九年级英语全册Unit10Youresupposedtoshakehands同步作文指导人教新目标版.ppt

Unit10Youresupposedtoshakehands.,写作题目:CustomsinChina,knowmoreaboutChinesecustomsandintroducethemtoforeigners.,Learningaim:,Brainstorm-Tablemannersindifferentcountries.,1.Youresupposedtoeatwithyourhands.,2.Yourenotsupposedtostickyourchopsticksintothefood.,3.Theyoungestpersonisexpectedtostarteatingfirst.,4.Youresupposedtoputyourbreadonthetable.,5.Itsimpolitetouseyourchopstickstohitanemptybowl.,India,China,Korea,France,China,Notes6.Itsimportanttodosth.10.Youshould/shouldntdosth.7.Dontforgettodosth.11.Itspolitetodosth.8.Remembertodosth.12.Youcould/couldntdosth.9.Youdbetterdosth.13.Youdbetternotdosth.,Warmingup,Chinesecustoms,shakehands,lettheoldeatfirst,stickthechopcticksintothefood,pointatanyonewiththechopsticks,makenoise,Makingsentences,Completethesentencesaccordingtothesituations.,WhenyoumeetpeopleforthefirsttimeinChina,you_.Ifthereareolderpeopleatthetable,you_.Instead,you_.It_whileyouareeatingwithchopsticks.You_,either.You_whenyouareeatingdinner.,aresupposedtoshakehands,shouldlettheoldeatfirst,arenotsupposedtostarteatingfirst.,isimpolitetostickyourchopsticksintoyourfood,shouldntpointatanyonewithyourchopsticks,arenotsupposedtomakeanynoise,MindourmannersinChina,Chinaisacountrywithalonghistory,sotherearemanycustoms.Firstly，Secondly,Whatsmore,Besides,IfyouaregoingtoChina,pleasefollowthesecustoms.,Readingforthewritingstructure,阅读SectionB2b文本的第二个段落,提取段落的框架,主题句：细节句：结尾句：,a.b.c.d.,Mybiggestchallengeislearninghowtobehaveatthedinnertable.,Forexample,yourenotsupposedtoput,Anotherexampleisthatyourenotsupposedtoeat,Anotherthingisthatitisimpolitetosay,Also,yourenotsupposedtoput,IhavetosaythatIfinditdifficulttoremembereverythingbutImgradually,Writingtask,你的法国笔友Mark将要到中国来学习交流。他想向你了解一些中国习俗，如见面、餐桌、参加派对等礼仪。请你写一封80词左右的信告诉他在中国如何表现得体。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内。Dear_,YoumustbeexcitedaboutcomingtoChinasoon.LetmegiveyousomesuggestionsaboutChinesecustoms._Haveasafetrip,andIlookforwardtomeetingyousoon!Bestwishes,_,Writingstep1:,构思段落,Topicsentence(atthebeginning)detail1(meetingpeopleforthefirsttime)detail2(howtobehaveatthedinnertabledetail3(goingtoaparty)Conclusion(attheending),detailsaboutcustoms,Thinkofthesentencepatternsyoulearnedtogiveadvice,YouresupposedtoYoureexpectedtoYoushouldYourenotsupposedtoItsimpolite/rudeto,OneimportantthingisthatAnotherexampleisthatAlso,Thereisonemorethingyouneedtoknow,ThinkoftheexpressionsinSectionB1b,2btohelpexpressyourideasclearlyandfluently,Writingstep2:,联想词块,Writing,你的法国笔友，Mark，将要到中国来学习交流。他想向你了解一些中国习俗，如见面、餐桌、参加派对等礼仪。请你写一封80词左右的信告诉他在中国如何表现得体。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内。Dear_,YoumustbeexcitedaboutcomingtoChinasoon.LetmegiveyousomesuggestionsaboutChinesecustoms._Haveasafetrip,andIlookforwardtomeetingyousoon!Bestwishes,_,Dear_,YoumustbeexcitedaboutcomingtoChinasoon.LetmegiveyousomesuggestionsaboutChinesecustoms.InChina,whenyoumeetpeopleforthefirsttime,youreexpectedtoshakehands.Oneimportantthingisthatyoushouldlearnhowtobehaveatthedinnertable.Forexample,youresupposedtolettheoldeatfirstifthereareoldpeopleatthetable.Anotherexampleisthatyourenotsupposedtostickyourchopsticksintoyourfood.Also,itsrudetopointatanyonewithyourchopsticks.Andthereisonemorethingyouneedtoknow.Youshouldntmakeanynoisewhileyouareeating.Ifyougotoaparty,youareexpedtedtobeontime.Althoughthingsherearequitedifferentfromthewaytheyareinyourcountry,Ibelieveyoullgetusedtothem.Haveasafetrip,andIlookforwardtomeetingyousoon!Bestwishes,Yours,Mainbody,ending,beginning,1.确定体材：,2.确定时态:(Tense),Thepresenttense,应用文：E-mail,3.布局谋篇:,Outline,欣赏角度：1.写作基本要求:人称,时态,2.要点齐全,3.结构:开头，正文，结尾,4.好词好句。,注意：（作文通用修改字符：优美句子；漏词；错处：；删除；语法错误G,人称错误P，时态错误T）,互评,请交换习作互相欣赏，用红笔划出对方的亮点,并对不足的地方进行适当修改。你能给同学什么建议，使得对方的习作更好呢？根据worksheet上的评