大学英语应用文写作.ppt

大学英语应用文（书信）写作,书信是日常生活中常用的文体，是用以交涉事宜、传达信息、交流思想、联络感情、增进了解的重要工具。英文书信分为两大类：私人信件和公务信件。私人信件是指亲戚朋友之间的通信。这两类书信各有自己的格式。一般说来，私人信件不拘形式，信文多用手写，也可打印；公务信件是单位与单位或单位与个人之间来往的书信，可能是推荐信、求职信、入学申请书、邀请信，或询问、答复、反映意见（如投诉信）等的信件。公务信件要求比较严格，必须遵循一定的格式。,英语书信的结构：,英文书信通常包括6个组成部分：信头（heading，包括寄信人地址和日期);信内地址（insideaddress，指收信人地址);称呼（salutation）;正文（body）;结束语（complimentary）;签名（signature）;有时候还包括附言（postscript）和附件（attachment）。在考试中，由于篇幅所限，只要求考生在书信中包括称呼、正文、结束语和签名四个部分。,3.称呼（Salutation）称呼是对收信人的称谓，应与左边线对齐，写在收信人姓名、地址下面1-2行处。在称呼后，英国人常用逗号，美国人则常用冒号。在私人信件中可直呼收信人的名字，但公务信件中一定要写收信人的姓。大部分信件在称呼前加“Dear”。如：DearProfessor/Prof.Bergen:DearDr.Johnson,对不相识的人可按性别称呼：DearSir:或DearMadam:DearLadies。如果不知收信人的性别则可用DearSirorMadam:,3.信的正文（BodyoftheLetter）正文是书信的主体。与中文信件不同的是，英文书信的正文的开头不是先写一些问候语，再阐明写信的目的，而是直接说明写信人的身份及写信的目的，然后提出写信人的情况、想法或要求，并加以必要的解释或说明。英文书信陈述目的时，应该直截了当，意思明确，层次清楚，言简意赅。书信正文的第一句话或第一段，通常被称为起首语。一般说来，人们习惯用一些客套的写法作为书信正文的起始，即先将对方来信的日期、主题加以简单描述，以便使对方一看便知该信是回答哪一封信的。如果是第一次给别人写信，也可用开头语作必要的自我介绍，并表明自己写信的主要目的。,正文写作格式：正文的写作格式主要有英式和美式两种。1)英式结构即缩进式结构，属于比较传统的结构,即每一段的第一行都向里缩进4-8个字符，且所有段落的缩进距离必须保持一致；称呼顶格写，落款则在中间偏右的位置。2)美式结构则是齐头式结构，其特点是所有段落的第一行都顶格写，段与段之间空一行，另外称呼、落款等也都顶格写。商业信函以及电子邮件最好使用齐头式。,缩进式：DearKate,IwonderifyoucanlendmeyourMLAHandbookforAcademicWriting.Iamintheprocessofwritingmygraduationthesis,andneedtoconsultthebooknowandthenforstandardformatting.ThusImightneedtokeepthebookforaboutamonthandahalf,andIhopethatwouldnotbringanyinconveniencetoyou.IassureyouthatIwillmaintainthebookingoodcondition.Ifpossible,pleasegivemeacallandIwillcomebyyourhousetopickupthebook.Thanksalot.Yours,Judy,齐头式：DearKate,IwonderifyoucanlendmeyourMLAHandbookforAcademicWriting.Iamintheprocessofwritingmygraduationthesis,andneedtoconsultthebooknowandthenforstandardformatting.ThusImightneedtokeepthebookforaboutamonthandahalf,andIhopethatwouldnotbringanyinconveniencetoyou.IassureyouthatIwillmaintainthebookingoodcondition.Ifpossible,pleasegivemeacallandIwillcomebyyourhousetopickupthebook.Thanksalot.Yours,Judy,4.结束语（ComplimentaryClose）公务信件的结尾礼词包含两部分：发信人的结尾套语与署名。结尾套语写在签名上面一行，第一个字母要大写，套语结尾后面要加逗号。在公务信件中，发信人常用的结尾套语有：Trulyyours,Yourstruly,Respectfullyyours,Yoursrespectfully,Faithfullyyours,Yoursfaithfully,Sincerelyyours,YourssincerelyYourstruly,Yours等。私人信件中，发信人常用的结尾套语有：Sincerelyyours,Lovelyyours,Yourlovely,Yourlovingson/daughter等。,5.签名（Signature）写信人的签名常位于结尾礼词正下方一二行。除非是给很熟悉的人写信，签名一般须写出全名。签名常常较潦草，不易辨认，因此在签名的正下方须打印出全名。,投诉信(ALetterofComplaint),在人们的生活中经常会发生一些事情，比如消费利益受损、正常生活和工作受到干扰等等令人伤脑筋的事情，有时写封投诉信不失为一个解决的办法。投诉信通常包括以下几个方面的内容：说明投诉的原因并表示遗憾；实事求是地阐述问题发生的经过，切记不要夸大其词；指出问题引起的后果；提出批评及处理的意见或敦促对方采取措施或者提出所希望的赔偿以及补救方式。投诉信的结构（1）开头：自我介绍，交代投诉内容，表明本信的目的。（2）正文：说明情况，讲清利害，分析利弊。告诉对方你因此受到的伤害或不便，提出解决问题的建议，表明希望如何处理。（3）结尾：表达希望问题得到迅速恰当解决的强烈愿望，希望尽快得到满意的答复。,Dear_,Iam_（自我介绍）.IfeelbadtotroubleyoubutIamafraidthatIhavetomakeacomplaintabout.Thereasonformydissatisfactionis_（总体介绍）.Inthefirstplace,_（抱怨的第一个方面）.Inaddition,_（抱怨的第二个方面）.Underthesecircumstances,Ifindit_（感觉）to_（抱怨的方面给你带来的后果）.Iappreciateitverymuchifyoucould_（提出建议和请求）,preferably_（进一步的要求）,andIwouldliketohavethismattersettledby_（设定解决事情最后期限）.ThankyouforyourconsiderationandIwillbelookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiMing,DearSirorMadam,IamwritingtoinformyouthatIwishtomoveintoanewroomnextterm.Iwouldpreferasingleroom,asIfindthepresentsharingarrangementinconvenient.Thereasonformydissatisfactionismyroommatesinconsideratebehavior.Hisfriendsconstantlyvisithimandheregularlyholdsnoisyparties.Inaddition,hesometimesborrowsmythingswithoutaskingme.Underthesecircumstances,Ifinditdifferenttoconcentrateonmystudies,andIamfallingbehindonmyassignments.Iamsureyouwillagreethatthesolutionisformetomoveintoaroomofmyown,whereIwillbefreefromsuchdistraction.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldfoundasingleroomforme,preferablynotinthesamebuildingbutasneartothecollegecampusaspossible.Yourssincerely,LiMing,DearSirorMadam,ItwassomewhatirritatingtofindthattheEnglish-ChinesedictionaryyousenttomeonDec.13th,2009wastotallyunacceptable.Thedictionarywasagreatdisappointment,forwhenitarrived,itwasfarbehindthedateyoupromisedtosendittome.Besides,thewrappingslookedwornanddirty.Andmoresurprisingly,whenIopenedthedictionary,Ifoundmorethan20pagesofitmissing(p.123top.136).Idbegratefulifyoucouldsendmeareplacementandrefundmypostage(stateamount).Ireallyappreciateyourhelp.Yoursfaithfully,LiMing,投诉信常用语1)有礼貌地说明所犯错误或指出问题1.Iamwritingtocomplainabout-2.Iwritetoexpressmyconcern/dissatisfactionabout3.Iwouldliketoexpressmydisappointmentabout-4.Wehavereceivedyour(invoice/consignment)5.Withreferencetoyourinvoiceof-Imustpointout-6.Accordingto-,thecorrectfigureis-7.Oncheckingthegoods,wediscoveredthat200radiosweremissing.8.Yourinvoicestatesthattheconsignmentcontainsradios,butinfact.,2)要求对方采取措施1.Iwillappreciateanythingyoucandotohelpme2.Itrustyouwilltakemycomplaintseriously.3.Iwould,however,beperfectlysatisfiedifyouwouldkindlyreplacetheitemorrefundmymoney,whicheverismoreconvenient.4.Weshouldbeobligedifyoucouldinvestigatethesematters.5.Weshouldbethankfulifyoucouldgiveusarefundforthefaultygoods.6.WeshallappreciateverymuchifyoucouldreplacethedamagedgoodsbyTuesday.3)期盼对方回复1.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.2.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyouatyourearliestconvenience.3.Ilookforwardtoyourearlyreply.,2004年6月大学英语六级作文题目设想你买了一本英文词典，发现有这样那样的质量问题，书店的服务态度又不好，因此给报社编辑写信信中必须包括以下内容：1、事情的起因2、与书店交涉的经过3、呼吁服务行业必须提高服务质量,June19,2004DearEditor,IamwritingthislettertoreflectsomeproblemsIcameacrossrecentlyand.appealtotheimprovementoftheserviceindustry.ThisweekendIboughtanEnglish-Chinesedictionaryinabookstorenearmyhomesinceitscoveriselaboratelydesigned.ButwhenIwenthomeandreadcarefully,Ifoundthattheseveralpagesofthedictionaryhavebeencrackedandbefouled.Whatisworse,themisprintsspreadeverywhereinthedictionaryandseriouslyaffectmycomprehension.Sincetherewassuchdamageandmisprinttothedictionary,Iwenttothebookstoretorequireforareplace.,Buttomysurprise,thestaffofthebookstoreturndownmyrequestrudelyandevendeniedthepoorqualityofthedictionary.Itgoeswithoutsayingthattodaysface-pacedandmarket-orientedeconomycallsformuchhigherstandardforserviceindustry.However,tomyregret,manyofthecommercialsfailtoachievethisstandardandthequalityofthestaffneedstobeimproved.Itsself-evidentthatthepoorqualityofpractitionersintheserviceindustrywillnotonlydeeplydisappointcustomersbutalsohamperthedevelopmentofourcountryseconomy.Asaresult,Iexpectyournewspapertoappealtotheserviceindustrytoattachmoreimportancetotheserviceimprovement.Thankyouforyourattention!Sincerelyyours,Sam,申请信(ALetterofApplication),申请信主要用于求职或求学,目的是要对方充分了解自己的目的和资格.因此,申请信必须简明扼要,突出重点.申请信可以是针对招聘广告写的,也可以市直接递交给某个单位的.申请信要求语言规范,信息正式,既不能夸张,也不必过于谦虚.申请信的结构一般包括:申请目标,自述理由,介绍资格,请求面试和期待回音等.语言注意点申请信开篇应点明主题，语言简练。接着说明做此申请的原因，即自己所具备的申请条件，这一部分需重点明确，论述充分。最后请求回复并表示感谢时，应采用礼貌、诚恳的措辞。,这类信件的主要结构是:1)说明写作目的表明想要获得什么工作或学位，介绍自己，为什么写信若是应聘工作则还需说明何时何地从哪里获得该职位的招聘信息（对公司评估广告效应非常重要)所有这些可以用一句话概括2)介绍相关工作经历及本人个性，以表明你可以胜任这个职位包括教育背景、工作经历、个人能力及成就还可根据情况简单介绍个人爱好和兴趣注意：所有这些内容均应与应聘工作或学位有关系介绍背景时，选词遣字既不过分渲染，又不过分谦虚要给人留下既充满信心又态度诚恳的印象3)表示感谢和期待，恳请招聘单位对自己的申请给予优先考虑，留下联络方式及对对方表示感谢,practiceDirections:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowritealettertoapplyforapositionofbeinganEnglishtutorforafifteen-year-oldstudent.Youshouldwritenolessthan180wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.表明写信的原因2.列举本人能胜任这份工作的理由3.总结并提出期望,DearSirorMadam,ImwritinginresponsetotheadvertisementontheOct.1st,2005editionof21stCentury.Imconfidentthatmyeducationandexperiencequalifymeforthisposition.Icanfulfilltheresponsibilityforthefollowingreasons.Atpresent,ImasophomoreofZhejiangUniversity.AsanEnglishmajor,Ihavelaidasolidfoundationinlanguagelearning.Moreover,IhaverichexperienceinteachingEnglishthoughIamstillastudentnow.IhavetutoredEnglishtotwostudentsofjuniormiddleschoolforawholeyear.,Undermysupervision,bothofthemmadegreatprogressinEnglishandgotgoodscoresinthefinalexams.Whatsmore,Iattachedmuchimportancetocommunicatingwiththem,andthuswebuiltagoodrelationship.Imfullyconvincedthat,withmyqualificationandexperience,Iamtherightpersonforthejob.Ihopeyouwilltakemyqualificationintoconsideration.Pleasecontactmeat12345bymailor85588886byphone.Yourearlyreplywillbeappreciated.YoursfaithfullyMary,范文：DearMr.Moore,Iwouldliketoexpressmyinterestinyourrecentlyadvertisedpositionforawaitress.Iamenclosingmyresume,whichfurtherdetailsmypreviousworkexperienceandqualifications.NotonlydoIhavethequalificationsandworkexperienceforthisjob,butIalsohavetherightpersonalityforawaitress.Iamafriendlypersonwhocanquicklyestablisharapportwithpeopleofallages.Thefast-pacedenvironmentofwaitingontablessuitsme,becauseIenjoyworkingunderpressure.Myformerbosswassurprisedatmyefficiencyindealingwithcustomersorders.Ihopetomeetwithyoutodiscussthepossibilityofworkingatyourrestaurant.Icanbereachedat4639234duringthedaysand924,6868after6p.m.Thankyouforconsideringmyapplication.Ilookforwardtoyouinthenearfuture.YourssincerelyLiMing,常见求职及申请信的导语句型：Iamwritingtoapplyfor.IwishtoapplyforthepostmentionedinyouradvertisementinBeijingDailyofMarch21.Iamwritingtoexpressmyinterestin.Iamwritingtoformallyrequest.Ishouldliketoapplyforthejobadvertisedinyesterdaysnewspaper.Youradvertisementforasalemanagerinhasimpressedme.IfeelIcanfillthatvacancyTherequirementsoutlinedinyouradvertisementmakesmeconfidentthatIamqualifiedfortheposition.IamwritinginresponsetoyouradvertisementforthepositionofItiswithconsiderableinterestthatIenclosemyresumeinresponsetoyouradvertisementforaHumanResourcesManager.,表示信心、能力或兴趣的方式：Ifeelthatsimilarcontributionsmightbemadetoyourfirmaswell.Ifeelthat,withmyoverallqua1ificationsanddesire,Icouldcontributesignificantlytoyourcompany.IfeelthatIcanmakeastrongcontributiontoyourcompany.Iwouldappeartohaveexcellentqualificationsforthisposition.IfeelconfidentthatIcanprovidethekindofleadershipthatyouareseekingfor.Iamconvincedthatmyinteresttogetherwithmyacademicbackgroundandworkingexperienceswillmakemebetterqualifiedinapplyingacourseofahigherlevel.,在信尾表达进一步联系的愿望，表示感谢的方式：Afteryouhavereviewedtheenclosedcurriculumvitae,IwouldappreciateanopportunitytodiscusshowImaycontributetoyourdepartment.Iwouldbepleasedtohavetheopportunitytointerviewwith.IwouldappreciatetheopportunitytodiscusshowImightfurthercontributetoyour.ThankyouagainandIlookforwardtohearingfromyoushortly.Iamveryinterestedinthispositionandwouldappreciatetheopportunitytofurtherdiscussduringaface-to-faceinterview.Thankyouforyouconsideration.ThankyouagainandIamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldcontactmeassoonaspossible.IfthereisanythingfurtherIcouldaddtoareviewofmyqualificationsorgoals,pleasedonothesitatetocall.Ihopetohearfromyousoon.,推荐信（Aletterofrecommendation）,推荐信是一个人为推荐另一个人去接受某个职位或参与某项工作而写的信件。特定含义下指本科生或硕士研究生到其他（一般是国外）大学研究生院攻读硕士或博士学位时，请老师所写的推荐信。一般说来美国的研究生院要求提供3封推荐信，信件作者应该熟悉学生，并且有一定知名度。一封推荐信应该提供如下信息：whoyouare,yourconnectionwiththepersonyouarerecommending,whytheyarequalifiedandthespecificskillstheyhave。此外，还应该包括联系方式，以便用人单位可以了解、确认情况。推荐信一般分为三个部分：(1)介绍推荐人和提及与自己的熟悉程度；(2)对推荐人的评价；(3)提及推荐者综合素质有关的内容。,Paragraph1推荐信的第一段应该说明你和被推荐人的关系，包括你是怎么认识他/她的，还有你写这封推荐信的资格。Paragraph2推荐信的第二段应该包括被推荐人的个人信息，说明他/她的资格、能力，如果是推荐被推荐人应聘某个职位，推荐信应该描述这个人的能力能适合他/她所要求的职位。可以参考招聘广告上对职位的要求和被推荐人的简历一起来写.,Paragraph3Summary主要内容叙述清楚后，还应该加一个简短的总结。总结部分应该再简述一下你为什么要推荐这个人。可以写上Ihighlyrecommendtheperson，Irecommendthepersonwithoutreservation或者其他类似的话。推荐信的结尾部分应该写上你愿意提供更多的详细信息，要注明你的电话号码，联系方式和emailaddress.,一封推荐学生进一步攻读学位的信DearSirorMadam:ThisistorecommendMr.HuangGangforadmissiontoyouruniversity.IhaveknownMr.Huangsince1995whenIservedasadvisortothestudentsintheElectricalEngineeringDepartmentatXiamenUniversity.Later,ithappenedthatin2001IservedasMr.HuangssupervisoragaininhisgraduateprogramatShangdongUniversity.ThereforeIknowMr.Huangverywellintermsofhispersonalityandacademicperformance.ThereforeIknowMr.Huangverywellintermsofhispersonalityandacademicperformance.,Mr.Hanghasalwaysbeenaverydiligentstudentwithanintegrity.Hehasabroadrangeofinterestinbothacademicandextracurricularactivities.Hisacademicrecordhasconstantlybeenatthetoplevel,whichresultedfromhisdevotiontostudyandintelligentnature.Indealingwithhisfellowstudents,Mr.Huangalwaysshowswillingnesstohelpothersanditwellrespectedbythem.,Ihighlyrecommendhisadmissionandhopethatyouactfavorablyonhisapplication.Ifthereisanythingmoreyouneedtoknowabouthim,pleasedonthesitatetocontactme.Withthebestregards.Sincerelyyours,(signature)XuMingProfessorandDeputyHead(Academic)Dept.ofE.E.ShandongUniversity,写推荐信时，必然会提及被推荐人的品性（Characters）。介绍每个独特的个性用词也十分讲究，下列Characters是一些跨国企业或国外大学所欣赏的形容词:1、Scholasticaptitude（学习方面的才能）aNativeintellectualability（天赋）bImagination（想象力）cCreativity（创造力）dCapacityforanalyticalthinking（分析思考能力）eIntellectualcuriosity;spiritofinquiry（好奇心）fAbilitytoworkindependently（独立学习工作的能力）gMemory（记忆力）hAccuracy（准确性）iMethodology（研究方法）jCapabilityforabstractreasoning（抽象推理的能力）kPotentialasaresearcher（研究的潜力）lPotentialasateacher（教学的潜力）mAbilitytoexpresshisideasorallyandinwriting（口头或文字的表达能力）nCapacity,desireanddeterminationforgoodqualitygraduatework（获得学业成功的能力、愿望与决心）oProbablesuccessasagraduatestudent（作为研究生成功的可能性）,2、Academicperformance（学业上的表现）aBreadthofgeneralknowledge（知识丰富）bKnowledgeofliteratureinhisfield（本专业领域知识）cGradeorachievement（成绩或成就）dIndustry,diligence（勤勉）eParticipationindiscussion（讨论积极）fAcademicmaturity（学业上的成熟）3、Languages（语言能力）aAbilitytospeak,understand,readandwritetheEnglishlanguage（听、说、读、写英文的能力）bAbilitytoreadsignificantliteratureinotherlanguagesthanEnglish（英语以外的语言阅读能力）4、Character（品行）aHonesty;integrity（诚实）bSincerity（诚恳）cSenseofresponsibility（责任感）dCooperation（合作）eEnthusiasm（热诚）fConscientiousness（自觉性）gEthicalandmoralstandards（伦理与道德标准）hReliability;dependability（可靠性）,DearSirorMadam,ItiswithgreatpleasurethatIrecommendmystudentLiMingforthepositionofadministerinyourcompany.IhavebeeninchargeofMr.Lisclasssincetheywerefreshmen,soIknowhimwell.HeisanoutstandinggraduatemajoringinBusinessAdministration.Hehasabroadrangeofinterestinbothacademicandextracurricularactivities.Heiscourteous,sincereandhardworking.Hetookseveralcoursesincomputerscience,whichstrengthenedhisadministrationability.AndalsohisexcellentcommunicationabilityandgoodcommandofEnglishaddalottohismanagerialskills.IbelieveMr.Liseducationandcharacterundoubtedlyqualifyhimtoserveasanadministratorinyourcompany.Irecommendhimwithoutreservationandbelieveyouwillfindhimahelpfulandresponsiblestaffmember.Ifthereisanythingmoreyouneedtoknowabouthim,pleasedonthesitatetocontactme.Sincerelyyours,WangHua,DearProfessorSmith,ItismypleasuretorecommendmystudentMr.WangGangforadmissiontoyourdepartmentforpursuingamasterdegreeinaccounting.IamengagedinaccountingteachingatauniversityinBeijingChina,IenjoymyworkandallofmyChinesestudents,whoaresocleverandfriendly.HoweverMr.WangGangexcelsalmostanyothers.HeisnotonlyoutstandinginthefieldofaccountingbutalsogiftedfortheEnglishlanguage,forheseemstounderstandalmosteverywordIsayinclass.Asconcernashispersonality,Ifindhimhonest,responsible,andcooperative.Ibetyoulllikehimtoo.Irecommendhimenthusiastically.IfyouneedfurtherinformationregardingMr.WangGang,donothesitatetocontactme.Bestregards,Sincerelyyours,Brown,DearSir:WangXinhasbeenworkingonhisstudyinourresearchinstitutesince2000.Hehasacquaintedhimselfwiththisjobinashorttime,whichrequireshighqualification.Duringthepastyearshehasmadeaseriesofacademicachievements,whichhavebeenpublishedinmanyprofessionalmagazinesandnewspapers.Mr.Wangcompletedhisworkindependentlyandhasearnedhighreputationandpopularityamongotherstaffintheresearchinstituteduetohisdiligentandprogressivepersonality.Istronglyrecommendhisadmissionwithoutanyreservation.Sincerelyyours,LiMing,建议信,写作要领:写此类书信是要应收信人的要求针对某一问题提出建议和忠告.虽然写信人与收信人之间极有可能是熟人,甚至是比较好的朋友,但礼貌原则仍然不可忽视.写信人是在提建议,而不是发号施令,所以仍须注意语气的诚恳和委婉.中文模块一:第一部分:表明写作意图;第二部分:就问题提出具体的建议;第三部分:总结建议,还可表示愿意继续为对方提供帮助.,英文模板:DearXiaoWang,YouhaveaskedmeforadviceconcerningwhetheryoushouldstudyEnglishorhistory.(表明相关性)Iwilltrytomakesomeusefulsuggestions.(写作意图)Youmustkeepinmindthatyouruniversityeducationisapreparationforyourfuturecareer.(提出建议)Therefore,yourfirstconsiderationshouldbetomajorinwhatwillenableyoutoearnaliving.ThereisnodoubtthattheEnglishlanguageoffersfarwidercareerchoicesthanhistory,especiallyinanageofglobalization.(建议一)However,itwouldnotbesensibletostudyEnglishonly.Itisadvisabletoabsorb,asmuchknowledgeoutsideyourfieldasyoucanmeettheever-changingsocialneeds.(建议二)Generally,ifyouhaveacleargoalinmind,andmakefulluseofthetimeatcollege,youwillmakeasuccessfulstudent,andasuccessfulprofessionalafteryourgraduation.(总结建议)Ihopethesesuggestionswillbehelpful.AndifIhelpyouinanyotherway,pleaseletmeknow.(表示愿意继续提供帮助)Yoursever,Chenglin,DearXiaoWang,Inyourlastletter,youaskedmeforsomeadviceinchoosingyourprospectivemajor.(表明相关性)IstronglyrecommendDepartmentofElectronicEngineeringofouruniversity.(提出建议)Firstly,asfarasthemajoritselfisconcerned,itisoneofthosefastestdevelopingtechnologicalfieldsthesedays.(原因一)Youknowthatthetwotopicsfrequentlytalkedabouttodayarecomputerandlarge-scaleintegratedcircuits,andthetechnologyofelectronicsplaysanindispensablepartintheimplementationofboth.(展开原因一)Secondly,thisdepartmentofouruniversityenjoysaverygoodreputationintheacademicworld,whereyoucangetafirst-classeducation.(原因二),ThefundamentalqualificationsarethatyoushouldbephysicallyandmentallyhealthyandyouhavetogetanexcellentperformanceintheNationalEntranceExaminations,andthelatterisquitedemanding.(应具备的基本条件)Ithinkitsratherunnecessaryformetoofferyouveryspecificsuggestionsinattendingsuchexams.(指明如何准备)Youhavealreadydevelopedacapacityforcopingwithfiercecompetitions.(原因)Withyour1percentofinspirationand99percentofperspiration,youwillsucceed.(总结建议)Yours,LiMing,常用句型1.表明写作意图的常用句型(1)Iwilltrytomakesomehelpfulsuggestions.(2)Ihopethefollowinginformationwillhelpyouto/behelpfultoyou.(3)Iamwritingthislettertooffermyproposals.2.提出建议和忠告的常用句型(1)Youmustkeepinmindthat(2)Yourfirstconsiderationshouldbe(3)Iwouldsuggest/recommendthat,(4)Istronglysuggestthat(5)Inmyopinion(6)Allevidencelendssupporttotheviewthat(7)Ithink/knowyouwouldliketo/areinterestedin(8)shouldtakeallnecessarymeasuresto,Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:ALettertotheUniversityPresidentabouttheCanteenServiceonCampusYoushouldwriteatleast100words,andbaseyourcom