《Scott人物描写》PPT课件.ppt

ScottBasicWritingSeries,基础写作之一,Characterdescription,基础写作简释学会信息整理：保证信息点的完整性;每个信息块（句子）必须具有：准确性；合适性/得体性；正确性基础上的复杂程度。组词造句：注意句子的语法成分和句子结构的合理性连句成篇：使用合适的方法（如过渡词等）使五个句子形成连贯的文段。学会分析句与句之间的关系。,审题的步骤是什么？Findoutthetopic,、6、,文体writingstyle,主体时态maintense,人称person,信息点整合integration,不要打草稿，但应有提纲outline,（有否）标题topicortitle,人物简介的一般步骤：Givetherightorder,()教育：education()外貌性格appearance,character()生平bigeventsinhisorherlife(inorderoftime)()评估evaluation/assessment()概况age,sex,birth-place,background,概,貌,育,平,估,A.概况:【译】钟南山1941年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一1)BorninGuangzhouin1941,ZhongNanshanisoneofthegreatestdoctorsinChina.2)ZhongNanshan,oneofthegreatestdoctorsinChina,wasborninGuangzhouin1941.B.外貌,性格:【译】我的历史老师是个漂亮女人，她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发,*语法，句法高分tips:,尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁、通顺,Myhistoryteacherisabeautifulwomanwithtwobigeyesandlonghair.,巧用with复合结构做定语,C.教育经历：1）MajoringinScience,hegraduatedfromafamousUniversityinthenorthandafter4years,hewentabroadforfurtherstudies.2）GraduatingfromtheDepartmentofEnglishofZhongshanUniversity,shewentonfurthereducationandreceivedadoctorsdegree.D生平：1）Notonlyisheinterestedinscience,butalsohehasagiftformusic.2）Hesetanewworldrecordofswimming,whichwonagoldmedalforChinaTeam.,注意尽量用非谓语动词,使文章精炼,尽量用复合句倒装、非限定定语从句等,润色文章,E评估：1）LeiFengsetusagoodexample,soallthepeoplespokehighlyofhimandallrespectedhim.2）HeisoneofthegreatestnovelistsinChinaandwillbealwaysrememberedasanoutstandingman.3）LiShizhenmadegreatcontributionstomedicalliterature.,注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组,JustguessthemanDescribedinthefollowingsentences,Characterintroduction,Bornonthe18thofJanuary,1979inTaiwan,hewasraisedbyhismotherandwasshyandquietduringhischildhood.Showinginterestinmusic,hebeganlearningtoplaythepianoattheageof3.Whenhisfirstalbumwasreleasedin2000,hegottheworldsattention.Hispopularitysky-rocketed(急速上升),andhehasreceivedmanyawardsforhissongs.HisownuniqueChineseRpostdoctoralfellow,5.他一生致力于社会科学(sociology)研究，促使(advance)中国农村经济发展。HedevotedhimselftotheresearchonsociologyandadvancedthedevelopmentofChinasruraleconomy.,致力于:bededicatedto;applyoneselfto;commitoneselfto;bendoneselfto;dedicateoneslifeto;hammerat;takeupwith;putonesheartinto,费孝通是我国著名的社会学家和社会活动家。请根据下文提示，用英文写一篇短文介绍一下费孝通先生。,参考词汇：社会学家sociologist;社会活动家socialactivist【写作要求】使用5个句子表达全部所给的内容，并组织成连贯的短文。,HowdoyoudotheBasicWriting?,Thesuggestedsteps:,1.审题:确定文体、人称和时态,2.整合信息:把所有内容整合成5句,3.翻译句子：考虑语法结构,4.连句成篇,5.检查,费孝通是我国著名的社会学家和社会活动家。请根据下文提示，用英文写一篇短文介绍一下费孝通先生。,参考词汇：社会学家sociologist;社会活动家socialactivist【写作要求】使用5个句子表达全部所给的内容，并组织成连贯的短文。,检查(Howtocorrect?),1、是否恰好五句话？、是否每句都含必要信息？、可否自由发挥？、pants纠错原则：1)pattern2)agreement3)number4)tense5)spelling.,BornintoarichfamilyonNovember2,1910,FeiXiaotong,afamousChinesesociologistandsocialactivist,passedawayduetodiseaseinBeijingonApril24,2005.Whengoingtocollege,hefirstchosetostudymedicinebutthenchangedhismind.Between1930and1935,hestudiedinTsinghuaUniversityandthenwenttoEnglandforfurthereducation，wherehereceivedhisdoctorsdegree.After1938,heoncetaughtinTsinghuaUniversityandPekingUniversity.Fei,whostudiedhardallhiswholelife,devotedhimselftotheresearchonsociologyandadvancedthedevelopmentofChinasruraleconomy.,1.仿写：假如你叫白云，从广告上得知深圳某公司需要工程师。写信应聘。要求内容包含如下要点。(1)姓名：白云，出生于深圳市福田区，年龄27岁。(2)2004年毕业于SZSY,上中山大学,后留学英国伦敦大学。(3)2011年数学方面成果显著，获博士学位。(4)英国一家公司想用高薪聘用他，但拒绝了。(5)为了报效祖国，于2013年毅然回国。（6）有数学天赋。注意：1）介绍必须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。文章首位已经给出，不算字数。写作要求只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。评分标准句子结构的准确性、连贯性与复杂性，信息内容的完整性。,牛刀小试；Nowcomesyourtern!,DearSir,Howdoyoudo?Throughthead.Iknowyourcompanyneedsanengineer.Iwouldliketohavethisjob.Nowletmeintroducemyselftoyou.Iwillappreciateitverymuchifyouwouldgivemetheopportunity.Thankyouforyourconsideration.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Sincerelyyours,BaiYun,BorninFutianDistrict,Shenzhen(City),ImBaiYun,aged27.IwasadmittedtoZhongshanUniversityafterIgraduatedfromSZSYin2004andthenwassenttoLondonUniversityintheUK.Throughhardworkfor4years,Iachievedextraordinaryachievementonmathsbecauseofmygiftformathsandreceivedadoctorsdegree.ABritishcompanytriedhardtoinvitemewithagoodofferofsalary,butIrefusedit.WiththepurposeofdevotingmyselftoourChina,Icamebackthisyearwithoutanyhesitation/delayin2013.,2.请根据以下信息写一篇介绍霍英东的文章.,牛刀小试:Nowcomesyourturn!,InMay1923,DrHuoYingdongwasbornfromapoorfamilyinHongKong.Itwasattheageoftenthathisfatherdied.After1955,hewasengagedinarchitecture,shipping,petroleumandsoonbecameafamouspersonathomeandabroad.Eversincethebeginningofthereformandopenpolicy,hehastotallydonatedover10billiondollarstosponsoreducation,culture,sports,andpublicwelfareinMainland.Hehasmadegreatcontributionstoconstructingandbenefitingourcountry,whichmakeshimaMovingChinaHero.,3.例文：假如你叫李明，你的美国朋友布鲁斯开始学习中国文学，来信询问鲁迅其人及作品。你回信介绍鲁迅，内容如下（1）鲁迅，原名周树人，浙江绍兴人（2）为了国家，弃医从文。（3）著名的作家，思想家，而且还是中国现代文学的开创者。（4）小说被译成多种文字，并被制成电影，如阿Q正传、祝福这两部影片。（5）一些作品还被选入了中学和大学课本。参考词汇：阿Q正传：TheTrueStoryofAHQ祝福：TheNewYearsSacrifice注意：1）介绍必须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。写作要求只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。文章首尾已给出，不算字数。评分标准句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性。,牛刀小试:Nowcomesyourturn!,DearBruce,IwasgladtoknowyoubegantostudyChineseliterature.NowletmetellyousomethingaboutLuXun._.SinceyouarelearningChineseliteratures,IthinkreadingLuXunsnovelswillhelpyoutoknowmoreaboutit.Yours,LiMing,Findoutthegoodsentencesinthepossibleversionandrememberthemwithyourpartner.,DearBruce,IwasgladtoknowyoubegantostudyChineseliterature.NowletmetellyousomethingaboutLuXun.BorninShaoxing,ZhejiangProvince,LuXunwiththereal/original/formernameZhouShurenabandonedthestudyofmedicinebecausehethoughthecouldchangesocietymorethroughwriting.NotonlywasLuXunawell-knownChinesewriter,athinker,andatranslator,butalsothefatherofmodernChineseliterature.Hisnovelshavebeentr