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,HowtoMakeAnError-findingandAnalysisReport,120世纪70年代末以来，中国坚持深化改革，扩大开放，经济社会发展取得了举世瞩目的成就。22004年，中国进出口总额达到1.15万亿美元，居世界第三位；吸收外商投资额达到606亿美元，居世界第二位，累计吸收外商投资额超过5600亿美元。3同年，中国国内生产总值达到1.65万亿美元。,1Sincethelate1970s,Chinahasbeenconstantlydrivingforthitsreforminitiativeandexpandingthescopeofopening-upandhasobtainedsubstantialachievementsinsocioeconomicdevelopmentwhichhasbeencenteroftheworldsattention.2In2004,ChinasimportsandexportstotaledUSD1.15trillion,ranking3rdamongallnationsintheworld,anditattractedUSD60.6millioninforeigninvestment,thesecondhighestamountworldwide,bringingtheaggregatevalueofinwardforeigninvestmenttooverUSD560billion.3In2004,ChinasGDPamountedtoUSD1.65trillion.,Originaltranslation,Originalversion：1Sincethelate1970s,Chinahasbeenconstantlydrivingforthitsreforminitiativeandexpandingthescopeofopening-upandhasobtainedsubstantialachievementsinsocioeconomicdevelopmentwhichhasbeencenteroftheworldsattention.,120世纪70年代末以来，中国坚持深化改革，扩大开放，经济社会发展取得了举世瞩目的成就。,Errorfindingandanalysis1,Errorfindingandanalysis1,坚持hasbeenconstantly,hasconsistently,constantly:,Youuse“constant”todescribesomethingthathappensallthetimeorisalwaysthere.=continualThedirectionofthewindisconstantlychanging.(CollinsCobuildEnglishDictionary,2000.),Consistent:1)alwayskeepingthesamepatternorstyle,unchanging.Youarenotconsistent,firstyoucondemnme,thenyoupraiseme.2)inagreementwithsthconsistently(OxfordadvancedLearnersEnglishChineseDictionary),2.深化改革drivingforthitsreforminitiativedriveforth(X),Initiative:planCanimportantnewplanorprocessthathasbeenstartedinordertoachieveaparticularaimortosolveaparticularproblem.Agovernmentinitiativetohelpexporters.(LongmanDictionaryofContemporaryEnglish),3.扩大开放expandthescopeofopening-up,deepenedreformandopenedwidertotheoutsideworld,4.取得了举世瞩目的成就hasobtainedsubstantialachievementsobtain-makesubstantialremarkable,Ofconsiderableimportance,sizeorworth.很重要的，很可观的，大量的，很有价值的。AsubstantialamountofcashConcerningtheessentialsofsth.基本的Therewassubstantialagreementonchangingpolicies.(TheNewOxfordEnglishChineseDitionary,2007),adj,remarkableorsurprisingandthereforedeservingattentionorpraise.(LongmanDictionaryofContemporaryEnglish,1995),makingremarkableachievements,5.经济社会发展socioeconomicdevelopment6.举世瞩目-whichhasbeencenteroftheworldsattention,economicandsocialdevelopment,删除,Originalversion：1Sincethelate1970s,Chinahasbeenconstantlydrivingforthitsreforminitiativeandexpandingthescopeofopening-upandhasobtainedsubstantialachievementsinsocioeconomicdevelopmentwhichhasbeencenteroftheworldsattention.Modifiedversion：Sincethelate1970s,Chinahasbeenconsistentlydeepeningreformandopeningwidertotheoutsideworld,makingremarkableachievementsinitseconomicandsocialdevelopment.,120世纪70年代末以来，中国坚持深化改革，扩大开放，经济社会发展取得了举世瞩目的成就。,Errorfindingandanalysis1,Errorfindingandanalysis2,22004年，中国进出口总额达到1.15万亿美元，居世界第三位；吸收外商投资额达到606亿美元，居世界第二位，累计吸收外商投资额超过5600亿美元。,Originalversion:,2In2004,ChinasimportsandexportstotaledUSD1.15trillion,ranking3rdamongallnationsintheworld,anditattractedUSD60.6millioninforeigninvestment,thesecondhighestamountworldwide,bringingtheaggregatevalueofinwardforeigninvestmenttooverUSD560billion.,7.中国的进出口总额Chinasimportsandexportstotaled,ImportN-C:anitem,aservice,anideaorapersonthatisbroughtintoonecountryfromanother.ExportN-C:anitem,aservice,anideaorapersonthatissentfromonecountrytoanothertobesold.(牛津英汉双解商务英语词典，1999),Chinastotalvalueofimportsandexports,数字表达错误、顺序不当,8.达到1.15万亿美元totaledUSD1.15trillion,cameto1.15trillionUSD,“美元”的两种表达方式:US$+number2.number+USD/U.S.dollar,(11).606亿美元,USD60.6million,60.6billionUSD,5600亿美元-USD560billion,560billionUSD,9.居世界第三位-ranking3rdamongallnationsintheworld,rankingthe3rdintheworld,10.吸收-attract,absorb,12.居世界第二位-thesecondhighestamountworldwideworldwide:extendingover,knownoroccurringinoraffectingallpartsoftheworld.(牛津英语大词典，2004)rankingthesecondintheworld13.累计吸收外商投资额_theaggregatevalueofinwardforeigninvestmentinvestment:nounMassNouninvestmentmadewithinacountryfromoutside(国外)在一国的投资(删除inward)aggregate:adj,onlybeforenountechnicalbeingthetotalamountofsomething,especiallymoney:aggregateincomeandinvestment.accumulate:v,tograduallyincreaseinnumbersoramountTheaccumulatedforeigninvestment,22004年，中国进出口总额达到1.15万亿美元，居世界第三位；吸收外商投资额达到606亿美元，居世界第二位，累计吸收外商投资额超过5600亿美元。,Originalversion:2In2004,ChinasimportsandexportstotaledUSD1.15trillion,ranking3rdamongallnationsintheworld,anditattractedUSD60.6millioninforeigninvestment,thesecondhighestamountworldwide,bringingtheaggregatevalueofinwardforeigninvestmenttooverUSD560billion.Modifiedversion:In2004,Chinastotalvalueofimportsandexportscameto1.15trillionUSD,rankingthe3rdintheworldanditabsorbed60.6billionUSDinforeigninvestment,rankingthesecondintheworld,increasingtheaccumulatedforeigninvestmenttoover560billionUSD.,Errorfindingandanalysis3,3同年，中国国内生产总值达到1.65万亿美元。,3In2004,ChinasGDPamountedtoUSD1.65trillion.,Originalversion:,ModifiedVersion:,ChinasGDPofthesameyearamountedto1.65trillionUSD.,Modifiedversion,Sincethelate1970s,Chinahasbeenconsistentlydeepeningthereformandopeningwidertotheoutsideworld,makingremarkableachievementsinitseconomicandsocialdevelopment.In20