句子分类和正误句子举例.ppt

MakingCorrectandEffectiveSentence,Agrammaticallycompletesentenceisonethatcontainsatleastasubjectandapredicateverb;iftheverbistransitive,theremustbeanobject;iftheverbisalink-verb,theremustbeapredicativeorcomplement.,TypesofSentences,Accordingtotheiruse,sentencesaredeclarative,interrogative,imperative,orexclamatory.Accordingtotheirstructure,sentencesaresimple,compound,complex,orcompound-complex.,varietyofsentencepatterns.,1.wecanimaginethebeautifulsurroundings.Therearemanytreesalongthestreets.Thereisacleanriverinthecity.Therearemanyfishesintheriver.Therearewillowtreesontheoneside.Therearesomepiecesofgrasslandontheotherside.Therearemanyflowersonthem.1.Justimaginethebeautifulsurroundingsifwehavemadeourcitiesgreener.Greentreeslinethestreets.Acleanriverwindsthroughthecity,inwhichalotoffishesabound.Ontheonesidestandrowsofwillowtrees.Ontheothersideliesastretchofgrasslandsprinkledwithmanyyellowandredflowers.,2.therearefewerandfewercitizenswholiketoseefilms.2.filmsarenowlosingtheirappealformanycitizens.3.therearemanypeoplewhocomplainofseverehousingshortages.3.housingshortagesbecomethesourceofgreatcomplaint.,e.g.fauty:BorninasmalltowninSouthChinaintheearly50s,hegrewuptobeafamousmusician.Revised:HewasborninasmalltowninSouthChinaintheearly50s.inhischildhoodhelikedtosingsongs.Laterheenteredaconservatory.Inthe70shebecameafamousmusician.,Fauty:Iwasborninasmalltown,inthetowntherewasonlyoneschool,Istudiedthereforsixyears.Iwasborninasmalltown.Inittherewasonlyoneschool.Istudiedthereforsixyears.InasmalltownwhereIwasborn,therewasonlyoneschool.Istudiedthereforsixyears.IstudiedforsixyearsattheonlyschoolinthesmalltownwhereIwasborn.,Fauty:Thedoctorsfirstdiscussedthepatientsconditionsandthenthepreparationforanoperationbegan.Thedoctorsfirstdiscussedthepatientsconditionsandthenbeganthepreparationforanoperation.,写句子时，要注意：（1）围绕一个中心，为句子选择和组织细节；（2）如无必要就不转换主语、时态、语态以及语气等；（3）句子包含的细节要有逻辑联系，细节也不宜过多。,Ex:1.Thepolicehelpedhimwhenhisimportantdocumentswerelost.Hefoundthemseveraldayslater.Helosthisimportantdocuments,buthefoundthemwiththehelpofthepoliceseveraldayslater.,1.Shakespeareistheworldsgreatestdramatist,andmarriedwhenhewasonlyeighteen.Shakespeare,theworldsgreatestdramatist,marriedonlyattheageofeighteen.,1.AlthoughwegenerallythinkofFranklinonlyasastatesman,hewasamanofmorethanonegift.Althoughthoughtgenerallyofasastatesman,Franklinwasamanofmorethanonegift.,Firstmakethefireandyoucookthedinner.Firstmakethefireandthencoolthedinner.Thestudentwasdisobedientandtheteacherpunishedhim.Theteacherpunishedthestudentforhisdisobedience.,1.Thegameswereveryinteresting,andIwasgreatlyabsorbed,andwhenIstartedhome,IfoundthatIhadtornalargeholeinmybestbluesilkgown.IwassoabsorbedintheveryinterestinggamesthatuntilIstartedhomeIdidntfindalargeholeinmybestbluesilkgown.,1.LastnightSmithbrokehisarm,losthiscarkeys,couldnotdrivehimselftotheuniversityandhewasabsenttoday.Lastnightwhenbreakinghisarm,Smithlosthiscarkeysandcouldnotdrivehimselftotheuniversity.Thatswhyhewasabsenttoday.,Being20yearsofage,ZhangYinghasbeenparalyzedfromthewaistdownwardssinceshewasattheageofsix.Whenherparentstaughther,shehaslearnedtoreadandwriteChineseandalsolearnedtoread,writeandspeakEnglish.Herspiritisindomitable,becauseshehasevenlearnedacupuncture.Byusingacupunctureshehascuredmanypeopleoftheirdisease.,ZhangYing,a20-year-oldgirl,thoughparalyzedfromthewaistdownwardssincetheageofsix,haslearnedwithindomitablespiritbothChineseandEnglish,andevenacupuncturesowellthatshehascuredmanypatients.,e.g.我在哪儿也找不到这张车票。,ButnomatterhowhardIsearched,thereceiptwasnowheretobefound.Icouldntfindtheticketanywhere.Ididntknowwheretheticketwas.NowherecouldIfindtheticket.Theticketwasnowheretobefound.Theresnoplaceformetofindtheticket.Theticketcouldnotbefoundanywhere.Ifinallyfailedtofindtheticket.Itriedtolookforthetickethereandthere,butIfailed.Whereve