（浙江地区）2019年中考英语复习 专题二十一 书面表达 课件.ppt

第五部分书面表达专题二十一书面表达,中考英语(浙江专用),Writing1(2018杭州)假定你是李平(Tel:1361234567),家住滨海市人民路1号。你在美国旅行期间不慎遗失钱包,曾向宾馆询问。以下是宾馆的答复邮件,请你阅读后进行回复,词数80左右。,A组20142018年浙江中考题组,五年中考,答案写作要点1.本文是应用文。2.写作时应使用第一人称,时态主要为一般现在时。3.写作中应包含何时入住宾馆、所住房间和对失物的描述及里面的物品,并附上地址和电话号码。参考范文DearMr.Smith,Thankyousomuchforyourreply.IstayedinyourhotelonJuly6,inRoom106,andIrememberhavingleftmynewblackwalletonthetable.MyIDcard,twocreditcards,anda100-dollarbill,areinmywallet.WouldyoubekindenoughtosendmethewallettoNo.1RenminRoad,Binhai,Chinabymailifyoufindit?Pleasecallmeatmyphonenumber1361234567ifneeded.Thanksagain.Yours,LiPing精彩语句1.精美词汇rememberdoing记得做过2.出彩结构WouldyoubekindenoughtosendmethewallettoNo.1RenminRoad,Binhai,China.?(拜托您),注意:文中若出现“Jack”以外的人名或任何学校名称,该作文得分不超过12分。WeekendorNot?,Writing2(2018温州)如今,国内外很多孩子在父母的安排下没有了自己的周末,如下图中的Jack。请分析图中的这种现象并谈谈你的看法,以WeekendorNot?为题写一篇约110词的英语短文向Parents杂志投稿,让父母们通过阅读你的文章能有所启发。,答案写作提示1.本文是看图作文。2.写作时应以第三人称为主,时态应以一般现在时为主。3.写作中应先描述Jack周末的基本情况,而后分析现象,谈论自己的看法。参考范文WeekendorNot?Jackhastoattendlotsofclassesatweekends.Hehaslittletimeforhisfavoritesportsoccer.Still,hisparentsarepushinghimtodomoremathexercises,whichworrieshimalot.Nowadays,manystudentsareundermuchpressurelikeJack.Theirparentsbelieveitnecessaryforthemtomakefulluseoftheweekendsandlearnasmuchaspossible.Asaresult,somestudentsarestressedoutandthereforeloseinterestinlearninganything.Whatisworse,theymaynotbeabletolearntomanagetheirownlife.,Idohopeallthechildrencanhavethefreedomtochoosewhattheyliketodoandenjoytheirweekends.精彩语句1.精美词汇makefulluseof充分利用asaresult结果是bestressedout紧张,饱受压力atweekends在周末2.出彩结构Still,hisparentsarepushinghimtodomoremathexercises,whichworrieshimalot.(使用定语从句)Theirparentsbelieveitnecessaryforthemtomakefulluseoftheweekendsandlearnasmuchaspossible.(it是形式宾语,真正的宾语是动词不定式短语)Whatisworse,theymaynotbeabletolearntomanagetheirownlife.(连接词的使用),Writing3(2018宁波)今年5月11日,你校组织了一次社会实践活动,部分学生选择去了红星农场(见导图一),其余学生选择去了科技博物馆(见导图二)。请根据你所选择的实践活动写一篇英语日记,记录当天的经历和感受。注意:(1)日记必须包括你所选择导图的所有要点,并适当发挥;(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;(3)词数:80100。日记格式及首句已给出,不计入总词数。Friday,May11th,TodayIhadaschooltrip.,答案写作要点1.本文是应用文。2.写作时应使用第一人称,时态应为一般过去时。3.写作中应按照导图介绍人物、出行方式、活动,并补充自己对活动的感受,合理拓展。参考范文1Friday,May11thTodayIhadaschooltrip.Theweatherwasfine.MyclassmatesandIsetofftoHongxingFarmbybusearlyinthemorning.Theminutewearrived,wetookawalkaroundthefarm.Thenwefedthechickens.WhenIthrewsomefoodtothem,theyranovertomewithexcitementandsomeofthemevenwalkedintotheirfriends.Themostexcitingthingwasthatwepickedstrawberriesafterlunch.Whilewewerepick-ing,weatealot.Howsweettheywere!Ihadawonderfultimetoday!Idohopetogothereagaininthenearfuture!,参考范文2Friday,May11thTodayIhadaschooltrip.Theweatherwasfine.MyclassmatesandIsetofftotheScienceMuse-umbysubwayat7:00.Assoonaswereachedthemuseum,wewereamazedtoseelotsofpicturesaboutscience.Thenwewatchedavideoaboutdifferentinventionsandtheirinventors.Itsunbelievablethattechnologyhasprogressedinsucharapidway.Intheafternoon,weplayedchesswithsomespecialrobots.Itwassurprisingtofindthatnobodycouldbeatthem.Beforeleaving,weboughtsomegiftsforourfriends.Ihadawonderfultimetoday!Idohopetogothereagain!精彩语句1.精美词汇setoff出发withexcitement兴奋地,beamazedtodo惊讶地做insucharapidway以如此快速的方式assoonas一就2.出彩结构Itsunbelievablethattechnologyhasprogressedinsucharapidway.Theminutewearrived,wetookawalkaroundthefarm.(theminute一就)Howsweettheywere!(感叹句的使用),Writing4(2018金华)在即将举行的中学生国际文化交流活动中,你将代表学校介绍中国的传统节日,请你从所给的卡片中任选一张,用英语写一篇发言稿,介绍该节日。,注意:1.发言稿中必须包含卡片上的信息,并适当发挥;2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;3.词数80100;4.文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Ladiesandgentlemen,WeletotheChineseculturetour.Thatsall.Thanksforlistening.,答案写作要点1.本文是应用文。2.写作时应使用一般现在时。3.写作中注意包含时间、活动、意义,在列提纲时注意把必要的活动和意义补充完整。参考范文1Ladiesandgentlemen,WeletotheChineseculturetour.NowallowmetointroduceoneoftheChinesetraditionalfestivals,theSpringFestival.TheSpringFestivalfallsinJanuaryorFebruary.ItisChineseNewYearandalsothebiggestdayofyear.Sopeopleebackhomefromdifferentplacesandgettogetherforabigdinner.Manypeoplestayuplatetowelethenewyear,hopingtheywillhaveabrightnewstart.Duringthefestival,peoplevisittheirrelativesandfriendsandwisheachothergoodluckforthenewyear.Childrencanoftengethongbaofromtheirelders.Doyouthinkitinteresting?,Thatsall.Thanksforlistening.参考范文2Ladiesandgentlemen,WeletotheChineseculturetour.NowallowmetointroduceoneoftheChinesetraditionalfestivals,theMid-AutumnFestival.TheMid-AutumnFestivalusuallyfallsinSeptemberorOctoberwhenthemoonappearsthebiggestandthebrightestintheyear.Duringthefestival,Chinesepeoplesitaroundthetablewiththeirfamilymembersandenjoymooncakesaswellasthebeautifulmoon.Peoplebelievethattheroundmooncakesandafullmoonaresymbolsofbeingtogether.Whenseeingthem,peoplewillmisstheirfamilymembersfaraway.Atthesametime,theywillexpresswishesandhopesforthem.Doesitsoundinteresting?Thatsall.Thanksforlistening.,精彩语句1.精美词汇allowsb.todosth.允许某人做某事fallinJanuaryorFebruary恰巧在一月或者二月theirelders他们的长辈haveabrightnewstart拥有一个全新的开始aswellas也,又2.出彩结构TheMid-AutumnFestivalusuallyfallsinSeptemberorOctober.Manypeoplestayuplatetowelethenewyear,hopingtheywillhaveabrightnewstart.(现在分词作伴随状语)Atthesametime,theywillexpresswishesandhopesforthem.,Writing5(2017杭州),答案写作提示1.本文时态是一般现在时。2.文章应对来信的两个问题进行答复,一是tablemanners,二是推荐杭州的景点。参考范文HiArmino,Gladtohearfromyouagain.Asyoumentionedinyouremail,thereareindeedsometablemannersinChina.Forexample,wearenotsupposedtostarteatingfirstifthereareolderpeopleatthetable.Anditsimpolitetopointatanyonewithchopsticks.Asforplacesofinterest,IsuggestyougototheHangzhouNationalTeaMuseum,whereyoucouldwatchteaartperformancesanddrinktea.Imlookingforwardtoseeingyou!LiPing,精美语句1.精美词汇besupposedtodosth.应该做某事;hearfrom收到的信2.出彩结构Asyoumentionedinyouremail.(as引导定语从句)Itsimpolitetodo.(“itis+形容词+不定式短语”句型)Writing6(2017温州)假如你是李华,就读于WenzhouTangheMiddleSchool。你想去美国的WashingtonInternationalSchool(WIS)读高中。现在你需要给对方学校写一封简明扼要、有说服力的自荐信,争取让学校录取你。参考要点:个人信息学习成绩爱好、能力,要求:(1)不能出现真实的个人身份信息;(2)词数:110左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。DearSir/Madam,Iamlookingforwardtoyourkindreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua,答案写作提示1.本文使用一般现在时态,要写清楚个人信息。2.介绍自己喜爱的学科及成绩。3.写出自己的爱好和能力。参考范文DearSir/Madam,IamLiHuafromWenzhouTangheMiddleSchool.IwishtogetanopportunitytostudyatWIS.Likemanyotherboys,Ienjoydoingsports,butmathsandsciencearemyfavourite.IlikeChinese,Englishandmusicaswell.Ihavewonseveralprizesinvariouspetitions,includingasecondprizeinaninternationalmathspetition.Ihavejoinedinthreeone-month-tour-studyprogramsintheUS,learntalotaboutAmericancul-tureandmademanyfriendsthere.SoWISismyfirstchoicetostudyabroad.AlthoughIamnotthebestnow,IwillmakeeveryefforttobeeatopstudentandIbelieveyou,willbeproudofme.Iamlookingforwardtoyourkindreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua精美语句1.精美词汇makeeveryeffort尽最大的努力2.出彩结构IwishtogetanopportunitytostudyatWIS.(动词不定式作定语是英语表达中的一种特色)enjoydoing喜欢做,Writing7(2017宁波)三年的初中生活让你收获满满。校英语报邀你写一篇短文,给即将升入九年级的学弟学妹或他们的父母提一些建议。请你结合自己的学习经历选择其中一个对象,阐述你的观点。,注意:(1)短文必须包括你所选择一方的所有要点,并适当发挥;(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;(3)词数:80100;(4)短文首句仅供参考,不计入总词数。短文首句:Howtimeflies!Now(you/yourchildren)arestudentsofGrade9.,答案写作提示1.本文使用一般现在时态。2.覆盖答题要点。3.行为连贯,连接词使用恰当,指代清晰。参考范文Possibleversion1:Howtimeflies!NowyouarestudentsofGrade9.HereIdliketotellyousomethingthatwillmakeyourschoollifemorefortableandwonderful.Firstofall,itisimportantforyoutokeephealthy,sodontforgettoexerciseeveryday.Second,youdbetterjoinclubssothatyoucanlearnbetterandmakemorefriends.Third,youwillbeabletomakegreatprogressifyoudevelopyourstudyskills.Besides,therearemanywaysforyoutoloweryourstress,suchaslisteningtomusic,hangingoutwithfriends,andwatchingmovies.Ihopeyouwillenjoyyourschoollifeandachieveyourdreams.,Possibleversion2:Howtimeflies!NowyourchildrenarestudentsofGrade9.HereIdliketotellyousomethingthatwillmaketheirschoollifemorewonderful.Firstofall,itisimportanttoencourageyourchildrenmoresothattheywillbemoreconfident.Second,pleasedonotpareyourchildrenwithothers,becauseifyoupushthemtoohard,theywillfeelstressedout.Third,thechildrenshouldbeallowedtomaketheirowndecisions.Thereisnoneedtogeteverythingreadyforthem.Besides,beingagoodlistenerwillhelpyougetalongwellwithyourchildren.Ihopeyourchildrensdreamswilletruewithyourhelp.深度解析题目大胆创新,突出两个关键词:“自主选择”、“自由发挥”,使不同层次的学生都能表达自己的真实感受,让不同层次的学生都有发挥的空间。,精美语句1.精美词汇forgettodosth.忘记做某事makegreatprogress取得巨大的进步pare.with.把和做比较makeonesowndecision做好自己的决定2.出彩结构Besides,therearemanywaysforyoutoloweryourstress,suchaslisteningtomusic,hangingoutwithfriends,andwatchingmovies.而且,有很多减轻你压力的方式,比如听音乐、和朋友闲逛、看电影。,注意:(1)短文可结合图片信息或自身经历,作适当发挥;(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;(3)词数:80100,短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。短文首句:Lastweek,wehadadiscussionaboutthetopic“Tochangeornot”.,Writing8(2017湖州)英语课上,老师组织大家就以下两幅图进行“Tochangeornot”的话题讨论,请用英语阐述你对此话题的看法。,答案写作提示1.本文要恰当运用时态,对一般事实的论述用一般现在时,而对自己的经历要用一般过去时。2.书写规范整洁。3.用词恰当,句型变化多样。参考范文Lastweek,wehadadiscussionaboutthetopic“Tochangeornot”.Ithinkdifferentpeoplehavedifferentchoicestodealwithproblems.Forexample,whenmeetingwiththeweightproblem,somepeopledecidetotakeexercisetoloseweightwhileothersthinktheycantdoanythingaboutit.WhenIwasinGrade7,IhaddifficultywithmyspokenEnglish.Insteadofgivingup,Ichosetochange.Itriedmybesttolistentotapesandpracticespeakingeveryday.Nowmypronunciationhasbeenimprovedalot.Inaword,facingproblems,weshouldtakeactionstochange.Surelyitwillmakeagreatdiffer-,ence.深度解析本文是一篇夹叙夹议的文章。语言运用中要注意时态的结构和形式,特别要避免be动词与实义动词的混淆。在写作前,请务必将答题要点归纳为提纲,这样就不会遗漏要点了。精美语句1.精美词汇dealwith处理loseweight减重tryonesbesttodosth.尽某人最大的努力去做某事2.出彩结构WhenIwasinGrade7,IhaddifficultywithmyspokenEnglish.当我在七年级的时候,我的口语有很大困难。,Writing9(2016杭州)请查看你校英语节安排表(Schedule),给外教老师Dave写一封80词左右的电子邮件,告知他调整的内容并给出你认为恰当的理由。,答案写作要点1.英语节调整的内容有两个:EnglishTalkShow的时间;EnglishCorner的地点。2.恰当的理由。3.对调整表示道歉,并邀请外教参加。参考范文HiDave,ImsorrytoinformyouthattherearetwochangestothescheduleforEnglishDay.First,therewillbeaveryimportantmeetingafterlunchinourschool,soEnglishTalkShowwillbeputoffby30minutes.Thatis,itstartsat13:00andendsat14:30.Second,theplaceofEnglishCornerwillbechangedfromPlaygroundtoSchoolHallbecausetheweatherreportsaysitsgoingtorainthatafternoon.Pleaseeandjoinusontime.LiPing,精彩语句Imsorrytoinformyouthat.我很遗憾地通知您First第一Second第二Writing10(2016宁波)“传递爱心,服务他人”是文明社会所倡导的理念。狮子会(theLions)就是一个以此为宗旨的国际性服务团队。杨敏是狮子会的一名成员,多年来她一直乐于助人。请根据提示用英语写一篇短文,向校刊的EnglishWorld栏目投稿,简要介绍杨敏的事迹,然后谈谈你的观点和打算。,要求:1.短文内容必须包含表格所提供的要点,可适当发挥;2.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名;3.词数:80100(短文开头已给出,仅供选择使用,不计入总词数)。短文开头:Fromtimetotime,wearemovedbythepeopleandthingsaroundus.YangMinisoneofthepersonsIadmiremost.,答案写作要点1.本文要记叙和议论相结合,时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。2.第一段介绍YangMin助人为乐的事情。观点包括:(1)她是狮子会的成员。(2)她帮助他人多年。(3)经常去养老院帮忙。(4)在雨天借给他人雨伞和雨衣。3.第二段表明自己的观点,并表明自己的计划。4.语句通顺,行文流畅。参考范文Fromtimetotime,wearemovedbythepeopleandthingsaroundus.YangMinisoneoftheper-sonsIadmiremost.AsamemberoftheLions,shehasbeenhelpingothersformanyyears.Shegoestotheoldpeopleshometwiceamonthtocuthair,washclothesanddosomecleaningforthem.Besides,onrainydayssheofferspeopleumbrellasorraincoatsforfree.Imdeeplymovedbyherstory.Imgoingtostartwithsmallthingsaroundme.Iplantogivebooksandclothestochildreninpoorvillages.Whatsmore,Illaskmyparentsandmorefriends,tojoinme.Smallactioncanmakeabigdifference.Letshelpthosewhoneedhelp!精彩语句Asamemberof.作为的一员bedeeplymoved被深深感动makeadifference产生不同,有影响,Writing11(2016温州)假如你是Lingling,学校根据下表中新西兰来温暑期交流师生的意愿,决定安排他们去100公里外的许村游玩一天,但自行车来回路程需要89小时,权衡利弊,需调整这项内容,请你发邮件给对方带队老师Mr.Black做好说明、沟通工作。,要求:(1)文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;(2)文本长度:110词左右。开头和结尾已给出(不计入总词数。)DearMr.Black,ImLingling.Myschoolaskedustomaketheone-daytourplanforyouandwetriedtomakeitbesttoyourpreferences,butImafraidwellhavetomakesomechanges.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Bestwishes.Lingling,答案写作提示1.首先要对活动、地点、用时和交通等情况进行描述。2.其次表明自己对安排进行了哪些调整以及调整的理由,符合逻辑。3.语句通顺,行文流畅。参考范文DearMr.Black,ImLingling.Myschoolaskedustomaketheone-daytourplanforyouandwetriedtomakeitbesttoyourpreferences,butImafraidwellhavetomakesomechanges.WellvisitamountainvillagecalledXucun,whichisveryfamousforitsoldhouses,fantasticsightsanddeliciousfood.Imsureyouwilllikeit.However,itwilltakeusabout8to9hourstogoandebackbybike.Evenifwesetoutat7:00a.m.,wellgetthereatabout11:30.Goingaroundthebeautiful,culturalplaces,includingsomeoldhousesallwithahistoryofover500years,willtakeusatleast2to3hours.Havinglunch(lo-,calfoodanddrinks)takesanotherhour.Whatsmore,itsveryhothereinsummer.Sowethinktakingabustherewillbeamuchbetterchoice.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Bestwishes.Lingling写作分析本文具有读写结合的特点,试题呈现了“一日游”的安排和需要调整的内容,难点在于考生首先要读懂表格,明确需要调整的内容,并对调整写出符合逻辑的理由。精彩语句Imsureyouwilllikeit.我确信你会喜欢的。befamousfor因而著名whatsmore而且,Writing12(2016绍兴)针对大部分高中要求学生住校的现状,英语课上同学们就“Wouldyouliketoliveinschool?”这一话题展开调查。请你根据下表内容,用英语写一篇短文,汇报调查结果,表达你的意愿并阐述理由。,注意:1.短文必须包括表中所有内容,可适当增加细节;2.你的理由至少两条;3.词数:80100;4.短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。参考词汇:方便的convenient短文首句:Wouldyouliketoliveinschool?Wehadasurveyaboutitandherestheresult.,答案写作提示1.汇报调查结果:大部分同学愿意,原因:方便与同学交流;学会照顾自己;一些学生不愿意,原因:在家能休息得更好;与家人相处时间更长。2.表达你的意愿并阐述自己的理由。参考范文Wouldyouliketoliveinschool?Wehadasurveyaboutitandherestheresult.Moststudentsprefertoliveinschoolbecausetheyfinditconvenienttomunicatewiththeirclassmates.Also,theycanlearnhowtolookafterthemselvesinthisway.However,somestudentsthinklivingathomeisabetterchoice.Themainreasonisthattheycanrelaxbetterathome.Besides,theycanspendmoretimewiththeirfamilymembersandgetonbet-terwiththem.Asforme,Idliketoliveinschool.ThatsbecauseIcanspendmoretimeonstudy.Whatsmore,itsawonderfulexperiencetolivewithotherclassmates.,精彩语句preferto更喜欢besides而且Asforme.对于我来说,Writing13(2015杭州)根据下表用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。内容须包括:对下表中关于这两个城市(CityA和CityB)的全部信息进行比较,分析利弊,确定其中一个城市作为你的暑假旅游目的地。,Inmyopinion,isthebetterplacetospendmysummerholiday.,答案写作要点1.本文属于说明性的文章,主体时态为一般现在时。2.内容要点:确定暑假旅游的目的地;比较两个城市的信息,分析利弊。3.参考词汇:flying,temperature,hotel,thingstodo,food参考范文Inmyopinion,CityAisthebetterplacetospendmysummerholiday.Althoughthetemperaturethereishigher,thehotelislessfortable,andeventhefoodisnotasdeliciousasthatinCityB,IstillchooseCityA.ThemostimportantreasonisthatIcanhavealotofthingstodoinCityA.Icanenjoymorebeautifulsceneryanddomoreactivities.Besides,ittakesusonlytwohourstoflythere,whichsavesusalotoftime.Ihopetheholidaywillbeanunforgettableexperience.Inmyopinion,CityBisthebetterplacetospendmysummerholiday.Althoughittakesmetwomorehourstoflythereonanairplane,andIdonthavemanythingstodo,IstillchooseCityB.ThemostimportantreasonisthatCityBhasbetterweather,nottoohotortoocold.Besides,thehotel,thereismorefortableandthefoodismoredeliciousthanthatinCityA.Allthesemakemyholidaymorerelaxing.Ihopetheingsummerholidaywillbeanunforgettableexperience.深度解析审读所给信息,弄清楚所要表达的内容要点,然后对所给的信息进行梳理,可根据内容要点适当调整写作顺序,使文章行文连贯。精彩语句Themostimportantreasonisthat.最重要的原因是Ittakessb.sometimetodosth.花费某人多少时间做某事。,Writing14(2015温州)美中文化交流中心(ACCEC)暑期将组织学生来华学习、交流,现正在中国招募志愿者,帮助他们学习中文。假如你是扬帆中学的学生李平,请按要求给该项目负责人Mr.Miller写一封申请信。内容包括:(1)申请担任志愿者;(2)说明自己乐于助人、擅长中文;(3)谈谈学好中文的方法;(4)参考词汇:volunteer,begoodat,improve,culture注意:(1)申请信需要涵盖以上所有要点,可适当发挥;(2)文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;(3)词数:110词左右。开头和结尾已给出(不计入总词数)。,DearMr.Miller,ImLiPingfromYangfanMiddleSchool.Thankyouforyourconsideration.Yourstruly,LiPing,答案写作要点1.本文属于应用文,主体时态为一般现在时。2.内容要点:申请担任志愿者;说明自己乐于助人、擅长中文;谈谈学好中文的方法。参考范文DearMr.Miller,ImLiPingfromYangfanMiddleSchool.IamveryinterestedinyourprojectandwanttobethevolunteertohelpthestudentslearnChinese.Iamwarm-heartedandalwaysreadytohelpothers.IamgoodatChinese.Lastyear,IwonthefirstprizefortheChineseSpeechCompetitioninmycity.IhavemanygoodwaystolearnChinesewell.Forexample,wecanlistentotheradioandreadaloudeverymorning.AlsolearningsomeChineseclassicalsongshelpsimprovethelanguagequickly.Besides,talkingwithlocalpeopleisafunand,effectivewaytolearnChineseanditsculture.IfIcangetthejob,IbelieveIcanbeagreathelper.Thankyouforyourconsideration.Yourstruly,LiPing写作分析本题要求写一封申请信,开头和结尾已经给出,学生不必考虑。重点是根据要求把三个要点的内容表达出来。精彩语句warm-hearted热心的forexample例如,Writing15(2015绍兴)你校英语社团正在开展主题为“Whatshouldagoodteacherbelike?”的讨论,为此你采访了一些学生和家长。请你根据下表内容,用英语写一篇短文进行交流,并阐述你的观点。,注意:1.短文必须包括表中所有内容,可适当增加细节;2.你的观点至少两条;3.词数:80100;4.短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。短文首句:Studentsandparentshavedifferentopinionsaboutwhatagoodteachershouldbelike.Whatshouldagoodteacherbelike?,答案写作要点1.可以采用三段式作文。2.第一段写学生的主要观点:(1)与学生相处融洽;(2)课堂生动有趣。3.第二段写家长的主要观点:(1)学识广博;(2)严格要求学生。4.你的观点(至少两条)。参考范文Whatshouldagoodteacherbelike?Studentsandparentshavedifferentopinionsaboutwhatagoodteachershouldbelike.Asforstudents,theythinkgoodteachersshouldgetalongwellwiththeirstudents.Andtheyare,supposedtomaketheirclasseslivelyandinteresting.However,parentsthinkdifferentlyfromstudents.Forthem,goodteachersshouldfirsthaveplentyofknowledge.Atthesametime,theyareexpectedtobestrictwiththeirstudents.Inmyopinion,themostimportantthingforagoodteacheristolovestudents.Theyshouldtrytoencouragestudentswhentheyhaveproblemswiththeirstudies.Whatsmore,theyshouldhelptheirstudentslearnhowtolearn.精彩语句thinkdifferently考虑不同atthesametime同时bestrictwithsb.对某人要求严格,51%practicespokenEnglish25%watchEnglishmovies18%readmoreclassics6%learnforeignculture,Writing16(2015宁波)最近,学校就空中俱乐部的英语学习内容设置做了意向调查(结果见下面图表)。请你帮俱乐部用英语写一篇报告,并谈谈你自己的想法或建议。,注意:(1)文中应包含图表所提供的要点,可适当发挥;(2)想法和建议至少两条;文中不能出现真实姓名和校名;(3)词数:80100(短文开头不计入总词数,考生可以选择使用)。RecentlywevemadeasurveyofschoolskyEnglishclub.,答案写作要点1.本文主体时态为一般现在时。2.内容要点:介绍调查内容;陈述你的想法或建议,至少两条。3.词数:80100。参考词汇:practicespokenEnglish,watchEnglishmovies,readmoreclassics,learnforeignculture参考范文RecentlywevemadeasurveyofschoolskyEnglishclub.Herearetheresults.Wefindthatfifty-onepercentofthestudentswanttopracticetheirspokenEnglishbyusingInternet.Twenty-fivepercentlikewatchingEnglishmovies,whichcanmaketheirholidaylifebetter.EighteenpercentwouldliketoreadmoreEnglishclassicsbecausetheyareinterestedinthem.Sixpercenthopethattheycanlearnmoreforeignculture,suchasgoodmannersandwesternfestivals.,AsfarasIknow,itsveryhelpfultoimproveEnglishbylearningEnglishsongs.Maybewecanin-viteforeignerstointroducegoodwaystolearnsongs.ImsureallofuswillhavefunintheskyEnglishclub.精彩语句suchas例如beinterestedin对感兴趣AsfarasIknow.据我所知,Writing17(2014杭州)假设你是李平,最近你学习上遇到困惑。请用英语给你的英国朋友Nancy写一封电子邮件,讲述你的问题并寻求她的帮助。注意:1.邮件必须包括下面三幅画所描述的内容;2.词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出(不计词数)。参考词汇:考试不及格failtheexam熬夜stayuplate,Love,LiPingHiNancy,Howareyou?Hopeyourewell.Imreallylookingforwardtoreceivingyourreplysoon.,答案写作要点本篇是看图作文。要求写一封电子邮件。首先考生要对三幅图中的三个问题进行描述,然后寻求对方的帮助。从第一幅图中可知,图片中的妈妈看到李