托福写作首段常见误区.doc

托福写作首段常见误区 导语：托福写作想要取得高分不容易啊很多考生有疑惑才能快速提高托福写作成绩呢为了帮到大家小编下面为大家带来了托福写作常见误区的介绍一起来看看吧 一：中式英文人见人晕 典型失败案例：Topic1Thehappiestmomentinyourlife Inourlife,therearealwayssomemomentswhichmakeyourheartfloweropenedangrily Topic2Thepopulationproblem Thepopulationproblemisaverybigproblem.Forexample,inthecitycentersofShanghai,wecanalwaysseepeoplemountainpeopleseathere. Topic3Istherefairnessintodaysbusinessworld? Ithinkintodayssociety,thereisnofairnessinthebusinessworld.Forexample,IalwayschoppedwhenIgooutbuythings Topic4Theadvantageofbeinganiceperson Beinganicepersonhavemanyadvantage.Ibelieveifapeoplealwaysdobadthings,hewillget“baoying”. 二：废话连篇不知所云 典型失败案例：Topic1Shouldcollegestudentsbeallowedtogetmarried? Thistopicisveryinteresting.Imveryinterestedintalkingaboutthistopic.BecauseImalsoacollegestudentandImnotmarried 修改方案：开门见山直奔主题 Inmyopinion,itwouldnotbeawisedecisiontoallowcollegestudentstogetmarried. Topic2Willmoderntechnology,suchastheInternet,everreplacethebookorthewritingwordasthesolesourceofinformation? Ok,thistopicisaverygoodtopic.First,letmetellyouastory:Ihaveafriend,helikesgoontheinternetverymuch.Everyday,heusesinternettoreadnewsorplayinternetgames.Sowecanseetheinternetismoreandmoreimportantinourdailylife. Topic3Theimportanceofenvironmentalprotection Oh,thistopicissurelyveryimportant.Isntit?OfcourseItsreallyveryveryimportant 三：语法错误惨不忍睹 典型失败案例：TopicIfchildrenbehavebadly,shouldtheirparentsacceptresponsibilityandalsobepunished? Aboutthisproblem,mythinkisifchildrenbehavebadly,thenparentsarenotright.Becauseteachchildisparentsresponsibility.Sowealsopunishparentstoobesideschildrenisalsoshould. 四：观点模糊态度暧昧 典型失败案例：TopicShouldcollegestudentsbeallowedtogetmarried? Ithinkthistopicisveryhardtosay.BecauseIamstillverylittle,only17,andnotmarried,sothistopicisverydifficultforme 五：偏离主题无轨电车 典型失败案例：TopicItissaidthatnowadaysonecannotacquirethequalificationsandqualityessentialtosuccessthroughuniversityeducation.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththestatement? Ithinktosuccess,wemusthavealotofimportantqualities.Tohavetheseimportantqualities,wemustlearnalotofthings,forexample,English,musicto