英语书面表达之漫画写作.ppt

英语书面表达之漫画写作,2010年江苏高考作文新增图画型作文，这种题型更能考查学生的分析问题的能力，因此深受命题者的青睐。考生应注意认真审题，一旦审题有所偏颇，不容易得到高分。此类作文首先要描述图画，然后介绍图画背后所反映的问题，最后联系实际发表自己的观点。,漫画作文（议论类）攻略：读图，解意，谋篇,1.读图1）.漫画的题目眼睛2）.漫画的画面细节3）.漫画的文字观点4）.漫画的夸张寓意,2.解意1）.辨明褒贬，找准角度）.联系生活，明晰主旨注意:文字说明部分往往含有重要信息(clues)，切记要认真阅读！,3.谋篇（3parts:）1)describethepicture2)interpretitsmeaning3)giveyouropinionsaboutthephenomenon,Someusefullsentencestructures:Part1DescribethepictureThepictureistalkingabout/showsThepictureshowsacommonphenomenon.Thepicturedescribesaninterestingphenomenon.Inthepicture,thereare/is(are)doingThepictureaboveisaboutLetslookatthepictureabove/first.,Part2InterpretthepictureItseemsveryridiculousthatHowever,thiskindofstoryisperformedeverywhere.ThepictureshowsthatItistheexactreflectionofThepictureindicatethatweNowadays,itisacommonphenomenonthatThisisasatirical(讽刺的)cartoonwhichdescribesvividlyakindofcommonphenomenonamong,Part3GiveyouropinionsIthink/believethatAsfarasImconcerned,Inmyopinion,Frommypointofview,shouldItisbetter/advisabletoIconsideritnecessary,PartCPolishupyourarticle!1.Touselinkingwordsifnecessary表示平行、对等或选择关系and,aswellas,togetherwith,notonlybutalso.表示转折关系but,however,inspiteof,although,otherwise,while表示对比关系onthecontrary,insteadof,ononehandontheotherhand.表示因果关系so,therefore,asaresult(of),because,owingto,dueto,thanksto.表示时间顺序关系first,second,then,next,finally,foronething.foranother,intheend,表示递进、强调关系besides,whatsmore,inaddition,worsestill,aboveall表示解释、说明关系suchas,forexample,forinstance,inotherwords,andsoon表示结论inshort,inbrief,inaword,ingeneral,onthewhole,inconclusion,2.Tousecomplicatedstructuresifpossible,PartD注意1.保证三要素体裁、时态、人称正确体裁：议论文时态：一般现在时人称：第三人称.避免漫画类作文的一些常见失误1)误解图意大忌！2)企图幽默可笑！3)不明寓意白写！4)中心不明混乱！.控制字数（没话说PK太啰唆）.结尾要精辟！,Conclusion:一篇好的英语漫画作文:仔细审题,准确立义,规范行文,整洁书写,注意：1）仔细品味图中文字的幽默、无奈，要适当发挥想象，不要做简单描述。2）词数150左右。,Tomostoftheparents,itisnoeasyjobtokeeptheirchildrenawayfromthepersonalcomputer.NearlyallparentsarethinkingofthemosteffectivewaystomaketheInternetsaferfortheirchildren.Theirsolutionsareasfollows.SomeofthemthinkadvancedhardwarecanbeequippedintocomputersfornetworksecuritywhilesomeparentsprefersecuritysoftwareavailableontheInternetIfthesedontwork,theywillcoverthescreenwithunderweartoprotecttheirchildrenfromharmfulinformation.,Nowadaysitiswellknownthatteenagernetworksecurityhasbecomesoseriousthatthewholesocietyfocusesonit.Inmyopinion，muchattentionshouldbepaidtothisissue.Asparents,theyaresupposedtocommunicatewiththeirchildrentohelpthemmakegooduseoftheInternetwiththeirstudy.,Additionally,itisourgovernmentsresponsibilitiestotakeactionstocreateagreenerInternetenvironment.Asforourselves,weshouldbuildupstrongself-awareness.Itisimportantforustoconcentrateontheusefulinformationratherthancomputergamesandsoon.,IfonlyIcouldkeeparealbird!,下图描绘的是现在人类面临的窘境。请你根据对下面这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文，描述这种现象，说明其产生的原因及后果，并发表你的看法。,Nowadays,humanbeingsarefacedwithanembarrassingsituation.Inthecartoon,wecanseeamantalkingtoapaperbirdkeptinhiscageandbesidehimisavastdesertdottedwithendlesstreeroots.Obviously,birdshavelosttheirhomesaspeoplehavecutdownallthetrees.Asaresult,humanshavelosttheiranimalfriends.Thescenemayseemridiculousandunbelievabletous,butitmaybecomearealityinthefutureifwegoondevelopingeconomyregardlessofthe,damagecausedtotheenvironment.Nowinsomeplaces,treeshavebeencutdownwithoutlimits.Somescientistssaythattherewillbenovastforestsin20or30yearsandmanyspecieswilldieout.Itisreallyaterriblething.Therefore,weshouldrealizetheimportanceofenvironmentalprotectionandliveinharmonywithouranimalfriends.,随着人民生活水平的提高，人们愈发关注食品质量安全。“三鹿”奶粉事件引起人们广泛关注：商家的社会责任感与企业道德，人们健康的相关法律保证。根据下图写一篇150词左右的短文。可以切合题意有所发挥。短文首句已给出，不记入总词数。,Aswecanseefromthecartoon,manufacturers,milkstations,milkcowsandevengrassaretryinginvaintomakeexcusesforthemisconduct.Aftercarefulconsideration,wecometorealizethatthedrawerwishestocallourattentiontothelackofsocialresponsibilityandbusinessethics.Withthechangeofpeoplesideology,peopletakeitforgrantedthatwemakeafortune.Drivenbythepursuitofprofit,somemanufacturersgotoextremestomakemoneybyproviding,thecustomerswithfakeorinferiorproducts.Acaseinpointis“Sanlumilkpowder”,whichisconfirmedtocontainapoisonouschemical.Asaresult,numerousinnocentinfantsbecomethevictimsofthemilkfood.Inthelongrun,suchillegalactsnotonlydamagethedairyindustry,butthecredibilityofthesocialmechanism.Tomymind,itishightimewetookeffectivemeasurestopreventsuchcrimefromhappeningagain.Itisadvisabletopassrelatedlawstopunish,whoeverproducespoisonousfood.Onlyinthiswaycanweestablishaharmonioussocietywheremanufacturestakeupmoresocialresponsibilityandcredibilityandpeopleenjoyhealthyfood.,2010年1月份，上海同济、华师大、华东理工、上外和东华等6所高校，在自主招生的理科考试中无一例外地选择了放弃考语文。根据这一现象结合下图谈谈你的看法。提示：1)英语是国际交流的工具2）世界上学汉语的的人越来越多3）母语的重要,Recently,sixuniversitiesinShanghaimadeEnglishlanguagecompulsoryintheirjointexams,andleftoutChinese.ThereisnodoubtthattheEnglishlanguageisaveryimportantmediumofeducation.Butthatisnoreasonwhyweshouldforgettheimportanceofourmothertongueandtraditionsandculture.ItistheChineselanguagethatmakesChinaanation.Oncewehaveathoughtthatourmothertongueisnotimportant,our,nationwillbeindanger.WiththedevelopmentofChina,Chinesehasbecomeaworldwidelanguage.ManypeopleintheworldstarttolearnChinese.BeingtheChinese,weshouldfeelproudofourmothertongue.Chineseisoneoftheoldestlanguagesintheworld.Youshouldloveyourmotherlanguageifyouwanttoloveyournation.,Therefore,weshouldviewourmothertongueasanecessity.Onlythroughourownlanguagecanourculturefindgloryittrulydeserves.,下图反映的是网络时代所出现的一种问题，有些孩子沉溺于网上交流而忽视了与父母的沟通。请你根据对该漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文。该文应包含以下要点：,1该漫画告诉了我们什么；2你对此现象的看法3我们该如何主动和父母亲沟通。漫画caricature,Moderntechnologyhasmanyadvantages.WhileweenjoythefunandconvenienceoftheInternet,wealsoexperiencesomenewproblems.Thiscaricaturedescribesoneofthem.Itshowsthattheteenageboyisenjoyingchattingonlinesomuchthatherefusestotalktohisparent.Ithinkitmightbecommon,butitistotallyunacceptable.Nothingcanreplaceface-to-facecommunicationnomatterhoweasyorinterestingitisforustochatwithpeoplefromacrosstheworldontheInternet.,InmostChinesefamilies,thereisonlyonechild.Obviously,wearethecentreofourparentsattention.Manyparentsarewillingtodoanythingtomakesurethatweliveagoodlife.Itisunderstandablethattheywanttoknowwhatshappeningtous,whatkindoffriendswemakeandhowwearegettingonwithourstudies.,Ithinkweshouldletthemknowuswell.Forexample,wecantellthemwhatsgoingoninschoolwhenwehavedinnerorturntothemforadvicewhenwehaveproblems.Inthatway,Imsuretherelationshipbetweenusandourparentswillbecomebetterandbetter.,请根据下列表格中所提供的材料，结合你的生活经历，展开想象，以学生的身份用英语写一篇短文。,Weallhavesomekeysinlife,somevisibleandothersinvisible.Visiblekeysplayanimportantpartinourlife,makingourlifeconvenientandcomfortable.Ifwelosethembyaccident,wetendtogetintoamess.,Thesameistrueofinvisiblekeysinthecourseofourstudyandgrowth.Teachersguidanceisofgreatbenefittoourgainingknowledge.Parentswordsofcomfortandencouragementhelpusbuildupconfidence.Withthehelpofourfriends,werelikelytoovercomedifficultyandsucceed.Wefeelgreatlyhonoredtohaveaccesstotheseinvisiblekeys,whicharepricelessgiftsinourdailylife.,Inaword,akeyistoamanwhatwateristofish.Whetherthekeysarevisibleorinvisible,theyarewellworthtreasuring.Onlybymakingfulluseofthemcanweopenthedoorofsuccessandmakegreatcontributionstooursociety.,左图描绘的是某家心理诊疗所医生正向病人介绍治病良方的漫画。请你根据对这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文，并发表你的看法。,“Injustsixhoursyouwillbecuredofyourfearofsnake