九年级英语全册Unit2Ithinkthatmooncakesaredelicious同步作文指导人教新目标版.ppt

Unit2Ithinkthatmooncakesaredelicious!,写作题目：MyfavoriteChinesefestival,LearningAim,WriteaboutyourfavoriteChinesefestival.,Whatsthestoryabout?,Lookatthepicturesandsaywhatfestivalstheyare.,探究1：Brainstorm(头脑风暴)WhatChinesefestivalsdoyouknow?(你知道有哪些中国节日吗？),FreeTalk,TheDragonBoatFestival,TheMid-AutumnFestival,TheSpringFestival,TheLanternFestival,Letsmakealist!,SpringFestival,LanternFestival,DragonBoatFestival,Mid-AutumnFestival,inJanuaryorFebruary,onthe15thofthefirstlunarmonth,onthe5thofthefifthlunarmonth,inSeptemberorOctober,Whenwetalkaboutafestival,wecantalkabout,Drawanoutlineforwriting,beginning,nameofthefestival,Whenisitcelebrated?,EveryyearthereisaSpringFestivalinChina.,Itiscelebratedonthefifteenthdayofthefirstlunarmonthoftheyear.,Itiscelebratedin/on,ItisatraditionalChinesefestivalcalled,Mid-AutumnFestivalisoneofthemostpopularfestivalsinChina.,body,Howdopeoplecelebrateit?,thingstoeat,thingstodo,dumplings,zongzi,tangyuan,mooncakes,noodles,cleanthehouses,makezongzi,havedragonboatraces,admirethemoon,makelanterns,guessriddles,gettogether,givebestwishes,sharemooncakeswithrelatives,Whatdoesitcelebrate?,Itcelebratesthebeginningofnewyear.,ThisfestivalisinmemoryofQuYuan,oneofthegreatestChinesepoets.,ending,Whatdoyouthinkofthefestival?,Whydoyoulikeitsomuch?,Ithinkitisfunandexciting.,Iusuallyhaveagreattimeduringthisfestivalbecauseitmakesmerelaxed.,IlikethefestivalverymuchbecauseIcangettogetherandsharehappinesswithmyfamilies.,NotonlycanIspendmoretimewithmyfamilies,butIgetmuchluckymoney.,MyfavoriteChinesefestivalMyfavoriteChinesefestivalistheMid-AutumnFestival.TheMid-AutumnFestivalisoneofthetraditionalChinesefestivals,itisoftencelebratedinSeptemberorOctober.Duringthefestival,familymembersgettogetherandeatmooncakes.Therearemanykindsofdeliciousmooncakes.OntheeveningoftheMid-AutumnFestival,peoplecanenjoythefullmooninthedarksky.IlikeMid-AutumnFestivalbecauseitmakesmehappy.,Writing,在这么多的中国传统节日当中，你最喜欢哪一个？请你从中选取你最喜爱的一个节日,以”MyfavoriteChinesetraditionalfestival”为题写一篇80词左右的说明文。,MyfavoriteChinesefestivalisItiscelebratedin/onDuringthisfestival,peopleItsmyfavoritefestivalbecauseItmakesmefeel,Thefollowingexpressionscanhelpyou:,MyfavoriteChinesefestival,_,Writing,开声朗读自己的文章，并从结构、人称、时态、字数、拼写、大小写、标点符号等方面进行自我修正。,Task1,自我欣赏与修正,同伴互赏,欣赏角度：写作基本要求:人称,时态；2.要点齐全；3.结构:开头，正文，结尾；4.好词好句。,Task2,欣赏与修正请交换习作欣赏，用红笔划出对方的亮点词、句,并运用改错符号找出不足，进行适当修改。评分以满分15分为标准，给同伴的习作打分。点评由亮点欣赏到不足的修正（篇章结构分析-细节点评),集体赏析，共同进步,Task3,WeareChines