河南2015年中招写作专项备考训练.ppt

2015中考英语书面表达专题训练,洛阳市汝阳县蔡店一中九五班2015.5.12,学习目标,1.了解写作的篇章技巧，使文章具有整体性。2.掌握常用的连接词或句型，令作文更有灵气3.通过学和练提高写作的技巧和自信。,中考作文高分秘诀,1.谋篇布局写好篇章结构2.运用连接词赋予语言灵气,仔细检查，认真抄写,抓住主题，描写细节,开门见山,发表己见，画龙点睛,收集信息，列出提纲,结尾有力,谋篇布局写好篇章结构,Middle正文,Ending结尾,concludingsentence结论句-对全文的总结和概括。,supportingsentences支持句-用例子、实事或数据围绕主题开展叙述、讨论,topicsentence主题句-说出文中的要点、核心问题,Beginning开头,Goodbeginningishalfdone.,1.仔细审题，提炼和归纳主题句2.开头万能句型：1).playsanimportantpartinthe.2)Asweallknow,.becomesmoreandmore.3)Aseverybodyknows,.isoneofthemost.in.4)Manypeoplesaythat.ButIdontthinkso.5)Iwillneverforgetthe.,Makeatopicsentence.,1.Smoking2.TheSpringFestival3.LearningEnglish,Makeatopicsentence.,Aseverybodyknows,smokingisbadforourhealth.,1、Smoking,Asweallknow,smokingisabadhabit.,Manystudentssaysmokingisfun,butIdontthinkso.,Makeatopicsentence.,ManypeoplesaythatChristmasismorepopularthantheSpringFestival.ButIdontthinkso.,IwillneverforgettheSpringFestival.,TheSpringFestivalplaysanimportantpartinourlife.,2.TheSpringFestival,Makeatopicsentence.,Asweallknow,Englishbecomesmoreandmorepopular/important.,ManypeoplesayitsdifficulttolearnEnglish.ButIdontthinkso.,3.LearningEnglish,正文：语言简洁，层次分明,长句短句交叉使用最好。基础一般的同学要尽量使用简单句，文章算不上完美，但很实用。把握要点，层次清晰。注意句子与句子、段与段之间过渡自然，行文连贯，注意适当使用连词，例如：and,so,or,but,become等等。,正文：巧用连接词，赋予语言灵气,按事情发展的先后或时间顺序1）Firstly,Secondly,Thirdly2）first,then/next,afterthat/next,finally3)soon,suddenly,atthatmoment,assoonas,fromnowon,atthesametime,not.until,before,after,when,while,during表示并列notonly.butalso,both.and,either.or,neither.nor，on(the)onehandontheotherhand,表示举例或补充1）forexample2）besides/whatsmore/whatsworse表示转折however,but，although,insteadof表示原因thanksto,becauseof，because表示结果asresult(of),so，so.that,such.that,表目的inorderto,sothat表比较thesameas,than,ofall.,Whichsentenceisbetter?Iplayedfootballontheplayground.Ifelldownandhurtmylegs.2.WhenIwasplayingfootballontheplayground,Ifelldownandhurtmylegs.,正文：巧用连接词，赋予语言灵气,(good),(better),句式富于变化,Wearegoodfriends.Weshouldhelpeachother.2.Wearegoodfriendsandweshouldhelpeachother.3.Aswearegoodfriends,weshouldhelpeachother.,(best),(good),(better),IwasdeeplymovedandIcouldntsayaword.(good)2.Iwas_moved_sayaword.(better),句式富于变化,tooto,1.与开头呼应，再次重申自己的观点,注意避免重复句式。2.结尾经典词组、句型：Atlast/Finally.最后Inaword,.总而言之Inshort,.简言之Wehopethat我们希望Letstryourbestto.Ibelieveifwecan.,.willbe.Whata.!/How.!,结尾画龙点睛，首尾呼应,Makeaconcludingsentence,KeepinghealthyHelpingothersEnvironmentBeijing,Makeaconcludingsentence,Keepinghealthy,Helpingothers,Letstryourbesttokeephealthy.Inshort,itsimportanttohavegoodhabitsandkeephealthy.Ibelieveifwecanhelpothers,theworldwillbemoreandmorebeautiful.,Makeaconcludingsentence,Beijing,Environment,Letstryourbesttobeagreenerpeople.Inoneword,itsnecessaryforustoprotecttheenvironment.HowbeautifulBeijingis!WhynotcometoBeijingandenjoyyourself?,写作训练,生活中充满了爱，有父母的爱，有兄弟姐妹的爱，有朋友的爱，有老师的爱.请以“Love”为话题，简要描述一件发生在你身边的事。要求：1、语言规范，书写工整。2、80个词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）3、文中不要出现真实的人名，校名和地名_,Lovemeansgiving.Lovealsomeansunderstanding.Oneday,Iplayedfootballwithmyclassmatesontheplayground.Ifelldownandhurtmylegsbadly.Myclassmatestookmetothehospital.Duringmystayinbed,theycametohelpmewithmylessons.Theysaid,“Wearegoodfriends,weshouldhelpeachother.”Iwasdeeplymoved.Icouldntsayaword.Thankstomyclassmates.Iwilldomybesttogivemylovetoothers.,范文,Thereisalotoflovearoundus.Oneday,whenIwasplayingfootballwithmyclassmatesontheplayground,Ifelldownandhurtmylegsbadly.Myclassmatestookmetothehospitalatonce.Duringmystayinbed,theycametohelpmewithmylessons.Theysaid,“Aswearegoodfriends,weshouldhelpeachother.”Iwastoomovedtosayaword.Thankstomyclassmates.Iwilldomybesttogivemylovetoothers.,在日常生活中你主动帮助你的父母做家务活吗？请你根据提示用英语写一篇80字左右的短文，描述你平时所做家务以及你对家务的看法。提示：1.扔垃圾2.扫地3.帮助妈妈做饭4.洗衣服5.为花浇水6.饭后洗碗要求：语句通畅，语法正确。不得逐句翻译。,Homework,满分作文（10分）,Asweallknow,itsimportanttohelpparentsdohouseworkduringourdailylife.Ioftenhelpthemdohousework.Ithrowtherubbishawayandcleanthefloorinthemorning.Ihelpmymothercooklunch.Aftersupper,Ialwayswashdishes.Ithinkitcanmakemypar