读写任务议论文写作.ppt

ArgumentativeEssay(议论文)?,Writing,Howtowritea,Welcome,Summary:,Asummaryisashortpassagegivingthemainpointsofanoriginalarticle.,一、进行概括,Whatsthemostimportantthinginanargumentativeessay?,Theviewoftheauthor.,Howtogetthemainideasofanargumentativeessay?,+,首段/尾段,topicsentencesofeachparagraph,论点,论据,Stepsforwritingasummary(步骤),Read,Find,Rewrite,Join,Readthepassageforoverallcontent(通读全文领略大意).,Rereadcarefully,findoutthetopicsentences.,Writeinourownwords.,Inourfinaldraft,inserttransitionalwordsandphraseswherenecessary.(用连词连接各部分),概括文章要点，要语言要精炼，概括要全面，行文连贯，表达准确。议论文则用自己的话表达论点、论据和结论。概括时常用的开头语有：1.Thisarticlediscusses/analyzes/stronglyemphasizessuchas(观点:什么的什么+例证)2.Thisarticlenotonlydescribesbutalsosuggests3.Thisarticleshows/tellsusthat4.Theauthorholdstheideathat,givingitanexampleofsb.who(观点+例证),Task1:WriteasummaryofPassage1,Letshaveatry!,ReadPassage1ifyouhaveafamilyandstillhavetoomuchinterestinwatchingTV,youhavetostopdoingso,sothatyoucanhelpwithhouseworkorspendsometimetakingcareofyourlovelychild.,Para.1.Para.2.Para3.,IsitOKforustocombinethesetopicsentencestoformthesummaryofthepassage?,No.Weshouldwriteinourownwords.,Everyonehashisowninterest.,youhavetogiveupyourinterestforonethingoranother.,Task2：Step1FindoutthetopicsentencesofPassage1,Todevelopyourinterestwillhelpyoumakewayintheworld.,Step2:Rewritethesentenceinyourownwords.(用同义词、同源词或转换句式),Para.1.everyonehashisowninterest.,everyonehasaninterestofhisown,succeed替换makeway,Para3.youhavetogiveupyourinterestforonethingoranother.,forsomereason替换foronethingoranother”,把主动语态youhavetogiveupyourinterest改为被动语态。,Para2.Todevelopyourinterestwillhelpyoumakewayintheworld.,Theauthorpointsoutthateveryonehasaninterestofhisownanddevelopinganinterestproperlywillhelpyousucceed.Butonsomeoccasions,yourinteresthastobegivenupforsomereason.(35words),APossibleVersion:,Step3:Addsomeconjunctionalwords(衔接词),二、自然过渡,写完概括后，用句恰当的过渡语引出自己的观点（反对或赞成）。过渡语起承上启下的作用，使文章显得自然、连贯。常用的过渡句式有：1.Idoagreewiththeauthor2.Insomeway,Iagreewith,but3.Thispointsoundsright,but4.However,Ithink5.Idefinitelybelieve6.Inmyopinion,7.Personally,Ifeelthat8.AsfarasImconcerned,9.Whilesomeonemightthinkitiswrong/right,Ibelievethat,三、列举例证,提出自己的观点后就要用具体的事例来论证自己的观点。常用的句式有：1.First,Second,Last2.Ontheonehand,ontheotherhand,3.Foronethingandforanother4.Furthermore/Besides/Inaddition,5.Somethink,whileothersmay.,四、总结点题,总结句约30词，.进一步总结作者的观点，提出具体做法或号召，升华文章的主题。可以用套语配名言来点题，并注意文章前后呼应。常用的句式有：1.Inconclusion,2.Inshort,3.Inaword,4.Ingeneral,5.Allinall,6.Tosumup,阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。,Thegenerationgapbetweenstudentsandtheirteachersisbecomingmoresignificantwithonly3.3percentoutofasurveygroupof1,000studentsfrom30keymiddleschoolsinthecitysayingtheywouldbewillingtotelltheirteachersoftheirinnerthoughts.Intodayseducationalenvironment,teachersarepositionedtobetheauthorityfigureforlearninginsteadofalsobecomingagoodfriendinthelivesofstudents.Asonlystudentswithgoodmarksinexamsareconsideredthe“applesintheeyes”oftheteachers,moststudentsthinktheirteacherstobepartial(偏心).,“Ifeelsadtohearsuchremarks,”saidYuYi,awell-knownspecial-classteacher.Sherecalledthatinthepast,teachersandstudentswouldplaybasketballtogetherorcommentonnovelswhilesittingonthegrassduringabreak.Buttoday,studyandgoodmarksaretheonlytopicsofconversationbetweenstudentsandteachers.“Schoolsarenotonlytheplacewhereknowledgeisimparted(传授)butalsowherestudentsaretaughthowtobeanuprightperson,”Yusaid.“Thesuccessofapersonisnotmerelydeterminedbyintelligencebutalsobyemotionalstate.”,YangXiong,directoroftheJuvenileResearchInstitute,saidtheeducationalsystemwhichfocusesonexaminationsshouldbeheldtobesubstantiallyresponsible.,写作内容1.以约30个词概括学生不愿告诉老师内心想法的原因；2.然后以约120个词就“现代师生关系”这个主题发表你的看法，并包括如下要点：(1)你是否愿意告诉老师你内心的想法？为什么？(2)你希望你与你的老师之间的关系是怎样的？如何才能建立这种关系？写作要求(1)可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；(2)标题自定；(3)文中不能出现考生真实姓名和学校名称评分标准概括准确、语言规范、内容合适、篇章连贯。,阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。,Thegenerationgapbetweenstudentsandtheirteachersisbecomingmoresignificantwithonly3.3percentoutofasurveygroupof1,000studentsfrom30keymiddleschoolsinthecitysayingtheywouldbewillingtotelltheirteachersoftheirinnerthoughts.Intodayseducationalenvironment,teachersarepositionedtobetheauthorityfigureforlearninginsteadofalsobecomingagoodfriendinthelivesofstudents.Asonlystudentswithgoodmarksinexamsareconsideredthe“applesintheeyes”oftheteachers,moststudentsthinktheirteacherstobepartial(偏心).,“Ifeelsadtohearsuchremarks,”saidYuYi,awell-knownspecial-classteacher.Sherecalledthatinthepast,teachersandstudentswouldplaybasketballtogetherorcommentonnovelswhilesittingonthegrassduringabreak.Buttoday,studyandgoodmarksaretheonlytopicsofconversationbetweenstudentsandteachers.“Schoolsarenotonlytheplacewhereknowledgeisimparted(传授)butalsowherestudentsaretaughthowtobeanuprightperson,”Yusaid.“Thesuccessofapersonisnotmerelydeterminedbyintelligencebutalsobyemotionalstate.”,YangXiong,directoroftheJuvenileResearchInstitute,saidtheeducationalsystemwhichfocusesonexaminationsshouldbeheldtobesubstantiallyresponsible.,套用写作模板进行写作：,1.进行概括：Studentsarebecomingunwillingtotelltheirteachersoftheirinnerthoughtsbecausetheyarenotequalinpositionandteacherslaytoomuchemphasisontheacademicperformancesofthestudents.,2.自然过渡。回答“你是否愿意告诉老师你内心的想法”，给出观点（愿意或不愿意），直截了当，一语概之。如“我愿意告诉老师我的内心想法”。Whilesomestudentsmighthavedoubts,Iamwillingtosharemyinnerthoughtswithmyteachers.3.列举例证。回答“为什么”，给出一两个理由。Theyshowloveandconcernfortheirstudentsandtheyarealsogoodlisteners.Ialwaysfinditeasytoseeksupportandadvicefromthem,fromwhichIbenefitandlearnalot.,5.回答“你希望你与你的老师之间的关系是怎样的”，可以是“重要的，和谐的，朋友式的”等等。Inthiscase,anidealrelationshipbetweenteachersandstudentsisveryimportant.Inmyopinion,thisrelationshipshouldbeonefilledwithlove,careandunderstanding,inwhichteachersandstudentsshowrespectforeachotherandexchangeideasfreely.6.回答“如何才能建立这种关系”，即师生双方应该如何做。Tobuildarelationshipofthiskind,teachersshouldbecomefriendsofstudentswhilestudentsoughttoplacemoretrustintheirteachersandgivevoicetotheirfeelingsfrankly.,7.总结。如可以说“只有这样，我们才能拥有和谐的师生关系。”Onlyinthiswaycanweenjoyawarmrelationshipbetweenteachersandstudents.,Studentsarebecomingunwillingtotelltheirteachersoftheirinnerthoughtsbecausetheyarenotequalinpositionandteacherslaytoomuchemphasisontheacademicperformancesofthestudents.Whilesomestudentsmighthavedoubts,Iamwillingtosharemyinnerthoughtswithmyteachers.Theyshowloveandconcernfortheirstudentsandaregoodlisteners.Ialwaysfinditeasytoseeksupportandadvicefromthem,fromwhichIbenefitandlearnalot.,Inthiscase,anidealrelationshipbetweenteachersandstudentsisveryimportant.Inmyopinion,thisrelationshipshouldbeonefilledwithlove,careandunderstanding,inwhichteachersandstudentsshowrespectforeachotherandexchangeideasfreely.Tobuildarelationshipofthiskind,teachersshouldbecomefriendsofstudentswhilestudentsoughttoplacemoretrustintheirteachersandgivevoicetotheirfeelingsfrankly.Onlyinthiswaycanweenjoyawarmrelationshipbetweenteachersandstudents.,Deareditor,Lastweek,ourclasshadadiscussionaboutwhetherornotuniversitystudentsshouldbefinanciallyindependent.Ouropinionsaredivided.HereImwritingtotellyousomethingaboutthediscussion.55%ofthestudentsthinkthatuniversitystudentsdonthavetomakemoneyfinanciallyindependent,becauseifstudentswanttomakemoney,theywillspendalotoftimeontheirwork.,soitwillsurelyaffecttheirstudies.About30%ofthestudentsholdtheviewthatdoingpart-timejobswillhelponegainworkexperienceandlearnmoreaboutsociety,六、Homework阅读短文然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。,whichwillhelpthemalotintheirfuturejobapplication.Inaddition,whentheyfindtimeislimitedforthemtodopart-timejobs,theymaystopatanytime.Asforme,justlike15%ofthestudents,Ipartlyagreewiththeopinionsabove.Personally,asgrow-ups,weshouldnotdependonourparentsanymore.However,ifourparentscanaffordtopaythetuitionforus,weshouldputourstudyinthefirstplace;ifourparentscantaffordtopayourtuition,wemayfindapart-timejobtoearnsomemoneyforourselves.Whatsyouropinion?Thankyouforreadingmyletter.YoursZhangHai,写作内容1.以约30个词概括这篇短文的内容2.然后以“大学生是否需要经济独立”为话题，写一篇120词左右的短文。内容包括：（1）中国孩子过多地依赖家长；（2）在力所能及的情况下，大学生可以找一份兼职的工作，一方面减轻家长的经济压力，另一方面可以锻炼自己的能力；（3）无论怎样，学习仍是大学生的首要任务写作要求在作文中可以使用自己的亲身经历或虚构地故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。,套用写作模板进行写作：,1.进行概括：Thepassageabovemainlytellsusadiscussiononwhetherornotuniversitystudentsshouldbefinanciallyindependentaswellasdifferentopinionsamongthestudents.,2.自然过渡。说到中国孩子怎样过多地依赖家长。Asweallknow,weChinesechildrenarealldependentonourparents,includingmostuniversitystudents.3.列举例证，证明中国孩子怎样过多地依赖家长。Mysister,auniversitystudents,doesntknowhowtocookbecausehermotherprepareeverythingwellforher.,5.引出话题“在力所能及的情况下，大学生可以找一份兼职的工作”。Inmyopinion,universitystudentsshouldtrytofindapart-timejobifpossible.6.说明大学生找一份兼职的工作的好处:一方面减轻家长的经济压力，另一方面可以锻炼自己的能力。Bydoingso,theycannotonlyhelptheirparentstoreducethefinancialpressure,butalsocultivateallkindsofabilities.Besides,manycompaniespayspecialattentiontoworkingexperienceofthejobapplication.,7.总结。“无论怎样，学习仍是大学生的首要任务”。Ingeneral,althoughIthinkuniversitystudentsshouldtakepart-timejobstobefinanc