W2-3(饼状图作业分析).ppt

IELTSPreparationCourse,Writingmodule,REVIEWFORTIME,1.消磨时间2.诱人的3.上瘾的4.自控5.逃课6.辍学7.学习表现,8.不成熟的9.沉迷于10.占用11.生产力12.效率13.制止,LINECHART饼状图,描写饼状图只需要记住以下三点：总体与部分的关系部分与部分的关系比较多饼之间（多饼图）,Assignment,Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.ThegraphbelowshowthechangesinthemaritalstatusofCanadiansaged15andoverin1901and1996.Writareportforauniversitylecturerdescribingtheinformationonthegraph.Youshouldwriteatleast150words.,Problem1,Tense时态1901或者1996年统计的数据用什么时态？Badexample:“Accordingthepiechart,marriedwhichis52.1%isthemostpopularamongthemaritalstatusin1901.”,Problem2,Subject主语到底谁是主语？Married,Divorced等等是adj.可以做主语么？,BadExample,“Accordingthepiechart,marriedwhichis52.1%isthemostpopularamongthemaritalstatusin1901.”改：Accordingtothepiechart,themarriedCanadians,whichaccountedfor52.1%,occupiedthemostproportionamongallkindsofmaritalstatusin1901.,Problem3,VocabularyVariety能否不只用accountfor表达饼状图占据比例的所有说法？,BadExample,“In1901and1996,marriedCanadiansaccountedformorethan50%.In1901,singleCanadiansaccountedfor41%anddivorcedpeopleaccountedfor0.5%.Butin1996,separatedpeopleandcommon-lawpeopleaccountedfor2.6%and8%respectively.”可替代词：RepresentMakeupOccupyConstitute,Problem4,多图题请指出是从那副图得到的以下信息如：二饼题。可用theleftchart和therightchart表明是描写哪副图的具体情况Badexample:“Accordingtothepiechart,marriedwhichwas52.1%.”两张图，这样的写法并不明显,Problem5,在IELTSWriting中不要使用缩写Badexample:“Itsdividedintofourtypesasfollows:”一定要写成：Itwasdividedintofourtypesasfollows:”,Problem6,切记不要主观，尽量避免I，we这样的提法。Badexample:“Nowfromthetwographs，wecanclearlyknowthat”改成：“Nowfromtheabovetwographs,itcanbeclearlyshownthat”,Problem7,两饼之间对比不够，基本没有写出变化和倍数关系。Goodexamplefrom贾宇光“Itshouldbenotedthatthefigureofdivorcedpeoplein1996wasover100timesasmuchasthatin1901.”,Problem8,Wordcount依然有人的作