovethechin.Itseyesarelikeapairofsmallredbulbs.Exposedtosunlight,theybecomelittlepiecesofredthread.Itsearsarestraightandlongandtheycanturnandmoveslightly.Howcuteitis!小白兔全身盖一层雪白的毛。两只耳朵很长，直立在头上。它长着一身柔软的毛，瞪着一双红眼睛.眼睛像一对红色的小灯泡，见到阳光时就微微眯起；耳朵长而直竖，有时还会微微转动,它多可爱啊,agile（动作）敏捷的，灵活的abletomovequicklyandeasily,At20yearsoldhewasnotasagileasheisnow.20岁时他并不如现在这般矫健。,scurryVERB(尤指受惊吓时)急奔，乱窜Whenpeopleorsmallanimalsscurrysomewhere,theymovetherequicklyandhurriedly,especiallybecausetheyarefrightened.,Theattackbegan,sendingresidentsscurryingforcover.袭击发动后，居民们纷纷奔逃躲避。,Bushy-tailedsquirrelsscurrytofindacornsandnutstohide.大尾巴的松鼠忙着搜寻和贮藏橡果和松子,gallopn.疾驰；飞奔v.飞驰；急速进行,whinnyn.马嘶声；嘶声v.嘶；以嘶声表示,用作名词(n.)Thehorsewentoffatagallopacrossthefield.那匹马疾驰起来跑过田野。Allthehorsesbrokeintoagallop.所有的马突然飞奔起来。,用作动词(v.)Twopeoplegallopwhipandspur,donotcomeinthecityalittlewhile.两人快马加鞭飞驰，不一会儿就来到城里。Whenrunningfree,theAfghanHoundmovesatagallop,showinggreatelasticityandspringinhissmooth,powerfulstride.自由奔跑时，阿富汗猎犬是飞驰的，它平稳有力的步幅显示出极大的弹力和跳跃力。,用作动词(v.)Thehorsewhinniedwithpleasure.那匹马舒服的嘶叫著。Itisanillhorsecanneitherwhinnynorwaghistail.这匹马病了,它不会嘶鸣,也不会摆尾。,Problemsandsolutions,plot,Writingpurpose,characters,feelings,Writingpurpose:,分享作者年轻时的和父亲的一次冒险行动，以及从父亲那学到了一些东西。,Feelings：,从兴奋，开心到害怕，吃惊，再到放松，开心的过程,Characters：,文章没有明显的显示出来，但父亲应该是很有经验的样子。,Problemsandresolutions：,第一段是problem的产生。第二段是resolution的过程。,Paragraph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.,Itwasverycute.Wetriedtohuntforit,walkingthroughforestsandhillswithoutanyrest.Wefinallygotintothedeepofaforest.,Paragraph2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.,Wegotlost.Throughsomedifficulties,wegotbacksafewithourefforts.,Paragraph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Itwasfurrywithacoatofgorgeousbrownhair.Afterlookingupatmewithitspairofredbulbs,itbegantoscurryahead.“WhynotcatchitandbringitbacktoUnclePaul?Theymustbeveryhappy.”Withthisthought,Irodehardtohuntforit.Dadsawitandhadtofollowme.Therabbitwasveryagile,soonenteringamountainforest.Wehadtogetdownthehorses,continuingthechaseandtotallyforgettingthetrackback.Eventhoughwetrieddesperately,therabbitwasoutofsightintheend.Thenwerealizedwewereinthedeeppartofanforest.,Paragraph2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Anddarkcloudsseemedtobegatheringinthesky.Takingoutthecellphone,wesoonfoundsomethingwaswrong:nosignal.Andnocompass.Frightened,IstaredatDad,tryingtoseekasolutionforthetroublefromhim.“Maybewhatyouhavelearnedingeographyclassworks,hesaid,pointingtothestarsinthesky.IknewhemeanttheNorthStar.Soonwefoundtherightdirection.Wehurriedbackfindingthehorses.Andtheriverwasinsightagain.Thefamilywasworriedandabouttocallthepolice.Atthesightofus,theywererelievedandhuggedustightly.Therewasnothingmorememorablethanthisrabbithuntinginmylife!,第一篇Cherie老师Paragraph1Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Instinctively,Iyelledoutloud,pullingbackthereinshardinordertostopthehorsefromhurtingthelittlecreature.Badlystartledbythesuddenincident,thehorsespedoffthetrackintoanotherdirection.Dadfollowedcloselybehind,callingouttotellmehowtosoothetheterrifiedhorseandIdidastold.Finally,thehorsecalmeddown,butweseemedtogetlost,unabletogobacktothemountainroad.Paragraph2Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.Wanderingaround,wewerestillstuckinthedilemma.Muchtoourdelight,thesoundofwaterinthedistancecaughtourattentionanddroveustotheriverbank.Dadproposedthatweshouldwalkalongtheriverwhichmayleadustothefarmhouseandnothingseemedbetterthanthat.TimeappearedtobemerrierandshorterwhenIstayedtogetherwithDadandbeforelong,thefarmhousecameintosight.Whatathrillingbutmemorableexperienceitwas!,第二篇：Katie老师Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Iimmediatelygrewfondofthefurryrabbitandcalledoutexcitedly,“Dad!Look!”Alarmed,therabbitranawayinaflash.Ifollowediteagerly,hopingtocatchitasmytrophyforthetrip.Mydadjustfollowedme,knowingitwasimpossibletostopme.Wetrackedtherabbitforabouttenminutesuntilitgotcompletelyoutofsight.Depressedandtired,Isuggestedgoingback.Butapparently,wehaddivergedfromthetrackUnclePaulwarnedustokeep.(86words)Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.Thethoughtthatwemighthavegotlostinsuchdarknesssentshiversdownmyspine.Tearsoffearandregretfilledmyeyes.Fortunately,DadwasnotsopanickedasIwas.Hekeptsilentandlistenedverycarefullyashetookmyhorsereinandledtheway.Wehadwanderedforwhatseemedlikeageswhensuddenlyarivercameintosight.Hopefully,wecouldfindourwaybacktothefarmhouseifwefollowedtheriver.Finally,wearrivedhomesafelyjustintimeforsupper,butwhatanexperience!Itturnsouttheresalwaysawayoutofanyplightaslongaswestaycalm.(114words),第三篇：Oz老师Paragraph1Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Itwassoquickthatmyhorsewasscared.Thehorsestartedtoneigh,shiverandgraduallylosecontrol.ItsuddenlyrantoanotherdirectionawayfromtheinitialtrackUnclePaulhaswarnedustokeep.Mydadheldtheropetightlyinordertocalmthehorsedown.However,itdidntwork.Ourcowboyhatswereevenlostwhilethehorsewasrunningwildandfinallywefelldownfromthehorseandthehorsejustranawayleavingmeandmydadlyingontheground.Paragraph2Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.Mylegswerehurtsothatmydadhadtocarrymeontheback.“Wegetlost,right?”Iaskedmydad,“Yes.Butdontworry,wellfindthewaybackhome.”Weslowlywalkedtowardstheluminousdirection.“Iguesswerelateforsupper.”Sensingmyfearandconcerns,mydadtriedtomakemelaugh.Atthattime,wesawtheriverinfrontofus.“Dad,thisistherivernexttoourfarmhouse.Wecanfollowtherivertofindourwayhome.”“Exactly!Howcleveryouare!”Thenwefollowedtheriverbankandfinallyourhousecameintooursight.Reflectingonthismemory,Iregardedthisexperienceasmyspecialadventurewithmydad.,第四篇：Niehai老师Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Itgotsuchafrightthatitrushedatahighspeed.I,frightenedtoo,grabbedthereintightly.Minuteslater,thehorsewasoffthetrackandIfoundthattherewasnosignofmydad.Inthemiddleofnowhere,Ifeltawaveoffearwraparoundme.Worsestill,theraincamepouringdownandIwaswetthrough.Afterseeminglylonghours,therecamealoudcryofmydad.Asaquickresponse,Ishoutedinaloudvoice.Dad,Imhere!Tracingmyvoice,Dadfinallyfoundmeandwegotreunited.Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.Themoonburstthroughthecloudsandcastitssilverlightalloverthewetland.Wewanderedslowlyonourhorses,feelingatalosswhattodo.Suddenly,thesoundofafloatingrivercaughtmyattention.Dad,maybewecanfindthefarmhousedowntheriver.Dadnoddedwithapproval.Withgreatcare,werodeourhorsesalongtheriver.Shortlyafterwards,theUnclePaulsfarm,sureenough,cameintooursight.Finally,wegottothefarm,safeandsound.Whatatriplikeneverbefore!,第五篇：Tanya老师Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Myhorserearedintotheair,letoutafrightenedwhinny,andgallopedoffthetrack.Iheldonfordearlife,brancheslashingintomyarmsandface.Finallyhesloweddown,thenstopped,butlookingaroundattheendlessseaoftrees,Iknewwehadgottenhopelesslylost.Icalled;theonlyanswerwastherustlingofthewindinthetrees.Thehorsemeanderedthroughthelonesomepines,withmecontinuingtocallandscanthehorizonforafamiliarlandmark,earsprickedforthesoundofahorseorahumanvoice.Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.AtlastIheardthewelcomesoundofrushingwater-theriver!Gratefullywewenttothebankanddrankourfill.Wefolloweditinthedirectionthatthesunhadset,andeventuallyheardthefamiliarfrogs,andsawthecomfortingsightoftheoldfarmhouse,mydadshiningahugelampfromtheporch,guidingourwayhome.,MollyDorighi3/6/201707:52:35pmLostinTheWild,WildWestItwasthesummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.Hedecidedtotakemeonatriptothewild,wildwest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul,mydadsfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisranchinPecos.HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomlisteningtothecrickets,owls,andcoyotes.Veryearlyinthemorning,unclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast.Thedaystartsatdawnonmyranchhesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpauntTinafeedthechickens,whilemydadwentwithunclePaultotakethesheepouttograze.IwasimpressedtoseemydadandunclePaulridinghorses,theylookedreallycool.,Intheafternoon,IaskedunclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasntgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains.DontbelateforsupperunclePaulcriedandkeeptothetrailsothatyoudontgetlost.OKmydadcriedback.AfterawhilewecouldhardlyseeunclePaulandhisfarmhouse.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunblendedtocreateamajesticscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwovenblanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.,coyote英kat,Suddenlyalittlecoyotejumpedoutinfrontofmyhorseandstartledhim.Hewassostartled,hetookoffrunningfasterthanIimaginedhecould.IwasholdingonashardasIcouldandmydadwastryingtokeepupwithme.Myhorsegotoffthetrailandkeptrunning,andonlystoppedonceitreachedtheriver.Itseemsthewatermusthavecalmedhimdownabit.ItwasabeautifulspotandasfrightenedasIwasjustafewminutesearlier,IwashappythatIgotachancetoseesuchaplace.Mydadthoughtitwasgorgeoustoo,buthesaidthatwehadtoleavebecausethesunwassettingandhedidnotwantustogetlost.We