高考英语Writing.ppt

Howtowriteagoodcomposition(I),写不好英语作文的原因：1.缺乏词汇和句型等基本语言知识2.没有掌握英语书面表达的技能,组织结构Organization$5,内容Content$10,语言Language$10,Agoodcomposition=$25,评分标准,内容：观点明确，内容充实，理由充分语言：表达正确，语言流畅，用词恰当，句式多样化结构：结构正确，上下文连贯一致,Introduction,Mainbody,Conclusion,基本结构,基本结构,以朋友为主题写一篇作文。该文必须包含下列内容：,1.你生活中所看到或所经历的一段交友故事。2.该故事对你产生的影响及你的想法。,Head:IntroductionParagraph,Writeoneortwosentencestoexplainthebackgroundofthetopicandwritethetopicsentence.,GoodBeginning,Howtomakeagoodbeginning,警醒法：用令人感到惊奇的句子开头，激起读者的关注。引用法：摘录或引用名人名言、谚语等作为文章的开头。Aproverbgoesthat“Alifewithoutafriendisalifewithoutasun.”3.问题法：用提出一个观点或论据作为文章要阐明和论述的主题，以引起读者的关注。Whatmakesatruefriend?4.背景法：说明事件发生的时间、地点、情景和背景。5.数据法：利用已经被证实的数字来引起话题。,Acompletesentenceneithertoowidenortoonarrow.,Atopicsentenceshouldbe:,Friendsplayaveryimportantroleinourlife.Makingfriendsisnotalwayseasyandmaintainingfriendshipisfarmoredifficult.Everyoneneedsfriendsbutnotallofourfriendsareworthgettingonwellwith.HereIwanttosharemyexperiencewithyou.,4.Whatdoes“friendship”mean?Maybedifferentpeoplehavedifferentideas.Thereisnodefiniteanswertothisquestion.,Body:SupportingDetails,examples,factsdetailed,reasons,causeandeffect,data,examples,facts,Brainstorming,opinions,Frommypointofview,afriendshouldbethepersonwhocouldstrikeachordwithmeandalwayspointoutmymistakesinatenderway.Lilyisanauthenticfriendinaccordancewithmydifinition.WhenIwasinmyjuniorschoolperiod,Iwasabad-temperedgirl,whoalwayshadanargumentwithherparents.However,itisLilywhowaspatientenoughtopersuademeoutofcontinuingthiskindoflifethatalteredmylifestyle.Sowecansafelydrawtheconclusionthatagoodfriendcouldchangeyourlife-longpath.,Frommyexperience,Ilearnedthateverybodyshouldtreathisfriendswithemapthyandsincerity,thusreapinganharmorniousfamilyratherthanacoldplacesatruatedwithselfishconcepts.Byandlarge,itishightimethatwemadeeveryefforttocareforandloveourfriendswithawarmheart.,Tail:concludingparagraph,Agoodconcludingparagraphshouldbeshortbutstrong,repeatingyouropinioninafreshwayandgivingyourexpectationsandhopesforthefutureordetermination.,Tail:concludingparagraph,总结法：以一句有特点的句子（诸如虚拟语气）来收口，起到画龙点睛的作用。SincesheissuchawonderfulfriendthatIwishwewouldneverpart.引语法：用名人名言、格言、谚语或习语等结尾，意味深长，耐人寻味。Inaword,friendshipmultipliesjoysanddividesgrieves.3.反诘法：用疑问句形式结尾，具有很明显的强调作用，能引起读者的思考。Arentgoodfriendsbeneficialtoeachother?,多用高级词汇，长短句式互补举例,1.用较高级词汇替换划线词:1)AlltheforeignguestsweresurprisedatthebeautifulbuildingsinPudongnewarea.2)Thisquestionhascausedmanypeoplesattention.,amazed,maganificent,splendid,grand,Thisissuehascausedwidepublicconcern.,3)Usingbicyclegreatlyimprovespeopleshealthaswellaseasingtrafficjams.Usingbicyclecontributesgreatlytopeoplesphysicalfitnessaswellaseasingtrafficjams.4)WeshouldtryourbesttoovercomethedifficultiesWeshouldsparenoeffort/endeavour/strivetoconquerthedifficulties,5)Therewereabout200hundredpeopletakingpartinthewritingcontest.6)Moreandmorepeoplearebeginningtounderstandthateducationisnotcompletewithgraduation.,approximately,participatingin,/enteringfor,Anincreasing/growing/significent/greatnumberofpeople,realize,7)Therehasbeenmuchincreaseintheworldpopulationinthelastdecades.8)Imgoingtothatbigsupermarkettobuysomehouseholdappliances.9)Onmywayhome,Ioftenwalkintotheshoptogetsomebread,dramatic/drastic,grand,purchase,popinto,10)Thosewhobreaktrafficrulesshouldbepunished.Thosewhoviolatetrafficregulationsdeservedpunishing/punishment/tobepunished.11)Sincetheexaminationiscomingnear,Ihavetogiveupdoingsports.Sincetheexaminationisaroundthecorner/approaching/drawingnear，Iamcompelledtogiveupdoingsports.,12)Itisknownaroundtheworldthattreesarenecessarytous.Itisuniversallyacknowl