（江苏专用）2019高考英语二轮培优复习 专题五 书面表达课件.ppt

江苏高考书面表达近五年考情分布,从上表可以看出，近五年来，江苏高考书面表达的题目设置场景越来越具有真实性，越来越与生活实际紧密联系，内容包括日常生活、学校生活、社会文化等方面。从2014年开始，江苏高考书面表达采用了一种新题型“读写任务型作文”，题型有创新，但对写作能力的要求和词数的要求等没有变化。材料既有读写式的文字介绍也有图表，信息量大，这对考生的材料分析、概括提炼能力要求很高，同时，具有一定的开放性，便于考生写出紧扣主题的个性化内容，又能防止考生出现简单翻译写作要求中的句子的做法。,请阅读下面文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。,【写作内容】,1.用约30个词概括上述利用排名(ratings)进行消费的现象；2.谈谈你如何看待消费排名，然后用23个理由或论据支撑你的看法。,【写作要求】【评分标准】,1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.不必写标题。内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。,【写作思路】,本篇书面表达要求考生根据两段文字材料写一篇文章，针对“消费排名”现象论述自己的看法和观点，并阐述理由。文章为任务型读写，属于议论文，主要使用第一和第三人称，一般现在时。写作时应注意紧扣两段材料表达的主题，不可偏题，还应注意合理使用高级词汇和较复杂句型。,考生首先应当仔细阅读题干所提供的文字材料。通读两篇文字材料可知，第一段材料为一对母子看了网上的评论后买回旅行箱，结果买回来的旅行箱质量很好；第二段材料为一家人看了网评后去餐馆吃饭，结果饭菜很不好吃，从而凸显出网评的不可靠性。明确以上事实后，再在此基础上明确文章的主题和结构，对“消费排名”现象作相关阐述。本文可分为三段进行写作，第一段用30词左右概述材料的主要内容，提出文章主题；第二段论述对“消费排名”现象的观点并说明理由；第三段总结全文，再次点明主题。在遣词造句上，应当注意合理使用连接成分，以提高文章的逻辑性，如在说明看法时可以用tobeginwith，whatsmore，lastbutnotleast等；此外应尽量使用较复杂句型，如在总结全文大意时可以用定语从句、分词结构；在其他地方可以用主语从句、倒装语序等。,【参考范文1】,Asamajorchannelofconsumptioninformation,theratingisanefficientsourceofinformationforshoppinginourownconsumption.Interestingly,thesameratingmayhavedifferentinfluencesondifferentconsumers.ItendtoconsultconsumptionratingswhateverIpurchase.Firstly,thehigherratingmeansthehigherqualityoftheproduct,orbetterservice.Basedontheratings,Iboughtmybelovedbackpack,sawinterestingfilmsandtasteddeliciousfoods.Secondly,ratingscansavetimetomakedecisionsinshopping.Forexample,therearehugeamountsofreferencebookswhichIamoftenconfusedtochoosefrom.Inthatcase,itisbothconvenientandeconomicaltobuybooksaccordingtotheratings.,Thereisnodoubtthatitisunwisetodependpletelyontheratingsinconsumption.Theadvantagesanddisadvantagesofratingsareoftencloselyrelated.Itisnecessarytoholdanobjectiveattitudetowardsratings.,【参考范文2】,Nowadays,mostmoditiesorservicesareratedthroughcertainchannels.Theseratings,easytoaccess,areplayinganincreasinglyimportantroleincustomerspurchasedecision.However,resultsaresometimesunsatisfactory.,Thereisnodenyingthatsuchratingsmightbringconveniencetoconsumers，buttheyareoftenmisleadingandunreliable.Asweallknow,mostoftheratingsarebasedonothersjudgmentontheproductorserviceconcerned.Everyjudgmentesfromaspecificneedorauniquepsychologicalstate.Apparently，blindlyfollowingothersadvicewillaffectourownjudgment.Anotherfactshouldnotbeneglectedthatsomeoftheratingsaretheouteofacarefulmanipulationofpaniesorsellers.Ithasbeeamonpracticeforsometopayforgoodratingsontheirproductsorservicessoastoincreasetheirsales.Therefore,weshouldgiveasecondthoughttotheseratingswheneverwegoshopping.,请认真阅读下面有关我国电影票房收入(box-officeine)的柱状图及相关文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。,SaturdayAfternoon.InaShoppingCentre.LiJiang：Hi，SuHua.Whichmovieshallwesee?SuHua：Whatever.Wevegotsomanychoices，KungFuYoga，JourneytotheWest.Eachsoundsgreat!LiJiang：Yeah！Andsomemoviestarsarefantastic.SuHua：Andthehigh-tech！.LiJiang：Perfect！Letsgetsomefoodfirst.Weonlyhave20minutesleft.SuHua：Nohurry.Thecinemaisonthesamefloor.,OneDayin2016.AtHome.Son：Mum，shallwegoandseeafilmtonight?Mother：Whybother？Wecanstayathomeandwatchfilmsonline.Itsconvenientwithournewandfasternetwork.Son：Butitfeelsgoodinacinema.Mother：Andtheprice.Wehavetopay50yuanaticket.Son：Only10yuanmorethanlastyear.Mother：Butstillwecannotgetthemoneysworth.Somefilmsarejustboring.,【写作内容】【写作要求】【评分标准】,1.用约30个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容；2.我国电影票房收入变化的原因有哪些，简要谈谈你的看法(上述对话仅供参考，原因不少于两点)；3.谈谈你对我国电影票房收入走向的看法，并简要说明理由。1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.不必写标题。内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。,【参考范文】,Thebox-officeineofChinesemovieswitnessedaconstantincreasefromabout17billionyuanin2012toover40billionin2015.However，thatincreasesloweddownin2016.Thereasonsbehindthisarevarious.Thefasteconomicdevelopmentbefore2016wasprobablythemostpowerfulenginedrivingtheconstantgrowthinthebox-officeine.Theapplicationofnewtechnologiesandthewideappealofmoviestarscouldalsoaccountfortheincrease.However，Chinasawadeclineinitseconomicgrowthratelastyear.Andtheinternetincreasedoptionsformovielovers.Consequently，someviewersbegantoturnawayfromcinemas，leadingtoaslowergrowth.,Chinaseconomyisexpectedtogrowatamediumspeedintheingyears，soanincreaseispossibleintheinvestmentinthemovieindustryandthenumberofqualitymovies.Therefore，itsbox-officeinewillprobablyenjoyaslightincrease.,请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。Inrecentyears，InternetvotinghasbeeincreasinglypopularinChina.Peoplenotonlycaston-linevotesthemselves，butalsourgeotherstovoteforpetitionslikethe“MostBeautifulTeacher”andthe“CutestBaby”.LiJiang，ahighschoolstudent，isinvitedtovoteinthe“BestPoliceOfficer”petition，organizedbythelocalgovernmenttoletthepublichaveabetterunderstandingofpoliceofficersdailywork.LiJiangvisitsthewebsiteandreadsallthestories.Heisdeeplymovedbytheirgloriousdeeds.Heisalreadythinkingofbeingapolicemanhimselfinthefuture.,SuHuaisinvitedbyhisuncletovoteforhiscousininthe“FutureSinger”petition.Hehasalreadyreceivedthreesimilarinvitationsthisweek.Hisuncletellshimthatifhiscousinwinsthepetition，thefamilywillwinanoverseastourforfree.SuHualikeshiscousinverymuch，buthefindsothersingersperformevenbetter.Tovote，ornottovote?Thisisaquestionthattroubleshimverymuch.,【写作内容】,1.用约30个单词写出上文概要；2.用约120个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法，并用23个理由或论据支撑你的看法。,【写作要求】,1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.不必写标题。,【评分标准】,内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。,【参考范文1】,On-linevotingbeesincreasinglypopular，andmanypetitionsgetpeopleinvolvedinit.Itisbeneficialtosomepeople，whileitputsothersintoadilemmaoverwhethertovoteornot.Inmyopinion，on-linevotingisaninseparablepartofmodernlifeandshouldbeweled，sinceitisnomorethanawaytoparticipateinpubliclife.Itmakesnodifferencefromordinaryvotingevents，inwhichcandidatesgoaroundtoseeksupports.Inaddition，theInternetmakessurveyingandvotingeasyandconvenient，regardlessoftimeandspace.Furthermore，votingontheInternetmakesinstantfeedbackpossible.,Tobehonest，voterssometimesfeelannoyed，notbecausetheyhatevoting，butbecausetheyaredividedbetweenemotionandfairness.Thingswillturnforthebetterifwecanworkoutsomeparticipationrulesforpeopletoobey.Therefore，Iholdapositiveattitudetowardson-linevoting.,【参考范文2】,Internetvotingisquitepopularnowadays.Manypeoplearesomewhatpuzzleda