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ILovetheBeautyofChangjiangGorges “三峡情”英语演讲稿 评语 本文是作者所在学校举行“三峡情”英语演讲竞赛中获二等奖的一篇演讲稿文中描述和议论得体词汇也用得较为丰富只是某些句子结构过于复杂可能会给听众理解带来困难某些语言上的不足之处点评修改如下： (1)改为不定式表示目的较好 (2)这里应该用主动语态 Boysandgirls, TheThreeGorgesarea,ontheChangjiangRiver,stretchedfromFengjieofSichuanProvinceeasttoYichangofHubeiProvince,atotalof193km.TheQutangGorgeisfromBaidichengtoDaxiBrook,theWuGorgeisfromtheWuMountaintoBadong,andtheXilingGorge,fromZiguitoNanjinguanPass.ThevoyagethroughtheThreeGorgesisanunforgettableexperience.Theriverwindsitswaythroughcountlessvalleys,aroundsteeppeaks,overcrucialrapidsandwhirlpools,likeapicturesquecorridor(画廊),presentingchangingsceneryalltheway. Whetherinthepastoratpresent,athomeorabroad,touriststakeprideinpayingavisittothem,poetswritepoemsandsongsaboutthem,andartistspainttheminpictures.Libai,afamouspoetofTangDynasty,describedthesceneasfollows：Whilethemonkeysonbothbanksarestillgibberinginyourears,awayhastheboatflownpasttensofthousandsofhills.Hesaidsoshowingtoshow(1)howpowerfulandrapidthecurrentsareActuallyitsometimestakeshoursforaboattoroundaturninthecliffssosharpthatonecanseenoopeningfortherivercourse,andthatonehaslittlesunonhiswaythroughthegorges. Theoldgorgeshavetakenonanewlook.Navigation(航行)throughtheChangjiangGorgeshasbeenenormouslyimprovedsincetheliberation,1949.Youcanseedifferentkindsofships,suchassteamships,sailingboats,tugs,barges,lifeboatsandairships,sailingupanddownthegorges.Fromtimetotime,handsomemodernpassengerships,paintedwhiteorsomeothercolour,withwonderfulsuperstructure,fittedwithallsortsofuptodateequipmentlikesearchlights,radar,depthindicator,1400horsepowertwindieselengines,andradiotelephonesbetweenshipandshoreandbetweenships,canbeseen,carryingabout1500passengerssafelytodifferentpartsofthecountry.Passengerscanseelivetelevisionintheairconditionedcabinsduringtheirvoyage.Alongthebanks,greenwoods,yellowandsweetcitrus(柑橘)orchardsandfertilefieldshavetakentheplaceofsheer,barerockwalls.Fastdevelopingcities,suchasWanxian,Yichang,Shashi,aredottedondot(2)theoldlonelygorgebanks. Aboveall,aplantobuildadamatThreeGorgeswasproposedintheTenYearDevelopmentPlanofthe1992NationalPeoplesCongress.Theprojectwillserveseveralpurposes,includingfloodcontrol,powerproductionandnavigation.Itisnotonlyanextremelyhugeproject,butalsoagreatcausewhichbenefitsfuturegenerations. MothergavebirthtomeintheThreeGorgesarea17yearsago.IfeelproudofbeinganativeoftheThreeGorges.Imluckytobelivingnotonlyatsuchagoldentime,butalsointhegorgearea.Ivema