（江苏专用）2019高考英语二轮培优复习 专题五 书面表达 第一讲 提高语言表达技巧课件.pptVIP

第一讲提高语言表达技巧,高考书面表达最高档次的评分标准中，要求“词汇丰富，有修辞意识，显示出较强的语言运用能力”。因此要想在高考英语写作中取得高分，就必须使用一定的高级词汇和句式，为文章增加闪光点，避免单一、呆板的句式，从而增添语言表达的多样性和灵活性，提高文章的档次。,写作四亮点,1.肯定不如双否好,修辞的使用在写作中是很大的亮点，双重否定也是种修辞，可以在文章中设计双重否定的句子。典例Thepostmanesontimeeveryday.Thepostmanneverfailstoeontimeeveryday.典例Hebelievesthathehasenoughtimetochallengehimself.Hebelievesthatitisnevertoolatetochallengehimself.,典例Ms.Lispentawonderfultimewithus，butweknowthatweshouldthankherforallherhardworkandguidanceverymuch.Ms.Lispentawonderfultimewithus，butweknowthatwecannotthankherenoughforallherhardworkandguidance.典例Iquiteagreewiththisview.Icantagreemorewiththisview.应用类似的修辞会在高考中为考生加分。,2.陈述不如倒装妙,在写作中阅卷老师喜欢看到的高级语法共有五种：倒装、强调、从句、独立主格或分词结构以及虚拟语气。倒装是一种最简单易行的使句子呈现亮点的方法。在高中阶段只需掌握倒装的四种形式，足以应对写作，如何应用倒装，有很多方法和技巧。(1)否定词开头典例Iwillnevermarryyou.NeverwillImarryyou.其他的否定词，如not，seldom，hardly等开头的句子倒装都是比较好的句子。,(2)地点状语开头典例Ourlibraryisinthecenterofourschool.Inthecenterofourschoolliesourlibrary.典例Therearesomeflowersonthebank.Onthebankstandsomeflowers.在表达地点时就把地点状语放在句首，后面进行主谓倒装，这样做的好处之一是倒装本身就是高级结构，第二是倒装后把真正的主语放到了句子的末尾，后面还可以继续加从句，使整个句子呈现更多的亮点。典例Inthecenterofourschoolliesourlibrary，whichisbetweenthegardenandtheteachingbuilding.,(3)only介词短语典例Wecanliveinmorefortableandbeautifulsurroundingsonlyinthisway.Onlyinthiswaycanweliveinmorefortableandbeautifulsurroundings.,(4)形容词as主语谓语动词典例AlthoughIfeltdisappointedattheshabbycampusandthepoorly-equippedclassroom，Ifoundtheteacherspatientandconsiderate.DisappointedasIfeltattheshabbycampusandthepoorly-equippedclassroom，Ifoundtheteacherspatientandconsiderate.典例Althoughourcountryisrich，wehavealotofproblems.Richasourcountryis，wehavealotofproblems.还有其他的倒装结构：典例SogladamItohearfromyou.,3.主动不如被动巧,在英文中，被动语态的使用很重要。因为英语中经常用被动语态，汉语中经常用主动语态；英语中经常用物称或形式主语开头，强调一件事发生在什么人身上，而汉语经常用人称开头强调一个人发生了什么事。所以使用被动语态符合英语的习惯，如果能将整个文章中两个句子变成被动语态，就会呈现出丰富的句型，整篇文章也生动起来。典例Thenwewillcutthecakeandwellsingsongsandplaygames.Thenthecakewillbecutandwellsingsongsandplaygames.,4.分词结构不能少,在所有的高级语法中，阅卷老师最喜欢看到的是独立主格和分词结构，其实几乎所有的状语从句都可以变成独立主格或分词结构。如何变成独立主格或分词结构呢？学会下面的口诀，如果你的作文中有状语从句，马上可改成独立主格或分词结构这个最大的亮点。口诀：一去，二看，三改。一去：去连词；二看：看主语；三改：改分词。典例Ifsuchisthecase，youshouldapologizetoher.第一步，去掉连词if；第二步，看前后两句话的主语，前后主语不一致，所以要改成独立主格；第三步，改分词，is变成分词是being，所以最后变成：Suchbeingthecase，youshouldapologizetoher.,典例Ms.Lienteredtheclassroom，andhewassurprisedtofindwewerestandinginline，clappinghandsandsayingloudly“HappyTeachersDay！”Enteringtheclassroom，Ms.Liwassurprisedtofindwewerestandinginline，clappinghandsandsayingloudly“HappyTeachersDay！”典例Isawthemonthebus;Ifeltakindofsatisfaction.Seeingthemonthebus，Ifeltakindofsatisfaction.,常用高分句型,1.合并句子(丰富结构),NotonlycanIimprovemyoralEnglishbutalsoIlearnsomecustomsinwesterncountries.Foronething，theyhelptoimprovemywritingskillsandbroadenmyhorizons.Foranother，theycanenrichmylifeandprovidemewithgreatfun.,2.改变语态(避免单调),Besides，Iamabook-loverandthebooksaresowellkeptthattheyareasgoodasnew.,3.使用省略(达到言简意赅的效果)4.使用强调句型(突出语意),Ifso，pleasekeepquietaboutitbecausewewanttogivehimasurprise.Myexperiencetellsmethatitisnotwhatyouaregivenbuthowyoumakeuseofitthatdetermineswhoyouare.ItisforthesereasonsthatIfinallymademychoice.ItsbecauseofthisandmyeffortinclassthatImanagedtogetthefirstplaceintheEnglishContestheldrecentlyinourschool.,5.使用倒装句(增强说服力)6.使用虚拟语气(提出建议，委婉表达，易于接受)7.使用with复合结构(丰富句式)8.使用状语从句(强调谓语或句子),Sosuddenlydidhecatchthediseasethatthewholefamilywereatagreatloss.Shewouldhaveneverthoughtapletesurprisewaswaitingforher.Theparkwasfulloffreshnessandbeautyofspring，withthesunshiningandbirdssinging.WheneverIhaddifficulties，theywerealwaysavailable.,9.使用定语从句(表意丰富),In2012，hewhowaspraisedbyhisteacherforbeinggoodatarrangingtimereceivedhisfourthdegreethroughlearningontheInternet.Lastbutnotleast，myphysicsteacherismyrolemodel，whoseinfluenceonmehadalottodowithmydecision.,10.使用名词性从句(体现扎实的语言功底),Nottomindwhatotherssaysolongasweareconfidentinwhatwehavedone.MyEnglishisjustOKandthetwomainproblemsinmystudyarethatIfeelitdifficulttolearnwordsbyheart，andthatIoftenfeelnervouswhenspeakingEnglish.,11.使用非谓语动词(不定式、现在分词、过去分词以及动名词的使用，可使句式多样化),Whatsworse，theyspatandeventhrewrubbishintothelake，totallyignoringthenoticeablesign“NoLittering”nearby.SuHuaandLiJiangbumpedintoeachother，tryingtocatchtheball.,一、用复合句完成下列句子,1.一个人要是不努力，就将一事无成。(状语从句)2.与逃逸的司机相比，我为我所做的感到自豪。(宾语从句)3.不可否认的事实是，环境污染越来越严重了。(同位语从句),Nobodycanachieveanythingofrealsignificance.Comparedwiththeescapeddriver，Iamproudof.Noonecandenythefact.,unlessheworkshard,whatIdid,thattheenvironmentisgettingpollutedmoreandmoreseriously,4.使我印象最深的是他们都经过了专业培训。(主语从句与表语从句)5.鞋在我们的生活中起着重要作用，因为它们能够保护我们的脚免受伤害。(状语从句)6.我最大的爱好是读书看报，这已经成为我日常生活中不可或缺的一部分。(定语从句)7.众所周知，由于全球气候变化，地球正变得越来越暖和。(定语从句),was.Shoesplayanimportantroleinourlife，.Myfavoritehobbiesarereadingbooksandnewspapers，.，theearthisbeingwarmerandwarmerduetotheglobalclimatechange.,Whatimpressedmemost,thattheyhadhadprofessionaltraining,fortheycanprotectourfeetfrombeinghurt,necessarypartofmydailylife,Asweallknow/Asisknowntoall,whichhavebeea,8.我们到了一座小山，山脚下有一条小河在流淌。(定语从句)9.只要我们有坚强的信念，就能够克服任何困难。(状语从句)10.每当见到有人需要帮助时，我就会尽力去帮助他。(状语从句),Wearrivedatahill，.，wellbeabletogetoveranydifficulty.，Iwillsparenoefforttohelphim.,atthefootofwhichthereflowsasmallriver,Aslongaswehaveastrongwill,WheneverIseesomeoneinneed,二、按要求升级下列句式,1.Afterwehadpracticedplayingbasketballforalmosttwomonths，westronglydesiredtobethewinner.(用分词作状语改写句子)2.Asthesocietydevelopsrapidly，itsnecessaryforustohaveagoodknowledgeofEnglishandputer.(用with复合结构改写句子),Havingpracticedplayingbasketballforalmosttwomonths,westronglydesiredtobethewinner.,Withthesocietydevelopingrapidly,itsnecessaryforustohaveagoodknowledgeofEnglishandputer.,3.Theyareexperienced，knowledgeable，patientandunderstanding.(用notonly.butalso.并列句型改写句子)4.WeshouldspeakmoreEnglish.Wethinkitisveryimportant.(用it作形式宾语改写句子)5.IrealizedtheimportanceofEnglishwhenIenteredseniorhigh