高中英语写作常见错误句子类型.ppt

写作对策,考核目标,1.能运用所学的语言知识写出通顺正确的句子,2。能根据题意连贯、贴切地进行书面表达,篇章写作要求：,统一性(unity)：围绕主题,连贯性(coherence)：逻辑性,过渡词,一致性(consistency)：时态，人称,英语作文要求：,内容：观点明确，内容充实，理由充分.10,语言：表达正确，语言流畅,用词恰当，10句式多样化.,组织结构：结构正确，上下文连贯一致5,写作步骤：,1。写前准备：看清题意，理清思路（写什么）,2。写作过程：提纲（outline）,动笔（writing）,检查（check）,正确连接分句1.Thebookwasinteresting,Ireaditrapidly.Thebookwasinteresting,andIreaditrapidly.2.Thegirlscleanedthedesksandchairs,theboysmoppedthefloor.Thegirlscleanedthedesksandchairs,andtheboysmoppedthefloor.,避免误置修饰语3.AttheageofsixmyfatherbegantoteachmeEnglish.MyfatherbegantoteachmeEnglishwhenIwassix.,注意逻辑主语5.Tobewell-informed,readingnewspaperisagoodhabit.Tobewell-informed,weshouldreadnewspapereveryday.6.Comingoutoftheclassroom,myheartwasbeatingveryfast.Comingoutoftheclassroom,Ifeltmyheartbeatingveryfast.,避免指代不清7.Sheaskedhersisterwhyshewasntinvitedtotheparty.Sheaskedwhyhersisterwasntinvitedtotheparty.Sheaskedhersister,“WhywasntIinvitedtotheparty?”,避免人称代词混淆8.Wehadbeenontheplaneforeighteenhours,andyougotprettytiredofsittingthatlong.Wehadbeenontheplaneforeighteenhours,andwegotprettytiredofsittingthatlong.,避免重复9.Inmyopinion,Ithinkweshouldaskthemforadvice.Inmyopinion,weshouldaskthemforadvice.Ithinkweshouldaskthemforadvice.,尽量避免汉语干扰10.Thebooksinourlibraryaregettingmoreandmore.Therearemoreandmorebooksinourlibrary.Thenumberofbooksinourlibraryisgettingbiggerandbigger.,12.Thereisamanwantstoseeyoudownstairs.Ayoungmanwantstoseeyoudownstairs.Thereisamanwhowantstoseeyoudownstairs.,14.Theywillcometovisityouwhenyouareconvenient.Theywillcometovisityouwhenitisconvenienttoyou.Theywillcometovisityouatyourconvenience.,注意时态一致15.Iwentshoppingyesterday.Thereweremanypeopleinthesupermarket.Peoplearecarryingbasketsortakingcarts.IstruggledinthecrowdspickingupthethingsIneed.WhenIfinishedmyshoppingIamsotired.,注意时态一致Iwentshoppingyesterday.Thereweremanypeopleinthesupermarket.Peoplewerecarryingbasketsortakingcart