定语从句在写作的简单应用-公开课.ppt

UsingAttributiveClauseinWriting,定语从句在写作的简单应用,Enjoythenicesayings&translate,Heavenrewardsthosewhoworkhard,andflowersinspringcometofruitioninautumn.天道酬勤，春华秋实。（出处书大诰）（摘自中国国家主席习近平应邀出席博鳌亚洲论坛2018年年会开幕式的重要主旨演讲：“天道酬勤，春华秋实”。中国人民坚持聚精会神搞建设、坚持改革开放不动摇，持之以恒，锲而不舍，推动中国发生了翻天覆地的变化）,学“习”语，知典故,Enjoythenicesayings,Successcomestothosewhoshareinonepurpose.上下同欲者胜（出处孙子.谋攻）（摘自2017年习近平新年贺词：“上下同欲者胜”。只要我们13亿多人们和衷共济，只要我们党永远同人民站在一起，大家撸起袖子加油干，我们就一定能走好我们这一代人的长征路）,学“习”语，知典故,Enjoythenicesayings,Heroesarethosewhoknowthemselvesandcanovercometheirowndifficulties.自知者英，自胜者雄。（出处中说.周公）（摘自2016.10.21习近平在纪念红军长征胜利80周年大会上的讲话：“自知者英，自胜者雄”，民族复兴梦想越接近，改革开放任务越繁重，越要加强党的建设）,学“习”语，知典故,Whathaveyoulearnedlastweek?,WHAT？,Revision,1.构成要素先行词：被定语从句修饰的_或_关系词：分为_和_定语从句：修饰_或_的从句，一般紧跟在_的后面。2.结构：_词+_词+从句3.分类：_和非限制性定语从句4.应用：可以用来描述_和_5.翻译：“的”,名词,代词,名词,代词,关系副词,关系代词,先行词,关系,先行,事物,人物,限制性,引导非限制定从，指代整个主句的内容,主语或宾语,宾语,定语，表所属关系,状语,IamastudentfromXiaoshengMiddleSchool,_issurroundedbymanygreentrees.,which,Practice1:在空格中填入合适的关系词,Thereason_IwanttointroducemyschoolisthatitisoneofthemostbeautifulschoolsinShantou.,why,Therearemodernbasketballcourtsandplayground_areavailable（可利用的）forustotakeexercise.,that/which,Icanwellremembertherewasatime_ablueskyandthegreentreeshavekeptmespellbound.,when,Whatsmore,therearemanyfriendlyclassmates_Icouldgetalongwell.,withwhom,Moreimportantly,Ihavemetagreatnumberofexcellentteachers_haverichteachingexperience.,that/who,Iwillneverforgettheclassroom_westudytogether.,where,Thisisthebeautifulschool_Iwillspendthreehappyyears.,where,Practice2把下列每组题中的简单句合并为一个含有定从的复合句,IliketheMid-autumnFestival.TheMid-autumnFestivalisasimportantastheSpringFestival.,Peoplewilltrytogohomeforthefamilyreunion.Peopleworkfarfromtheirhomes.,Thereisakindofspecialfoodforthisfestival.Thenameofthefoodismooncake.,1)IliketheMid-autumnFestivalwhichisasimportantastheSpringFestival.,3)Thereisakindofspecialfood,thenameofwhichismooncake.3)Thereisakindofspecialfood,whosenameismooncake.,2)Peoplewhoworkfarfromtheirhomeswilltrytogohomeforthefamilyreunion.,Tip1:写出两个简单句,主句,从句,主句,主句,从句,从句,Tip2:在一个简单句中找出一个要修饰的词汇（这个词在两个简单句中都有）,Tip3:把另一个简单句改成定从，从句要紧跟先行词(特别注意引导词的选择）,who,which,which,定语从句运用于写作,WhydowelearntheAttributiveClauses?,WHY？,写作中定语从句的主要作用：,1.增加词数,Todaysometeachersarevisitingourclass.TheteachersarefromXiaoshengMiddleSchool.TodaysometeacherswhoarefromXiaoshengMiddleSchoolarevisitingourclass.,IwanttoplaybasketballintheNBA.,2.可连接两个包含同一事物的句子，避免单词重复和句式单一,3.补充细节，以丰富文章内容,Thisismyuncle,adoctor.Thisismyuncle,whoisadoctor.,IwanttoplaybasketballintheNBA,whichisalwaysmydream.,HowdoweusetheAttributiveClausesinwriting?,HOW？,定从的使用情况,一：两个（以上）简单句的合并,Johnismybestfriend.Johngavemeagift.HeboughtthisgiftfromUSA,gavemeagift,John,whichheboughtfromUSA.,mybestfriend,（题干中出现两句（以上）涉及同一事物的简单句）,定从的使用,我们班是一个大家庭。,这个大家庭包括35个女孩和40个男孩。,Ourclassisabigfamily.,Thefamilyconsistsof35girlsand40boys.,Ourclassisabigfamily,whichconsistsof35girlsand40boys.,consistof,Practice:,二：插入语的使用,众所周知：如上所述：,Asweallknow：Asismentionedabove：,定从的使用,众所周知，中国有世界上最多的人口,Asweallknow,Chinahasthelargestpopulationallovertheworld.,Chinahasthelargestpopulationalloverrtheworld,asweallknow.,China,asweallknow,hasthelargestpopulationalloverrtheworld.,正如上面所提到的，定语从句用处很大。,_,theAttributiveClauseisofgreatuse.,Asismentionedabove,如上所述，我支持后者的观点。infavorof,I,asismentionedabove,aminfavorofthelatterview.,正如我们所期待的，她取得了第一名。,She,asweallexpect,gotthefirstprize.,三：非限指代整句的使用,我们不应玩手机，这会影响学习。我们应该每天锻炼，这对身体好。,Weshouldnotplaythemobilephone,whichhasabadeffectonourstudy.,Weshouldtakeexerciseeveryday,whichisgoodforourhealth.,定从的使用,Forexample:,Myschoolisabeautifulplace.,Myschoolisabeautifulplace，wheretherearegreentrees,beautifulflowers,singingbirdsandfreshair.,Solution:,找到这个简单句中的中心词，用定语从句将其丰富,我的学校是个美丽的地方。,有多美丽？因何美丽？,题干中只有一个孤立的简单句。,四：定从在要点增加上的使用,定从的使用,(2013年高考山东卷)描述你的假期打算（包括兼职、旅游、志愿者等）,Iwouldliketodoapart-timejob,whichwillhelpmeearnmoneyandaccumulateworkingexperience.,Practice:,用定语从句增添做这些事情的原因,Travelingisoneofmychoices,whichwillenrichmylifeandbroadenmyhorizon.,Iwouldliketodovoluntarywork,whichwillmakeagreatcontributiontosociety.,Translatethefollowingsentences.,1.我总是会参观一些博物馆，这些博物馆于拓宽视野、丰富知识来说是不应错过的。,2.你知道，中国结非常受中国人的喜欢。(Chineseknot）,3.当今，父母为他们的独生子女做所有的事情，这使得这些独生子女非常依赖于父母。,4.人们可以一边吃月饼一边赏月，月饼是这个节日的特殊食品。,1.Iwouldvisitsomemuseumswhichshouldnotbemissedtowidenmyhorizonsaswellasenrichmyknowledge.(2013山东高考满分作文),我总是会参观一些博物馆，这些博物馆对于拓宽视野、丰富知识来说是不应错过的。,2.Asyouknow,ChineseknotsareverypopularwithChinesepeople.(2013新课标全国卷满分作文),你知道，中国结非常受中国人的喜欢。,4.Peoplecanenjoythemoonwhileeatingmooncakes,whicharethespecialfoodforthisfestival.(2013辽宁高考满分作文)人们可以一边吃月饼一边赏月，月饼是这个节日的特殊食品。,3.Nowadaysparentshavedoneeverythingfortheirsinglechildren,whichmakesthechildrenrelyontheirparentsbadly.(2013福建高考满分作文),当今，父母为他们的独生子女做所有的事情，这使得这些独生子女非常依赖于父母。,作文中是不是越多定语从句就越好,？,2017年全国卷假定你是李华，想邀请邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.展览时间、地点；2.展览内容。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,DearHenryImLiHua,whoistheleaderofthepaper-cuttingclubinourschool.LasttimeyoutoldmeyoulookedforwardtolearningmoreabouttraditionalChineseculture.NowImgladtotellyoutherewillbeaChinesepaper-cuttingexhibitionwhichisheldbyourschool.Isincerelyhopeyoucansetasidesometimefortheartfeast.Theexhibition,thethemeofwhichisbeautyofChina,willtakeplaceintheschoolhallfrom2to5ontheafternoonofJune21.Ourclubsworkswillbedisplayed,andwehaveavaluablesetofpaper-cuttingwhichiscreatedbyafamousartistofthisfield.Besides,therewillbealotofusefulandinterestingactivities,fromwhichyoucanhaveaclearerpictureofChineseculture.Iwouldappreciateitifyouacceptmyinvitation.Imsureitcanleaveawonderfulimpressiononyou!Imlookingforwardtoyourreply.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua,DearHenry,ImLiHua,theleaderofthepaper-cuttingclubinourschool.LasttimeyoutoldmeyoulookedforwardtolearningmoreabouttraditionalChineseculture.NowImgladtotellyoutherewillbeaChinesepaper-cuttingexhibitionheldbyourschool.Isincerelyhopeyoucansetasidesometimefortheartfeast.Theexhibition,thethemeofwhichisbeautyofChina,willtakeplaceintheschoolhallfrom2to5ontheafternoonofJune21.Notonlywillourclubsworksbedisplayed,butwealsohaveavaluablesetofpaper-cuttingcreatedbyafamousartistofthisfield.Besides,therewillbealotofusefulandinterestingactivities,fromwhichyoucanhaveaclearerpictureofChineseculture.Iwouldappreciateitifyouacceptmyinvitation.Imsureitcanleaveawonderfulimpressiononyou!Imlookingforwardtoyourreply.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua,1,2,3,Pleaseaddanythingyoulikeandanythingyouwant,Pleaseaddanythingyoulikeandanythingyouwant,Pleaseaddanythingyoulikeandanythingyouwant,contents,DearHenryImLiHua,whoistheleaderofthepaper-cuttingclubinourschool.LasttimeyoutoldmeyoulookedforwardtolearningmoreabouttraditionalChineseculture.NowImgladtotellyoutherewillbeaChinesepaper-cuttingexhibitionwhichisheldbyourschool.Isincerelyhopeyoucansetasidesometimefortheartfeast.Theexhibition,thethemeofwhichisbeautyofChina,willtakeplaceintheschoolhallfrom2to5ontheafternoonofJune21.Ourclubsworkswillbedisplayed,andwehaveavaluablesetofpaper-cuttingwhichiscreatedbyafamousartistofthisfield.Besides,therewillbealotofusefulandinterestingactivities,fromwhichyoucanhaveaclearerpictureofChineseculture.Iwouldappreciateitifyouacceptmyinvitation.Imsureitcanleaveawonderfulimpressiononyou!Imlookingforwardtoyourreply.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua,范文一,1,3,2,4,5,1,2,3,Pleaseaddanythingyoulikeandanythingyouwant,Pleaseaddanythingyoulikeandanythingyouwant,Pleaseaddanythingyoulikeandanythingyouwant,contents,DearHenry,ImLiHua,theleaderofthepaper-cuttingclubinourschool.LasttimeyoutoldmeyoulookedforwardtolearningmoreabouttraditionalChineseculture.NowImgladtotellyoutherewillbeaChinesepaper-cuttingexhibitionheldbyourschool.Isincerelyhopeyoucansetas